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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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When a realization dawns on Twilight Sparkle, she immediately seeks to ask her old mentor a serious question... why doesn't she help?

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A very interesting take on not only Winter Wrap-Up but Spike as well. Although, she has to get better at involving him in other activities.

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I agree, and thanks! I'm glad you liked it, thank you for adding this to your library! :twilightsmile:

I love the ending, showing the parallels between teach and student and how Twilight applies what she learns. This gets an upvote and put in the good reads folder.

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Wow, this story got waaay more popular in the last day than I thought it would in over a month! :pinkiegasp:

Thank you all so much! :twilightsmile:

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If you don't mind, or haven't already, could you please check out my other fic?

At first, I thought this story as merely good.

But that ending bumped it up to great! As dangerbrony said, I absolutely love the parallels between teacher and student!

Great job! Liked, favorited, and followed! :pinkiehappy:

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Oh, my, gosh. Thank you! :pinkiehappy:
I'm glad you liked my work. :twilightsmile:

This was really amazing! I and I do agree Luna having a personal student would benefit Luna.
:pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for adding this to your favourites! :twilightsmile:

7363952 it was great! And I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner!:pinkiehappy:

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No problem. And thanks! :twilightsmile:

Nice one. And very insightful. Celestia is like a parent. If she did everything what would b there kwdt for us to grow. I especially liked the example she used with Rarity. You gain more from your own accomplishments.

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked my work. :twilightsmile:

She was unsure where this was going, but she had a gut feeling she'd feel like an absolute idiot once it was explained to her.

I know the feeling Twi.
Great story and awesome ending

When you start a fire, most of the wood just burns but if you don't touch the match to it, the fire doesn't start.

IMO, Winter Wrap Up is the same. Most of the snow just melts, BUT without the ritual to start things the crops will not grow. Plus, Earth Ponies have a bit of an attitude about the other tribes & prefer to do things on their own to show they can do it without the others & don't really need them. They will go to considerable extra work to prove that they can manage on their own, thank you very much.

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I did that on purpose. :twilightsmile:

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That's headcanon territory: I tried to stay in Canon for this series. Thank you for the read! :twilightsmile:

The lesson in your story is great! Complicated, and yet simple at the same time.

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Eeyup. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

This was a great story with a great lesson. And I found the ending adorable. :twilightsmile: Two very good stories by the same author? And even more which I have yet to read? This usually results in a follow. And it does. :yay:

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*~Squee!~* :pinkiehappy:

*Ahem* I mean... thanks! :twilightsmile:

This has been an interesting short read with lots of ideas to think about, though I have to say I expected the tale to be about something else. But still, it was a pleasant surprise to see Twilight asking about the manipulative nature of the principle... I thought the same just a few sentences before it :rainbowlaugh:

The flow was flawless, the atmosphere sufficient and the grammar mostly solid, with the exception of direct speech, notably some faulty punctuation and incorrect capitalisation of dialogue tags. Still, it was a nice early afternoon story :pinkiesmile:

To think that a simple fimfic story, coming in at only a little over 1K words...
Could give a glimmer into the actual meaning of life.
If one believes in a loving, all-knowing Creator.
Well done. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much!
And yeah, apologies for the grammar. I did edit it before I went to sleep last night, but... yeah, this was one of my earliest attempts. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you. :twilightsmile:

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You are welcome. And no worries, it was really not that bad, but my inner editor-self just always looks for these tiny issues :rainbowlaugh:

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Eh, it's one of my favourite kinds of feedback. :twilightsmile:

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Well, better safe than sorry. Some people are very protective about their work :derpytongue2:

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You're telling me! :twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:
In all seriousness, though, I always make an effort to encourage constructive criticism. :twilightsmile:

That's two great stories in two short packages!
How do I find all of your (or any author's) stories on this site?

EDIT: Found out. Click on your name, that takes me to your home page and your blog. Click on "stories", and see 40 stories on 4 pages.

Start reading ...

Interesting concept. Love the interactions!

"What do you do in your free time?"

"Oh you know. Try to take over Equestria, take cutie marks, and make everypony equal."

:twilightoops: Starlight!

"Gotcha!"

Not sorry. That last line was asking for it though. Love the story by the way.

This is really good. Loved that ending!

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