A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.
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Wow said my friend btw good start btw
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Thanks.
Thanks to the people who took the time to read this. I'm a bit green to nostalgia fics...
Probably because I'm only in my teens, and I live in the Arctic. I don't really have much to be nostalgic about.
Any Constructive Criticism is greatly appreciated. Thank you!
Ill be waiting for more
That was good. Maybe a little simple but not everything need to be crazy complex to be good. I also liked how Celestia and Luna were part of the original group that founded Equestra. I think there's another story to be told there.
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Thanks!
And yeah, I'm planning on addressing that in another fic, or in greater detail when I rewrite this. It's a personal headcanon that came to me when I was writing this. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Great story!
I'm so hyped for the next chapter, if is on planning form.
The story was so beautiful
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You found it moving? Wow, Thanks!
But I'm not sure if the updates will be another chapter, or a rewrite to get more detail in there. Might go either way.
I'm so glad you liked it!
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm actually surprised this many people enjyed it that much... I'm flattered!
At first I was like wait.... If the mane 6 (mane 5) are dead how come starlight is still alive? But then when she flew I was oh! I'm so stupid! Anyway great work! I almost cried..... And I never cry for fanfictions!
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Wow, thanks!
And that's the surprise effect I was going for with Starlight, I'm glad you liked this!
7363961 it was really amazing, and it was clever taking that route for Starlight!
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Thanks!
I was trying to figure out what she'd be the Alicorn of, and decided on... well... Starlight.
7363980 haha
This was great! I love your stories! Third one I'm faving
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Thanks! I'm thrilled you like my work.
Yeah... None of this made any bucking sense. So explanations are in order for me to understand this story at all.
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Your feedback is appreciated.
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Still hoping to hear what the heck I just read. Because I still don't get it.
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Well, what part of it confused you?
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Everything past them seeing the founder's memorlials. I guess.
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Ah, I see. Basically this story is theorizing that Princess Platinum and Clover the Clever eventually became the Princesses Celestia and Luna.
Looking back on it now that you've pointed this out, I didn't write this as well as I wanted to. It was a rookie try, though, so it's got some cringe value for me.