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THEJamiboi


I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.

Comments ( 7 )

This was a good read I can't wait to see what you will be coming up next.

8039239 It shouldn't be long. :)

Not my favorite of your work but still quite enjoyable. Partially because I have a personal preference for seeing more emphasis on the process of hypnosis and the pony's thoughts and behavior being changed, but also partially cause it felt like there were a few more errors in grammar than usual. Either way still enjoyable.
Also I will happily deny that lamias are the best creature that exists.

8040925 Oh dear looks like seven or eight lamias are heading to change your opinion~

And I'm sorry it's not the best lately, I haven't done much writing for a while so I might have been a tad rusty but I still put my all in like always. And I guess the hypnosis was short... I'll make sure the next one had a long hypno session... The breaking of the mind can take a while...

Several chapters if my current story is to be believed :3

Wow, this was.. instructive. It seems I've found a "fetish" that I'm not interested in. Hah. Anyway, it was a good story.

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So you liked it but not what was in the story? Okay, either way, glad you liked it, I think. XD

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I didn't not like it, it just did nothing for me.

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