This story is a sequel to Fanning Our Flames
The Black Knight, an ancient myth with many rumors surrounding it. Some claim he was trained by Nightmare Moon herself as her most powerful servant, others say he is human super soldier created to slay Princess Celestia, some even speak of him as a personification of death. Nevertheless, many ponies have reported sightings of this being throughout history, most of which never amounted to anything.
However, only several months after the return of Nightmare Moon, the fabled knight shows up at the doorsteps of Canterlot Castle for reasons unknown.
And the ponies of Equestria soon discover that the myths associated with him could not be any more wrong...
Part of the Shimmerverse
Recommend reading A Different Sunset first for better understanding
Interesting. Have a follow, favorite, and the like!
Sir, you have my attention!
Great work on this chapter. I hope we find out more about where the Knight came from. Also the part where Chef was talking Luna was very deep.
And last I notice this,
I think you meant,
This is gunny be FUN
This is gonna be good.
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Wrong franchise :3
Am liking it so far and it is set in my favorite AU. Going to like this.
i'd hardly think Lancelot would fall to such anarchistic intentions, the guy may have screwed up with genivere but he hardly abandoned his honor. still I think the joke here is going to be solar power has no hold over him, just a geuss.
Oh shit, is that the Pursuer?
I guess this is set in some specific AU of the fandom, and I write this as someone unfamiliar with it, this thing is shit on a neon lemur confusing. There are so many names and established positions and titles and absolutely none of it is familiar or makes any sense. Again I am not familiar with the AU you have set this in, but I figured I would share from the perspective of someone who doesn't already know all the established backstory. So to that effect, this story is absolutely impenetrable to someone who is unfamiliar with this specific AU.
Yep, it's the Pursuer.
Whelp got no idea what is going on really, like the guy below said. Unless someone is already familiar with this AU it is nigh impossible to figure out what is going on. So with that I think I shall stop trying for now, still have fun with your story. Though I would advise maybe putting a link to the story that establishes all these titles, names, and so forth in your description.
Such as `it is advisable to read -insert story title here- first before reading this`, just a suggestion of course.
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The fact that he killed several of his fellow guards just to get to her shows just how desperate/in love he was. If he can do that....
Plus there is the fact he is listed as Lawful Neutral as a Saber, and Lawful Mad as Beserker
This story really needs an editor
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I let Evo look at it, but he never seems to make any corrections or suggestion(which is odd considering this is his storyverse) So I just edit it to the best of my abilities
7645216 ok then, find another editor
7645216 Oh, sorry about that. Midterms hit me rather hard so I glossed over it. I won't make that same mistake again.
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All is forgiven, I feel better knowing you do at least something when looking over these chapters
7649471 well that changes everything
Ah Gilgamesh.
7714914 Same.
7717180 That means the black knight would probably be Lancelot if I remember my fate zero lore. Probably not as a berserker though.
I'm getting a warhammer 40k vibe from this fic'... On to the next chapter!
7717379 Well Scheiße.
7719088 Do my musings count as spoilers then? Should I edit in the spoiler tags for a series that's three years old?
Holy crap, this knight beat Celestia!
Thanks for the update!
Oh shit.
Still amazing. Keep up with it.
An update at last! Thank you sir! Also I find the bit of TCB mixed in here very interstating. I would love to read more on how humans work and behave in this world. I hope that there will be more stories that show humans in this verse.
That part at the end was EPIC.
Nice update, Prime.
So we have Lancelot as Berserker, Gilgamesh as Archer, and Gawain as Saber. Assuming we'll get at least one Servant for each class, I'm REALLY hoping Iskandar as Rider will make an appearance.
Heresy detected, purge in the name of the emperor of man!
PRAISE THE SUN
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its always been that, just more apparent now
Is it bad that I want literally all of the characters in this story except for the Entity and The Black Knight to die?
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Nope
Pokemon.... maybe I should read the oth re stories I just found out this was a sequel to....m
So this is a Fate/stay night crossover.
Gilgamesh is an @$$!
I feel bad...for the Black Knight.
Gilgamesh, I hope you die, in a fire.
the pokemon reference just made me
By any chance does this story connect with another crossover story with the Kaijuverse and Pokemasters? If so, then wow cool multiverse world you got here. Also, what series does Vale come from exactly?
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First, Yes. Second, Vale is an OC I made, his species will be explained in later chapters/stories
Oh damn.
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...and how is that an achievement??
he's about to get raped