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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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You have my interest...

Based on that new anime that showed up?

7514223 No, as most of this was written a few months back.
7514232 Is that referencing something in the story?

7514236 I think it's the comic mentioned in the story description, the "Note by the authors: This comic has sex in it", which I'm also curious about.

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This was going to orginally going to have a comic made to it... but that project is up in the air- The other Author:heart:

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7514232 Whoops! Sorry, that's just my own screw up, and will be changed when I can.

Feels like this will be a less political-intrigue filled take on Her Knight in Faded Armor's central concept. Curious to see how it plays out!

Umm, the pizza bites are in the refrigerator over there,

(in dark and brooding voice) "its in the refrigerator"

Story got featured, can someone tell the author

someone get Doccular

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Probably with more anthro and pr0n too. :raritywink:


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y u do dis to me

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We are aware thank you!- Other Author

7516457 I don't tend to put a 'Featured XX/XX/XXXX sort of thing on my stories, and I'd seen this before. Than you for the concern though. :twilightsmile:

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A Doccular is the author of the story Her Knight in Faded Armor. A LunaMash romance adventure that's been going on for like, a year now.

7516586 Hitler's lesser known second book about his love of knitting.

7516594 Ah. I thought that might have ended up being slightly the case. If it helps, I have never read the story, and I don't know if Foals has, so similarities are simply due to incident, rather than anything else.

Well that went from zero to Princest awfully fast.

7516630 If I co-write something with Foals, and ANY princess gets within a hundred feet of each other, expect a LOT of princest.

A very lovely and very enduring story well worth reading it at least three more times.

7516281 Haha! The best voice line!

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Man, I thought that mention from the guard that Celestia went into a closet with a rope ten minutes ago was just a really dark joke, then BAM!

Also, I'd reread that scene @ author. When she leaves her room, entering abrupt conversation is a massive cutoff. I'd add a description there, as well as entering into Celestia's, uh, closet?

its about damn time luna found herself a stallion in button. he would be good for her. cant wait for more chapters:pinkiehappy:

Hmmmm... A story featuring Button Mash, and it doesn't have Sweetie Belle in it as his significant other.. . Okay, already a little out of place for me, but I can roll with it.

Woah, woah, woah, woah... The overused trope of Celestia and Twilight?! Seriously?!

And... Celestia is pulling a Lake Placid on her, nice, reeeeaaaaalll classy Celly, real classy.

Okay, so here's the good, the bad, and the holy crap.

So, naturally, I'm not a person that likes Celestia and Twilight together. Nothing personal, but I'm not a big fan of the teacher nailing the student thing. I'm just not. I can see Twilight being bi, which would almost be a given for the massive disproportionate number of mares to stallions, but I wouldn't see her with Celestia specifically.

Not a big digger of the incest thing either. I get that it's a fairly common trope, and I know that in reality it has happened in some royal families back in the day.

And then there's no Sweetie Belle with Button, but all of that said.... Here's the awesome.

Gamer Luna is always an awesome.

Seeing Button Mash being the kind of man/stallion that certainly should get the girl is a huge plus.

Luna's hurt, confusion, and feelings toward both her sister, and her best friend, are easily understandable and realistic.

Again, despite the things I'm normally not into I'm invested enough in this to find out how it ends. Be proud, you got a Button/Belle shipper to follow a different shipping for Button. That's some grade A Writing there.

7516630 I had to sit up and get closer to the screen to find out what the hell went down.

7517551 ...*begins wondering if I can somehow get you to become a Diamondmasher*

Yak Dew? Para-sprite? I hope you're proud.

Huh, a clop fiction that has two dimensional characters that don't simply exist for sex? I'm impressed, this is one of the few good fanfics I've read in a long time.

7517632 Ah, thank you. We try to do our best.

Button and Luna!?
This 'oughta be interesting...


Note by the authors: This story has sex in it, and at times it it used for more traditional means. However, by no means is it the main element of the concept. This is not a sexy, smooth romance between the two main characters, and their numerous issues, of age, worth, and place in the world, are the forefront of this story. As such, if you just want something sexy, go elsewhere. If you want something just happy, I kind of have to say the same to you unfortunately.

HA! GOOD ONE. This is literally nothing but clop. A bad example of it, too.

7517698 Yeah... admittedly, these chapters were made almost four months prior to the two we made shortly before publishing this. However, those two, especially the sixth, is why we added the warning. On top of that, while yes, there is a good bit of sexualization and such here, would you actually say this is just for clop? That people are just bouncing on top of each other? Yes, there is sex here, but most of it amplifies other story elements already there, such as the relationship between Luna and Celestia, Button's want for Luna, his guilt for Luna, and such like that.

But, it's also your opinion, and if it's not your cup of tea, than that's fine too.

to be honest I thought it would be Human x Luna right here, since you had the anthro and the Human tag, and I was a bit dissapointed to find out it was only Button.
However Button itself isn't a bad character and the story seems nice according to the parts I had read.

7517779 I'm sorry, but there's no human tag here. Just anthro.

7517787 aaah yes sorry, I'm not really awake yet, but I kind of got the idea that it had to be a Human.

7517790 Ah, I can get being tired. However, unless there is a DAMN good reason for me to use human OCs, which has happened once I think, I will usually use EqG at most.

7517554 yeah, having so little context realy doesnt help trying to piece everything together.

A story that says it's not focusing on sex yet in the very first chapter Luna's eating Celestia out? Yeah... I'll pass on this one. Thought this was something decent when it turns out to be nothing special at all.

Interesting story, will read more when it gets updated.

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What relationship between Celestia and Luna? 90% of the words involving those two is sex. With Button? Moves to sexual thoughts within a few paragraphs. Ahem, sorry, within the second sentence.

Theres no "amplifying" here. A story that doesnt focus on sex will not have kinky unexplained incest before chapter ONE is halfway through.

*reads descriptuon*
"Not a sexy story"
*opens first chapter*
*is assaulted with incestual clip almost inneadiately*

Sure author, sure it's not a sexy story.

The kind of vibe I'm getting from the fact that she threw the tiara is that she doesn't want to be royalty anymore, I don't know but that's what I'm getting.

As such, if you just want something sexy, go elsewhere. If you want something just happy, I kind of have to say the same to you unfortunately

Then why should I read this? :raritydespair:

Hmm, this chapter even goes further in proving my theory that Luna doesn't want to be royalty anymore, and just a regular mare, interesting.

... No words needed.

7518538 Because if you dont, the Princess of the Night will gobble you up.

Hey, great story! Not enough GamerLuna/Button Mash stories out there. Keep up the great work!

7517709 You may want to update the description. But hey, I came for the "plot" (Hah!) and stayed for the plot :trollestia:
All in all, 4/5 :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

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