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THEJamiboi

I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.

THEJamiboi Joined 25th Nov, 2013 · Offline

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  • ESea of hypnosis
    Bolt and Ruby take a short holiday to the beach to enjoy the cool water, warm sun and sweet drinks... But Ruby has another treat for Bolt to taste of her own creation.
    THEJamiboi · 3k words  ·  29  5 · 3.6k views
  • TBlind desire
    Crust Toppings is a pizza deliverer and he hates his work, as fortune would have it however, one of his deliveries takes him close to Shady Grove, the town of lamias
    THEJamiboi · 15k words  ·  41  6 · 2.4k views
  • MThe snake house
    Holly Vera is lost within the woods around the outskirts of her hometown, Manehatten. Lost, cold, wet and muddy she seeks shelter in a lamia run hotel that is suffering poor business due to their appearances...
    THEJamiboi · 12k words  ·  83  16 · 3.7k views
  • MNightmare Bite
    Dominatrix Chloe has the fortunate luck of spending Nightmare Night at Las Pegasus, the city close to Shady Grove the hub of lamias. Naturally, this means that some are mistaken as ponies in fancy costumers with their giant tails.
    THEJamiboi · 3.7k words  ·  54  6 · 2.5k views
  • MA scaly experience
    Rainbow Dash, grumpy after being humiliated by Ruby the lamia, is tricked by Pinkie Pie into drinking an oddly familiar potion to learn what if feels like to be a lamia herself.
    THEJamiboi · 5k words  ·  67  15 · 3.6k views
  • MThe Serpent City
    Scarlett Marmalade and Galactic Moonshine are planning to stay for a while with Ruby Scales and her 'husband' in the lamia town of Shady Grove. Needless to say the lamia is more than happy to welcome the pair into her home...
    THEJamiboi · 24k words  ·  29  4 · 1.5k views
  • ECamp Cobra
    TwinWing has booked a short stay at a slightly unique camp ground where snakes wander freely between the woods and the sleeping bags of those staying. However, the Pegasus has made the mistake of pitching his tent a little too far away from the camp.
    THEJamiboi · 2.5k words  ·  38  3 · 3.8k views
  • MSpider's Web
    Web Spinner lives along the coast North of Las Pegasus, hanging within the safety of his webbed up cave by the sea, catching mareponies whom wander within, however he's about to find himself caught by a new marepony who visits him very suddenly.
    THEJamiboi · 4.7k words  ·  63  13 · 4k views
Comments ( 17 )
Dark one
Dark one #1 · Jul 4th, 2016 · · ·
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great story as usual :twilightsmile:

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #2 · Jul 4th, 2016 · · ·
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7363570 Thank you, remember to visit Lamia Ind hotels, the experience is truly mesmerizing!

Derp404
Derp404 #3 · Jul 5th, 2016 · · ·
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Fantastic story! Any plans to continue it?

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #4 · Jul 5th, 2016 · · ·
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7364229 Not sure, probably not since it's a one shot, but I may do a lamia hotel, have visitors enjoy the spa, pool and lamia... 'Room service' :3

Revenant Wings
Revenant Wings #6 · Jul 8th, 2016 · · ·
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Not a big fan of mistress/slave relationships; I'm just here for the inductions. And they're as glorious as I hoped.

You're doing better in your writing, too. However, this time I would like to point out the occasional POV switch should be coupled with some sort of break, as there are many and they are temporarily jarring to the unexpected reader. Using [ hr] in between two paragraphs will create a line in the middle of the page, which would be good whenever you switch between Nightwish/Fluttershy and Bolt/Mist Reticles's different perspectives, especially considering you cut off in the middle of the action. The horizontal rule would help in giving you a better sense of the perspective switch.

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #7 · Jul 8th, 2016 · · ·
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7374093 Thanks I'll keep that in mind for future, and glad you liked the inductions :) I did the separation thing regularly to mess with people when they were hoping for the smexy fun. XD

Lloyd01251
Lloyd01251 #8 · Jan 17th, 2018 · · ·
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Really good story

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #9 · Jan 17th, 2018 · · ·
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8674739
Glad you enjoyed :)

Lloyd01251
Lloyd01251 #10 · Jan 17th, 2018 · · ·
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8674894
I hope you keep up the good work

Zaknel
Zaknel #11 · May 13th, 2018 · · ·
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I desperately crave loving domination. And this story has given that.

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #12 · May 13th, 2018 · · ·
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8922312
Glad you got what you liked out of it :)

Zaknel
Zaknel #13 · May 13th, 2018 · · ·
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8922892
Will there be any more such stories?

THEJamiboi
THEJamiboi #14 · May 13th, 2018 · · ·
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Well Spirals and Spices has a few scenes like that you might like, I'm also working on another anthro story once I finish my current commission story so if you prefer anthro that's coming up :3

Zaknel
Zaknel #15 · May 14th, 2018 · · ·
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8923090
Thank you, THEJamiboi!

Luckyfanisaac
Luckyfanisaac #17 · Aug 26th, 2018 · · ·
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before stepping into the flowing water before him.

just his head was above the water.

He heard two splashes,

Nightwish’s partner appeared to have her held at bay,

where its safer than right under the top predators in the jungle?” Mist asked.

not too hard that it was like the rock under him,

Edit 9/16/2018:

Every time you finish you feel a wave of pleasure hit your body.

hypnotised is a common thing and

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