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THEJamiboi
I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
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this was awesome, It's the best clop fic that I have seen in a good while, I hope there will be a sequel to this soon. I like it when a fic combine several of the same fetish in the same story, and that details from other senses really make it an enjoyable read. hope to see more of that stuff soon; how about a hole group session on the same theme.
6999369 If I do eventually do a sequel, it will either be Frosty taking over the hotel, or an unsuspecting victim(s) booking into a latex sex fuelled vines ponies hotel and getting a goooooooooood night~ XD
6999379 that would be great to see, I hope you will do it.
6999383 Perhaps... We shall see.
It it LIKELY, possibly both ideas may be done, the hotel being turned would be first of course... I did enjoy writing this converting of Frosty, it was fun to alter his mind and put subtle changes to show his mind was snapping without his notice. :3
Oh my God, this was FANTASTIC~! Wonderful plot, nice story, wonderful plot, and a comedic ending to boot! Although, I noticed something that IS quite a turn-off. First, the story's own name is misspelled. Then, there's the fact you like using the same adjective or name for each object. To many penises and Frosty's, and not enough dicks, pricks, and hims. Fix that, and you should be golden.
6999844 second point, yeah I can understand, I have a tendency to do that. As for the name... Fixed (dunno how I did that! XD)
There is a separate tag for gore, so Dark will be fine.
7000116 And the second word in your title needs to be capitalized.
I love it when I'm reading these kinds of stories and my brain is like "Hey, should have [Random Pony OC] come and [Kill/Destroy/Exterminate] this [Thing] as part of [his/her] job, or maybe they're just a random pony with certain skills that can resist the [Thing] and [Kill/Destroy/Extrminate] it"
And then when I'm finished reading, my brains like "I could ask for permission to write that, or just write a short version in the comments"
Meanwhile I'm just thinking "NOBODY GIVES A CRAP! SHUT UP BRAIN!"
Anyway, good story, definitely clop worthy. The ending also leaves it open to continuation. Perhaps a story following Frosty and his family and their corruption of other ponies?
Definitely something to consider.
Also, the dark tag should be on this story. It won't be misunderstood and this definitely qualifies as dark.
7003628 I dunno if Frosty has family, he has friends from his blog that I may use, but, as I said with another chap, if I do a sequel, or two, the first will be him taking over the hotel with his 'sisters' and the second bringing in new ponies staying at the hotel and trapping them in the night. :P
Also, why would you kill it? Yes it has corrupted Frosty, but that's because they want to explore, they mean no harm they simply want to leave the plant, as they cannot do so without a host. Which Frosty just became. :P (Plus they are super pleasurable and you wouldn't take that off ponies would you?)
And I give a crap about what you have to say. :3
Added dark tag, enough people have confirmed it is needed.
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By family I mean the plant.
And kill it because it's forcing itself upon ponies. Corrupting them. Bending their will and minds.
You shouldn't give a crap about what my brain has to say. Trust me. There's some weird shit going on up there.
7003704 Hay, we all got weird shit up there! XD
And I know what you meant by family don't worry. :)
But... But latex sex ponies!
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What has latex Sea Ponies got to do with anything???
7003761 Sea ponies? I was talking about ponies being turned into latex ponies, cause dats sexy! :P
And they can be released, what the plant does is more, see our way of looking, the latex skin is just that, a skin. It's wrapped around the pony but their old body still functions underneath.
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You're confusing me.
So, you're saying the ponies can be released? How? Their minds are broken. You can't recover from that.
7003892 Yes that's true but they can still go back to their old lives, they just have an odd family link to the plant from then on. XD
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Plant(s) Undercover. Neat.
7004268 They invade your homes with their sexy vines. :P
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I suppose...
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It's a little hard to go unnoticed though...
7006708 oh I'm sure they'd find a way!
been a while since you have writen
great comeback though
really hope to see more of this
it was great
7007191 sorry about that
college you know? And I got depressed at one point and flat out stopped for a week before I started up again so I am behind. But I have another story in the works and Spirals and Spices is still on!
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yeah school can be a lot of work sometimes.
anyway glad you are writing again
7007696 Glad to be writing, got this done in a week... Hardly stopped, was nice to type again! XD
Do you have any plans for a sequel?
7010103 I do have some ideas, including the first sequel being Frosty taking over the hotel one victim at a time (With those victims then infecting others and so on so it's like a bacteria multiplying), I'd probably do a few guests then the manager and leave it hanging they went for the rest with a 'meeting'.
The third sequel would be the hotel is now run by latex ponies and ponies who book in are played with in the night, a reporter heads in and gets seduced when she sees one pony in bed with the latex plant when she goes snooping. She gets convinced it's safe and is then asked to make a article for them... But in their favour.
The hotel becomes rather popular then. :3
Note: The sequels will not be done for a while as I have another request then Spirals and Spices to get through! :) But I have an idea for them.
Oh wow. This fic, while there are few things that made me feel a bit iffy...
THAT HYPNOSIS SEQUENCE!
Jebus fuck! You know how to write GOOD hypnosis. The gradual conversion from the outside thoughts, to a mix of his thoughts, and their thoughts, to finally his own thoughts, was brilliantly paced, and for that, you get a
7142168 XD That video.
And thanks, glad you enjoyed, I had fun writing it :P
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Just slightly curious about the sequel and how are you coming along with the requests and other stories?
And I don't think I ever told your how great this story was written! Great job :D
7728986 Sequels are only a possibility no guarantee, sorry about that. As for requests, I'm open right now, did you ask for something, sorry life has been busy and I'm often forgetful.
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Ahh, that's understandable.
I was just asking about what you asked at the end of this comment ^^"
But I wouldn't mind a request though, nor would I mind waiting if the list is long. Thanks :)
7733707 Well if i ever get around to it you can at least know I have an idea.
And what did you have in mind?
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I'll DM you now
I would love a sequel to this. There's definitely the setting established.
Edit 5/9/2019:
I really liked the story but I really had a hard time visualizing what was going on and what it looked like.
hm, i would be booking a room for some nights in the plant hotel then
Would love to see a sequel.