• Published 14th Jun 2016
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Why Winter Wrap-Up? - Amethyst_Dawn



On the evening of Winter Wrap-Up, Twilight asks Celestia a question...

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The Question.

The purple Alicorn sat on the plush royal cushion, unmoving, as she observed her former teacher stirring their tea. After a few minutes of awkward silence, she began to grow impatient.

"Well?" she asked, shifting her brow curiously. She knew Celestia could tell she wasn't being intentionally hostile, she just wanted a simple answer to what seemed to be a simple question. But from the look on her wise mentor's face, she knew she was in for something much more complex.

"Let me ask you a question," The Princess finally said, taking a leisurely sip of her tea, "do you enjoy Winter Wrap Up?"

Twilight froze, and looked into Celestia's kind gaze. She was serious? What the hay?!

"Of course I do, Princess," she sighed, "but that doesn't answer my question. Why don't you help? Why do you let your subjects do all the work for you?"

Twilight was taken aback when Celestia only managed to giggle and titter in response. It was a gentle, rolling laughter devoid of any sinister motives. After a few calming breaths, she spoke again in a knowing tone.

"Tell me, Twilight Sparkle, what do you do in your free time?"

Twilight's mouth hung open. The hay was she talking about?

"I, uhh... I Read?" She offered, not quite certain the princess wasn't changing the subject.

"What about Pinkie Pie? What does she like to do outside of work?"

"She likes to make new friends, and check in with her old ones to see if they need to smile again." Twilight stated. She was unsure where this was going, but she had a gut feeling she'd feel like an absolute idiot once it was explained to her.

"What of the seamstress? Does she not continue her work, even when it is not required of her?"

Twilight paused. "Well, yeah... but she enjoys doing it; it's her passion!"

"Do you not yet see, then?" Celestia asked tenderly.

"See what?" Twilight asked in frustration, tapping the ground with a curious hoof.

Celestia sighed, looked out the window, and took another polite sip of her tea. "I can control whether the weather is hot or cold, depending on how I set the sun's position." She said slowly. "But if I do everything I could do by myself, what would my little ponies do then?"

She looked her former student in the eye, and spoke softly. "Ponies like to keep busy, so they form hobbies to do when they aren't working, it is in our nature. And that is why the hobbies are important: they are something interesting outside of our work. If they were a constant, they would soon be boring, and uninvesting.

"My subjects enjoy Winter Wrap-Up, along with a lot of other events like the Running of the Leaves or the Summer Sun Celebration. All these could- and would -occur naturally without your work. But I give the job to you, and what do you do? You skip along the paths, and sing town-wide songs about the very things you're doing!"

She paused for a moment, and thought deeply. "Remember when you wrote to me about the Apple's family reunion? How they all sang and danced while doing their work? And how they were all willing to join in?"

Twilight nodded. "Yes."

"It's like that, Twilight." Celestia sighed.

"But Princess--"

"Please, just Celestia now." She interjected.

"-- Celestia," Twilight said unsurely, "haven't you noticed what a hassle it is to organize all of these ponies? To synchronize every job so that they click together perfectly? And how much of a bother it is to redo when even one assignment doesn't click?"

Celestia looked sternly, yet softly, at her old pupil. "Tell me, when a single stitch is out of place on one of Rarity's dresses, does she give it to Fluttershy to fix? Or does she start over, and make sure it fits in perfectly?"

Twilight's eyes grew wide. She was beginning to understand.

"She restarts the stitch..."

Celestia nodded. "Yes, and how does she react when she finally finishes her project, after sometimes months and months of hard work?"

Twilight smiled, and laughed at a particular memory. "She gushes over it like it was the best thing ever!"

"Exactly, Twilight." Celestia grinned. "The more work you put into a project, the more pleasure you experience when it turns out perfect. Do you understand now, Twilight?"

"I do," Twilight sighed, rubbing her forehead just beneath her horn with a hoof. "But it just seems... manipulative, for lack of a better word." She said apologetically.

The princess only chuckled warmly: "Alas, that comes with being part of ruling a nation. A good ruler is wise about when to do the work yourself, and when to let your subjects do it. No matter how 'manipulative' it may seem to some. Do you understand that?"

"Yes," Twilight nodded, "thank you, princes-- I mean, Celestia."

"Anytime, my faithful equal." Celestia said, hardly trying to contain her pride. "I will always be here to answer a question. Whether for you, or your friends."

She watched at her old student left through the large doors, and beamed when she spread her wings and flew off.

"I wonder if Luna would consider taking on a student of her own?" She pondered aloud. "It is quite rewarding..."

-=-=-=-=-=-

Twilight landed on the balcony of her new castle, and stood. She let the breeze blow soothingly across her feathers while she considered her mentor's advice... and her last words.

"My faithful equal."

The more she thought on it, the more she realized that she was indeed now an equal with the other three princesses. And her former mentor considered her as good as a teacher now.

She had just folded her wings when she heard a timid voice behind her.

"Twilight?"

She turned to see Starlight Glimmer opening the door, and peering shyly at her. "Yes, Starlight?"

The pink unicorn shuffled her weight uncomfortably from side to side, avoiding eye contact. "Well," she started, "I was just wondering... why do you let poor Spike do a lot of your work for you? I-- I know he seems to enjoy it, but... why?"

Twilight smiled warmly, walked up to Starlight, and set a hoof on her shoulder.

"Tell me, Starlight," she said.







"What do you do in your free time?"

Author's Note:

Just an Idea that popped into my head, and I had to get it out. Hope you like it!

Sometimes we're stuck doing jobs we don't really see the point of, but I found it's often simply for our own benefit! And I felt the whole "Sun doing naught in Winter Wrap-Up" issue was easily explained, so here is my version of that explanation.

And yes, I do think that Luna might benefit from a personal student. Even though I'm satisfied with her interactions with the Crusaders.

~Amethyst Dawn.

Comments ( 35 )

A very interesting take on not only Winter Wrap-Up but Spike as well. Although, she has to get better at involving him in other activities.

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I agree, and thanks! I'm glad you liked it, thank you for adding this to your library! :twilightsmile:

I love the ending, showing the parallels between teach and student and how Twilight applies what she learns. This gets an upvote and put in the good reads folder.

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Wow, this story got waaay more popular in the last day than I thought it would in over a month! :pinkiegasp:

Thank you all so much! :twilightsmile:

7302420
If you don't mind, or haven't already, could you please check out my other fic?

At first, I thought this story as merely good.

But that ending bumped it up to great! As dangerbrony said, I absolutely love the parallels between teacher and student!

Great job! Liked, favorited, and followed! :pinkiehappy:

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Oh, my, gosh. Thank you! :pinkiehappy:
I'm glad you liked my work. :twilightsmile:

This was really amazing! I and I do agree Luna having a personal student would benefit Luna.
:pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for adding this to your favourites! :twilightsmile:

7363952 it was great! And I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner!:pinkiehappy:

7363976
No problem. And thanks! :twilightsmile:

Nice one. And very insightful. Celestia is like a parent. If she did everything what would b there kwdt for us to grow. I especially liked the example she used with Rarity. You gain more from your own accomplishments.

7368643
Thanks! I'm glad you liked my work. :twilightsmile:

She was unsure where this was going, but she had a gut feeling she'd feel like an absolute idiot once it was explained to her.

I know the feeling Twi.
Great story and awesome ending

When you start a fire, most of the wood just burns but if you don't touch the match to it, the fire doesn't start.

IMO, Winter Wrap Up is the same. Most of the snow just melts, BUT without the ritual to start things the crops will not grow. Plus, Earth Ponies have a bit of an attitude about the other tribes & prefer to do things on their own to show they can do it without the others & don't really need them. They will go to considerable extra work to prove that they can manage on their own, thank you very much.

7435078
I did that on purpose. :twilightsmile:

7435235
That's headcanon territory: I tried to stay in Canon for this series. Thank you for the read! :twilightsmile:

The lesson in your story is great! Complicated, and yet simple at the same time.

7495368
Eeyup. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

This was a great story with a great lesson. And I found the ending adorable. :twilightsmile: Two very good stories by the same author? And even more which I have yet to read? This usually results in a follow. And it does. :yay:

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*~Squee!~* :pinkiehappy:

*Ahem* I mean... thanks! :twilightsmile:

This has been an interesting short read with lots of ideas to think about, though I have to say I expected the tale to be about something else. But still, it was a pleasant surprise to see Twilight asking about the manipulative nature of the principle... I thought the same just a few sentences before it :rainbowlaugh:

The flow was flawless, the atmosphere sufficient and the grammar mostly solid, with the exception of direct speech, notably some faulty punctuation and incorrect capitalisation of dialogue tags. Still, it was a nice early afternoon story :pinkiesmile:

To think that a simple fimfic story, coming in at only a little over 1K words...
Could give a glimmer into the actual meaning of life.
If one believes in a loving, all-knowing Creator.
Well done. :twilightsmile:

9057614
Thank you so much!
And yeah, apologies for the grammar. I did edit it before I went to sleep last night, but... yeah, this was one of my earliest attempts. :rainbowlaugh:

9058427
Thank you. :twilightsmile:

9058474
You are welcome. And no worries, it was really not that bad, but my inner editor-self just always looks for these tiny issues :rainbowlaugh:

9058510
Eh, it's one of my favourite kinds of feedback. :twilightsmile:

9058563
Well, better safe than sorry. Some people are very protective about their work :derpytongue2:

9058567
You're telling me! :twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:
In all seriousness, though, I always make an effort to encourage constructive criticism. :twilightsmile:

That's two great stories in two short packages!
How do I find all of your (or any author's) stories on this site?

EDIT: Found out. Click on your name, that takes me to your home page and your blog. Click on "stories", and see 40 stories on 4 pages.

Start reading ...

Interesting concept. Love the interactions!

"What do you do in your free time?"

"Oh you know. Try to take over Equestria, take cutie marks, and make everypony equal."

:twilightoops: Starlight!

"Gotcha!"

Not sorry. That last line was asking for it though. Love the story by the way.

This is really good. Loved that ending!

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