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greydoran


Not dead yet.

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Soarin has spend a decade and a half with the Wonderbolts. His career is the stuff of legends, breaking dozens of records and ensuring his place in flight history. A generation of mares have grown up drooling over his picture in glossy sports magazines.
But all good things must come to an end, and for Soarin, his flying career ends in a rather big way.

Contains male weight gain, light bondage, force feeding, farting, a female feeder, and some really dubious DIY.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )
whyyy #3 · Oct 1st, 2016 · · 1 ·

Why the hell is the tag romance:rainbowlaugh:

7608070 It's kind of a romance.

Eww. No. No. Just...why?

Well I for one liked this since it compared two of my favorite things.

Good enough lol

Gave up kinda quickly there, Soarin.

I thought it was good. But then I like this sort of thing. One thing I think I should mention is you laid on the negative points a little thick without enough 'positive' reinforcement. Maybe some more stuff with Dash rubbing his belly, being encouraging, telling him she likes stallions like that or something. More positives to balance Sorins initial negative thoughts is all.
Another, and this is more personal opinion than anything, maybe an epilogue scene of Sorin and Dash returning to the Wonderbolts to turn in his retirement and everyone seeing how large Sorin has become and him feeling proud of it.
Just a suggestion. Either way nice story. :twilightsmile:

7615159 You're entirely right. I rushed a bit with this story, and it shows. I guess I know how I'll be spending my evening.

I think it was good.

Farting fetish...I see the author is a kudzuhaikou follower.

Lmao why the hell does this have a lot of dislikes

I skipped all the parts amd read the end and I am fucking pissed you made Soarin fat like why just why he's my favorite pony and I am offended. Dislike.

You know, if she wanted to have whatever kind of thing with him, she could always just ask him out. I know that stuff like this is what she likes but it is not that hot. And I felt bad for Soarin the whole time.

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