Shining's Return to the Brood 2

MShining's Return to the Brood 3: Unholy Matrimony
MLP: FiM
Dark
Tragedy
Porn
With the help of her brainwashed Prince, Queen Chrysalis is finally able to take over the Crystal Empire without mercy. And as for Princess Cadance, she could only watch as her former husband subjects her to his new bond with the Changeling Queen~
Sex
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Cadance
Shining Armor
Chrysalis
Crystal Ponies
Sunburst
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Mix-up #1 · May 12th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter Four: A Gift for the Queen ·

Well this was a great read, I can'T wait to see what happen next, and how will the Crystal Empire will look like when Cadence come back from the princess Summons.

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #2 · May 13th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter Four: A Gift for the Queen ·

Bottomless

Summerset Banjo

Summerset Banjo #3 · May 14th, 2019 · 3 · · Chapter Four: A Gift for the Queen ·

Well I really liked this sequel. the writing and lewd scenes are very well done and so were a lot of the interactions between Chrysalis and Shining Armor. He certainly seems to enjoy his new lot in life a lot. The Crystal Empire certainly seems doomed and I look forward to seeing that happened.

I will say though that some of the dialogue did feel a bit repetitive with Armor and Chrysalis, though it could be explained that she is just trying to reinforce her brainwashing on him and further exert her control still, it could've been changed up more.

I hope we get to see the promised egg-stuffing action in Shining's bedroom. Maybe we can get some slice of life of Broodstallions tending to and laying their Queen's eggs sometime. Maybe Chrysalis will further warp Shinings mind and maybe modify his body to better carry her brood.

I do wonder what Chrysalis plans on doing with both Cadence and Flurry. maybe harvest Cadence for love and maybe brainwash/groom the alicorn child to serve the hive like her dad? It would be interesting seeing what this Enslaved Shining would do if he was put in the position of raising Flurry alongside changeling grubs he birthed.

sparks117

sparks117 #4 · May 15th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter Three: The Induction Process ·

Holy crap I'm gonna be reading Sunburst's part again, that was HOT

Slipstream95

Slipstream95 #5 · Jul 7th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter Four: A Gift for the Queen ·

Wow, this was such a great story, I really enjoyed chapter 3 when they finally started getting into it, Sunburst and Shining are completely helpless. And then I found chapter 4 rather amusing, seems like laying eggs in all the guards are a chore rather then pleasurable. And Chryssi seems genuinely happy that shining armor would do that for her, is there an actual relationship between the 2? Maybe? Hey, I can dream, ok...

Icy_blue_orchid

Icy_blue_orchid #6 · Nov 14th, 2020 · · · Chapter Four: A Gift for the Queen ·

As soon as Shining opened up the rear door of the barracks that lead to the infirmary, his ears twitched in delight as he heard the enamored moans of his final soldier from the distance. He wasn’t sure how Chrysalis was able to get everyone in the Crystal Guard inducted without passing out or running out of eggs, but he smiled to himself as he marveled at how dedicated their Queen really was. Even after helping to assist all of his soldiers in understanding their new place, and also handing out maps to possible nesting spots for their new leader’s brood, Shining was grateful that Sunburst’s plan succeeded without anypony being the wiser. He knew that the actual invasion of the Crystal Empire might be trickier, but he was willing to trust both of them when it came to whatever might happen next.

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