I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
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XD great story, you should almost make a sequel and let them meet in awaking world XD
5905821 Hold your horses (no pun intended Whom I kidding was totally intended! XD) I've already done you one request gonna have to wait for your request time to re-charge mate.
5906146 XD just saying
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How about a darker version then ... or at least a darker ending.
5906709 Good choice! XD
5907604 I might do one where a lamia might go power crazy and rework a pony's mind, but not for this one, sorry.
5907604 This was dark enough.
5907996 That was amazing and I think Twilights potion and experiments might become a thing in pony society... just not anytime soon. Awesome work as always.
I know this is completely random on so many levels but I was thinking that the princess's have a Sin Release as it were. Luna was Envy (Nightmare Moon), Celestia was Lust (Molestia) and Twilights was Wrath (Flaming main and all). Just a point out to that tad bit of information if someone didn't catch it already. Makes you think about it ya know.
5909059 Wait... the animators play binding issac? Games ARE taking over!
5909065 Call me dense but I am not following... what do you mean oh wise lamiac one?
5909077 Em, are you using goggle translate to learn what I'm saying, apologies if that sounded rude if you are English I'm just confused by what you wrote myself now.
5909085 When you mention the binding Issac what is that never heard of that?
5909141 Oh it's a game and it has all the major sins: Gluttony, Pride, Lust, Wrath and so on... I thought you were quoting the game with them, my apologies.
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5909922 XD Great gif my friend, great! XD
That was a very good short story! Wish there was more hehe.. But i guess theres gonna be?
5910357 There's going to be other stories similar, but it's unlikely I'll go back to a pair... Other than maybe the pair who started it! :3
pricess luna going lamia
love it
5911504 mhm! Vinyl and tavi are one of my fave pairings ^^ i would love go see more stories with exotic fetishes such as lamia hypnosis woth them ^~^
5911981 :3
5912038 Well I plan to do a sequel where the tables are turned. Then I reckon that pair will be done.
5913316 i think that seems a suitable finish for the two, its only fair that Tavi gets to have some fun too ^^
Well this was an interesting read^^ However, you ned to work a bit on your pacing as well as you punctioation. Aside from that, I truely did enjy reading this little thing^^ what a nice way to start a day before going to work^^
Can't wait for more!
fuck ya this was awesome!!
You do realize that you're supposed to put the NSFW in the NSFW folder for the Twiluna group, right?
This was great. I hope the sequels for this story and the first story are just as great.
5930994 I didn't choose to put in your group fans did, just be thankful they selected you.
5915142 *rubs hooves together
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glad you all liked it. :)
5919465 I almost died recently but I'll try to proof read it sometime when I'm better
5935491 uhm... O.O
5937965 sorry must have been in pain and a lil angry when I wrote that, I will still try to proof read when I'm let out of care :)
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5938245 I see. You okay?
5941871 no, wish I was at home and, at time of posting this, I have a tube in me causing me discomfort and pain :(
5942212 So you're in hospital? I see... Im sorry. Hope you will get out of it soon. *hugs carefully*
5956968 I've been out for a while now! XD Thanks anyway. :)
5957580 very welcome^^
“In fact, it’s so good, every time I do it you feel a wave of pleasure, right here.”
...huh.
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