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Metroid Prime


Currently doing: Vibing with ORT(One Radiance Thing)

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Arceus, God of Pokémon, Master of Creation and Leader of the Legendary Council has made Equus a new home for his Pokémon hoping to give them a fresh start and escape the Darkness and evils of Earth and protect his children.

But little does he know that Equus has been in the crosshairs of Darkness for One Thousand Years.


Oryx, The Taken King, First Navigator, Lord of Shapes, and harrowed God has come to Equus to avenge the death of his son who was killed by the Princesses. With his army and his fleet at his disposal he arrives at the planet only to find resistance in the form of creatures known as Pokémon, united in an effort to defend their new home.

But what Arceus and the people of Equus don't realize, its that Oryx is called the "The Taken King" for a reason.

And the answer will horrify everyone involved.


Non-Canon Wayverse Crossover with Destiny.

Takes place after the end of Book 1 in the Wayverse

Note to Pokemon fans: knowledge of Destiny is not required to read this. I'll take care of that :D

Prologue and Chapters 1-3 Edited byScript and metallusionsismagic

New Editor: tdnpony

EDIT: Made the Popular Stories list!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 39 )

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! ORYX HAS COME TO FIMFICTION!


Let me know if you need any help in editing the story, I'd be happy to lend a hand! :twilightsheepish:

HOLY SHET! ERIAGIJE *Takes out hardlight* WANNA GO MATE? *gets sniped by EnlightSoldier.* X.X

I wonder. Will Oryx make Tirek a Taken? Because if he does, this story will become extraordinarily interesting...

interesting I got a lot to read but I hope u don't let this one go to waste knowing you I would expect a bionicle but two people already did the makuta

Oho. First chapter and one of my characters are already dead...interesting.

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Well I never used the word "Dead" next to "Body", for all we know, Alice may think he's dead ;P

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Hoho. Good one.

On a side note, Uber Reaper has expressed interest in adding his characters to your fic. I told him to PM you about it, but I figured I'd say it now anyway.

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Well tell him to talk to me and I'll see what I can do

Hmm, interesting start. It's well written enough and at least engaging. I don't care for Destiny at all, but I can see you've put some time and effort into this and you've captured the characters well enough. Not sure how I feel about Rio dying, but it's not a big deal.

Although, I have to point out that after the Summit, Sev doesn't like Arceus anymore. He switched over the whole worship and honoring thing to Luna. So Princess Luna is the patron goddess of the PLA now. A minor point, nothing major. {As for other characters and such, I can PM you details and ideas. I'm sorry for inconveniences. I really should update}

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Thanks for the feedback, I may make that change later.

As for Rio dying it was to establish the tone of the story, that anyone can die which is something I believe no one has attempted in our group.

6595426 Oh I don't have a real problem with Rio dying. I actually wanted to do something similar, to a degree, with my own story given how a war was about to take place.

This is an interesting crossover, I am looking forward to what happens next.

You have my interest. Hopefully this story continues to the very end.

Yeeeesss! An update; thank you

interesting this nightmare moon origin
More pls

R.I.P SCROTA HE WAS THE BEST SON EVER.

No, I can't die! Ah have a family, a mate, Cario, Little Lu, what will they do without me? Can't let go...... must...fight for...them.....

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i am unamused at your dumb pun.

Oryx better win the villain almost never wins :applecry:

7970404 come on it's ORYX THE TAKEN KING, leader of the hive and osmium throne and considering how hard his raid is to do he has to win the ponies and Pokémon don't.Stand.A.CHANCE!!!

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Oryx is still harder than Aksis though, and big daddy oryx would just clap his hands and everything would just fall over dead, because he can just do that now.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=T_Ippw0REg4

this one was orange and resembled an ahamkara

Really:ajbemused:

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Comment posted by Mark Pecan29 deleted Aug 23rd, 2020

8176211 it was updated last September, I don't know what your talking about

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I really like this fic! the only thing i would say is that the dialogue could probably flow better, but overall its really good.

I really hope that this doesn't end up like so many other mlp fics where the good guys win and the bad guys are sent crawling back into the void. Oryx really should win this war, no contest. He's not just stronger than any creature on Equestria, he's not even in the same league. Celestia, Luna, and Discord are immortal, sure, but Discord hasn't even been mentioned in this story, and Celestia and Luna have only lived for about 10,000 years. Oryx has lived for approximately 4.5 billion years, and hes washed over multiple Galaxies like an unstoppable plague. There simply is no contest as to who is stronger. I mean sure, i suppose with a lot of struggle, Celestia and Luna could kill Crota, but they have literally less than a 0% chance of beating Oryx.

He is the Destroyer of Light, the Taker of Will.
the King of the Hive, the Father of the Living Death.
He who sits upon the Osmium Throne, who communes with the power of the Deep.
The Chosen Champion of the ancient Worm Gods.

He is Oryx, the Taken King.

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Sometime late March/early April

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Cool! I'll eagerly wait until then.

Is this fic gonna be updated at all?

9558873
Maybe, been 5 years so its probably wouldn't be however would be nice if it was

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