I'm not one to write much, I make reviews for cartoons on Youtube, but I do like to write from time to time, even if my grammar might be a little off.
When a mysterious looking creature falls through the Mirror, Twilight and her friends attempt to befriend this being, but it doesn't seem like being friends is what this creature wants. It wants to make an offer with Twilight, an offer she can't refuse!
Page generated in 0.07 seconds
Total duration
1,087 users online
1,541,597 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Will Bill be as evil in this story as he is in the actual show?
7509435 Honestly, I don't want to spoil anything for future chapters but yes. This story is really what's going to lead into a much bigger 4-series crossover I have planned between MLP, Steven Universe, Gravity Falls and Star Vs The Forces Of Evil.
I'm a little sad that Spike and Starlight died, but I like how you stayed close to Bill's character. Usually when I read fanfics about villains coming to Equestria, the writers tend to change them a little and give them humanizing traits. Some bad guys, like Bill, are too far gone and have no chance at redemption. So I admire how you stay true to the original character.
7564210 Thanks!