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This was great! I can't wait to see the sequel!
Decent. Changing in writing styles was a tad confusing personally.
7455414 I agree. It's a great little idea, but the way it's presented made it sort of tough to get through certain sections.
Damn is that hot.
7455661 Man it's weird seeing your username without the purple box
Would've preferred if it stuck to one POV style the whole way through.
As for the fic itself, it felt like I was reading a fic back from the site I frequented before Fimfiction, only with the overall writing quality being a lot more coherent.
8/10 "It's not awful."
—IGN
I... immensely enjoyed this.
More than I thought I would.
Well that was... Different. That's the best word I can come up with.
lets get jazzy in here
...but yeah this was okay
Are you fucking kidding me?
LET'S DO THIS!
I like this. :3
Oooo. I like this.
It's not bad... but it could be much better. The concept is great, but the execution is a little fast, and the sex scene definitely way too short. Not sure what Sunset's running from, but I'm sure it'll catch up to her.
This was intresting that for sure.
I realy liked it.
Sunset having a Spiritual Sex Partner in Bartholomew and that session in the shower gave me major vibes of those scenes with Tori Spelling and that ghost in Scary Movie 2. Only difference being that Bartholomew didn't make it a one night stand like that ghost did in that film. Interesting story.
And then Sunset suffers from a phantom pregnancy.
7457657 Didn't the ghost get raped rather than the other way around?
On another note, I demand to see a sequel to this fic. Something post Sunset reformation.
Rarity: yelps as her breasts are grabbed What just copped a feel?!
Sunset: Bartholomew. My... boyfriend. My ghost boyfriend.
7457981
Not really. He sleep-molested her into waking up to have sex with him. But after the session, he quickly left afterwards when she expressed interest in becoming his wife. You could argue that the rape went the other way around since it was later claimed by the ghost that Spelling gave him "Crabs". The scene I think you're referring to about the "rape being the other way around" would go to that scene with Shawn Waynes getting attacked by that toy clown and turning the tables on the clown and raping him instead.
Ghost sex is best sex.
7458015 Ah good old scary movie 2
What I thought this would be.
There is no way this wasn't in some small way inspired by Cordelia Chase and Phantom Dennis from Angel.
7460196 I have no idea what you're talking about, other than maybe knowing the show name. Sorry.
7460248 Cordelia buys a house that ends up being haunted by a benevolent ghost, and later in the show it's implied they have a sexual relationship.
I thought it was going all scary movie on us.
I was listening to a Steven Universe song called "Do It For Her" as I read the description. Then I read the "Ghost Fucking" thing just as the verse that said "But that doesn't mean you're not prepared to try." sounded.
I came up with about thirty dirty jokes in three seconds and started laughing like an idiot for about a minute.
I was... really confused, then really aroused. 10/10 would read a sequel.
7461397 The "like comment" feature is heavily underrated on this website.
400+ likes, 4k+ views, and 30+ comments on a story about ghost sex in the bathroom... and no one has mentioned The Entity?
Internet, I am disappoint,
7470731 *grins* Someone finally gets what the commissioner was looking for.
7470736
Certainly turned out better for Sunset than it did for Carla Moran,
7461397 please share these jokes with us. the internet demands it.
I;m not the only one a little confused by this, right? why the tear? Who was he replacing? what did Sunset (?) do? So far, my only guess is something about Twilight, but maybe it will be cleared up in the sequel.
7474554 She's thinking about her betrayal of Princess Celestia. This story takes place a year after Sunset's arrival in the human world, but before the first Equestria Girls movie.
7474851 huh. I didn't notice that. I thought it was after the first movie or something
7474543 They are god-awful, and I only remember two, but alright.
Guess she's prepared to try!
Oh, she'll do it for him, all right.
Absolutely love it. Keep going.
lol
Casper the Pervy Ghost. I love it.
Most excellent.
This was great!! Sequel Please!