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Gold4tune
Just another semi-successful clop writer
Gold4tune
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This was hilarious. And I might even ship it now.
these horses are almost as gay as u~
I enjoyed enjoying this
Yoga is the perfect way to ogle a guy with a nice ass.
7316845 How did I know you were involved in this just by reading the title.
I loved it, I have never though of ah SA, Cadance and Sunburst. hope to see more from you.
Incest is wincest.
I know he was caught up in the moment but even out of politeness its would seem weird and creepy to know someone's sibling was giving them erotic gifts like lube and sheet suspenders.
unless this is human or anthro I think you mean "Hooves"
This fic was really a treat. I hope we can see some kind of follow-up in the future
Moronically oblivious Shining is best Shining
That giant list of conquests including Princesses and family members had me busting a gut!
7320447 that is my canon of Shining Armor; incredible with physical abilities but almost as oblivious as an Intel Pentium with an FDIV bug.
Sounds like they have one big happy and horny family.
All I can say to that (and this fic as a whole) is: unf.
Nice bit of clop, thanks for writing it!
While a sequel could be cool, what I would really want here is a prequel! It could explore the whole "Cadence exudes lust" thing, and show us a young Shining slowly become the stud he is in this story.
Criticism wise, the only thing that I think could have been better is if it was longer. Specifically, if we got more teasing of Sunburst, since that was kind of the premise. But it was still very very good.
7317540 Hooves are technically toe bones, so.. it's not really inaccurate.
More. More plz. Nao. :3
We need more stories like this where sex is more casual and open.
That was the hottest story I've read in a while, and I've been reading clopfics for about 5 hours straight. Please continue with what you're doing, it's a real treasure.
…his entire immediate family is on that list…? Okay then.
murmured
Well. I don't usually get into that, but it was sexy and seductive.
Stallions.
Refreshing for stories not to neglect that…
…but then how would you know if you actually caused significant injury?
Corrections offered without malice.
Questions should have question marks.
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I like how Shining's been with his entire immediate family.
The dialogue during the sex really added to the characterization and openness of the whole deal.
Wow. For a while there I was expecting Shining to have been deliberately teasing Sunburst, antagonizing him until he finally confessed. But this... Been a while since I read an oblivious Shining story. That he missed the painful hints despite apparently doing it with so many others just adds to the hilarity. I'm now curious to see if you'll explore those other times.
And now I want a sequel following Cadance that the ponies she influences. Also, you probably want to change the tags to include Sunburst.
"Well, we fucked."
Poor Sunburst, though. He thought Shining would neglect him for sure, when really all he needed to do was ask. I sure hope the clop next chapter is as good as the plot! 
Wow! I was NOT expecting that! The headcannon where sex is highly encouraged in Equestria is quite an interesting one. And I love when Cadence plays the role of polyamory queen. Her reaction was so funny!
Best line, this also reminds me of The Doctor/Clara
Wait, so Shining effed Twilight!?
How should be now. But hey, I like me some pumped up stallions.
Okay, this first chapter was amazing, and Shining’s obliviousness is actually well-written here so good job.
By the way, I absolutely love this personality for Cadence.
Firstly, I appreciate that you used the word “reneighsance”. Secondly, Shining’s dirty talk was actually really hot, so you did a very good job again.
Like a bird in a hurry