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fallen starr


How can I be home and still feel out of place.

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I mean, I could ask Twilight out. I know she would say yes, and we would both be oh so happy, but...it's scary. I think we're in a good place right now, right? We both know our feelings and there isn't a reason to rush on them. Right? Oh, Fluttershy, get it together. It can't be that hard.

Right?

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Comments ( 32 )

7610725 I mean, I'm up for answering what I can.

I just love that cover art:heart:

7610858 it is quite nice isn't it?

Edit: it has since changed,

ERMAGERD TWISHY!!!

Maybe it's the couple of glasses of wine talking, but this a sweet little story that just needs little extra nudge in the outright shipping direction. :heart: your writing as always

Nice start. IMHO TwiShy is a ship that works best when the two of them kind of creep towards their relationship slowly; one step forward, a half step back. Where RariLight is best when the two of them have long conversations, TwiShy is best when punctuated by moments of the two of them just being together. Shy helps Twi be calmer. Twi helps Shy be braver. And they both ultimately end up with cuddles, lot of cuddles. :twilightsmile: :yay:

7611202 Ah well, we cant have outright shipping yet. That's all for later.

7611218 Forgive me, I mistook this for a one shot. Couple of drinks and all! :twilightsheepish:

7611216 I have only just began to really think about this ship. It sorta happened as a happy accident, as it were, so I'm still figuring some stuff out, but those are excellent points.

Love it so far.

A very nice story, Twelve. Twishy is a pairing that needs some more love, and some nice fluff is just perfect for that~

7611306 thank you!

7611665 fluff is always nice.

Pretty cute so far. Keep it up! :coolphoto:

You know, Twilight, usually it's considered good form to ensure the other half is aware they're in a relationship with you.

Awww! :fluttershysad:
I hope Twilight tells her soon.

7612423 Thank you!

7612808 who needs formalities, really.

7612965 We shall see, hopefully tomorrow.

7613011
It's only a formality if Fluttershy is a mind reader. :eeyup:

Nooo! Poor Fluttershy :<

Ohhhh...that was just way to sweet! Just a little misunderstanding and some uncertainty about how Twilight truly felt.

And now... Just some time to 'talk'. Ah, the language of love! So simple but so complicated!

Nicely done!

I'm surprised that Fluttershy is so willing to talk right away.

7614592 yes, they just needed a little talk. And then maybe more talking. Lots of lips involved, at any rate

7614690 ah, she has to have some way to express her happiness to Twilight.

7612423 thanks! If you get the chance, I'd love to see what you think about the rest of you ever get a chance

7612808 It's also usually a good idea to clarify information gained through eavesdropping, before letting your doubts and insecurities paint your personal worst case scenario.

These two following chapters are really nice. I don't see much that I can be entirely critical on, and it's putting a smile on my face. Onwards!

(Sorry for the late reply, getting my three one-shots ready for publication tomorrow)

I love twishy! Thank you for loving twishy too! The writing from Fluttershy's perspective is good.

A happy resolution! Adoracute! :heart:

That last line though...lewd. :twilightblush:

The silence between the three of us roared

I liked this line in particular. Much oxymoron.

7631449 thank you! Also, yeah, I really liked that line. Although I think everyone is getting a little mixed up by what I mean at the main end, it is simply kisses.

this story is honestly really good, i love it a lot!! :pinkiehappy: that said, i do think the last chapter seemed very rushed near the ending. the majority of this fic had very nice pacing and was incredibly in character, but the ball was dropped too soon there... :fluttershyouch:

A super cute story that made me shed a little liquid pride :fluttercry:.

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