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Amethyst_Dawn
A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.
Amethyst_Dawn
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Cheese.
I was not expecting that.
Also, when you have someone saying something directly, use a comma, not period, and use lowercase.
Ex: "Books," she said
Not: "Books." She said.
Hope this helped!
7372469
Thanks! I must've missed a spot on editing.
Not a bad romance
7372562
Thanks!
Never had cheese? My reaction:
Also: ideas come to you at the weirdest of times.
7372743
Yeah, that's one of the reactions I was going for with that.
7372743
Oh yeah. The weirdest times.
I'm glad you liked this!
7372762 Well I'm, uh glad, I like it too!
Say whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?
7377896
What?
Too odd?
7377907
Nope. Really good, actually.
Have an upvote.
7377911
Thanks!
This story was cheesy.
...
I couldn't resist.
7418428
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
And thank you for adding this to your favourites!
Congrats: you made Applejack wanting cheese more than anything else in the world seem 100% in character. Have a like and a mustache
7431344
Thanks!
Okay, this is a bit of a paradox for me... in that it's a crackship that actually works...
Though I wish it had some kind of prequel that explained how exactly things got to the point they were at in the beginning of the story, an interquel that expanded more upon how the others reacted, and a sequel that focuses on their child.
7439307
Thanks!
But, yeah, I think I'll leave it as is. This is all I could gather on this storyline, since it was inspired by a sandwich.
7440034 You're welcome.
And I kind of figured that, I just had to get my feelings on that out.
CHEESE!!!!!!!
...
Aaaaaand now I ship AJ and Sombra.
This was...how do I put it?
At first I prepared myself for a laugh...but then...you decided that you're gonna go the deeper end of the pool. The concept SHOULD be hilarious, but you took it serious enough to give us a concept such as this. A concept that made AJ somehow relatable to Sombra.
And I loved it.
it was very sweet by the end and just...I didn't see it coming. I got that it had something to do with cheese, but then you pull this on me. You magnificent genius. 
Great job writing this!
7783649
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
And I know, right? That was a crackship I didn't expect to make believable...
7783657
I'm proud of you child.
But you did. You really diiiiid
7783695
Gratias tibi!
7783711
Re grata et
Cheese
Sombra: Maybe Pinkie Pie would've been better-