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Unity


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Yes... this will do nicely

I have no choice but to read. :coolphoto:

Source on the image used?

Do you have a crush on me or something?” He released his magic, and Starlight immediately looked away, blushing.

“Oh Celestia, you do, don’t you? Look, you’re a great friend and I’m glad we reconnected, but you’re not really my type, Starlight,” Sunburst said, making an effort to keep his hoof away from his forehead.

Starlight simply looked at him with her ears pinned to her neck and asked, “What is your type, then?” she asked, glaring at Sunburst through slinted eyes.

“Stallions,” he deadpanned.

Well that escalated pretty fucking quickly

Unity #6 · Mar 25th, 2016 · · 1 ·

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Yes, yes i like this, ANOTHER!

This. . . . this a masterpiece of a story.

That sex scene tho! Ten outta ten!

This is too good.
Planning on writing more stories?

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Yeah, I'm definitely planning on writing more once I have the time to do so

7161277 Premise is not bad... But the pacing was incredibly fast. Also, Starlight didn't even suggest pegging as an option? Granted, using dangerous magic as the first option is completely in character but I would have expected her to have at least thought about it for a half second before doing the gender swap.

Pacing sucks. Reason to confess? Weak at best. Flow is steady, but still sucks. The characters could be anybody, and the story would not have to change. This Starlight/Sunburst pair are unspecial. I choose all my words carefully.

Sunburst sounds more like Sg at first.
And vise versa. (At the hospital

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