I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
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well thats one way to get more visitors..... i wonder how a Lamia hug feels.
7632352 Maybe you should go and try one yourself... In a secluded sound proof room~
I love the druggy aspect of this induction. Made things seem like a trip. Lovely story, one of your bests, I think.
7632898 Thank you, I am proud of it, had fun with the new hypnosis idea, and spas are my favourite to work with often... They are already relaxing so hypnosis can slip in almost unnoticed, I wonder what would happen when Holly returns with some friends... Will she try more treatments, which would you choose? :P Or would you wait for a specific special? (Like swallowed whole. XD)
Also, you aren't bothered by the lewdness?
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I mean, the lewdness isn't a dealbreaker for me, especially if it has a nice build up to it like this. I just detest the "Poof you're hypnotized, now let's have sex" stuff.
Also, I think I'd try a dripleaf-infused bubble bath.
DAMN. I was hoping for some action between Holly and Thamar. Still hot!
7633049 Oh that sounds lovely, sadly the water has broken, can we just fill it with raw liquid dripleaf for you? :3
7634105 DAT FUCKING TEASE! XD Might come back these lot in the future when the hotel is popular~
I really liked this story, I hope to see more of your work.
Amazing as always ^w^
7635323 Thank you glad you liked it :)
7635445 Thanks Red.
I should start liking stories written by you before I read them.
7642029 Um... But what if they're not good?
7642088 they're all good.
7642125 Well thanks glad you think so. :)
I could either write a massive wall of text saying how god damn amazing this story is.....
or explain it via one appropriate reaction image
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i think i made the right choice. PLEASE MAKE MORE
7786262 Dafuq is that picture? XD Is it that guy wiping sweat off his face turned into a Japanese porn star!? XD
Also, glad you like it, I do really want to do a sequel to this and since I'm off for a few days maybe I can make a start! :D
7940060 Liked it then?
7942403 yes
I've enjoyed a lot of your stories, but I think I'll pass on this one. Using hypnosis to change a person, heck even a description that would match brainwashing / psychological manipulation to alter someone like that ... your description talks about a hotel / spa that is not getting much business. I don't think the issue is the looks of the staff, so much as how they treat their customers.
No non-con and dark tags interesting