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FoolAmongTheStars
Sorry for being a Starlight Glimmer apologist
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I like other shippings better,
This was pretty good I think. . . and quite sweet as well. Good job.
When it comes to adult content of Starburst, I can definitely say that this is one of my favorite stories. I loved the inclusion of the doubts and awkwardness, both before and after they had sex. Plus the subtle descriptions of the act itself made their first time together all the more intimate. Great work!
Wow a great story
Ya know what? This story gets an "A" in my official story marks. It not only felt true to their characters, but also felt natural. Screw what at least 99.98% of those other writers have in mind when it comes to this particular paring (which, yes I do ship....pretty obvious since I liked this story) and their "creative" ways of portraying these two. They lack realism and relatability to characters. Plus you definitely tied into these two adorkable nerds personalities and made their first time as awkward as it is irl. For that being said, I give 9.5
s/10
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Thank you so much! And such a high score
I was kind of bracing myself for some backlash, but so far that hasn't been the case. I always try to be respectful of others, since what might appeal to them wont necessarily appeal to me, but then I have to draw the line somewhere and this is how this little story came to be. It makes me happy that you like the way I portrayed them, especially since there are parts where I feel I made them a little to out of character, but it seems it hasn't put people off so 🤷
Thanks for the comment and the favorite!
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By all means, you deserved it. Your content pleases many and my review reflected as such.
So glad I found this. This seriously needs a sequal to further explore their relationship.
This is probably my favorite adult romance with these two. It really captures them and their emotional uncertainty along with the tender passion between them. It was lovely.
should be "turned"
should be "back"
should be "cradle"
should be "closed"
should be "prepared"
I think there were a few other instances of an -ed missing or being where it shouldn't, but aside from that, this was a wonderful story. Please keep writing these.
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Thanks for the comment, I fixed the mistakes mentioned and some others. If you like this story, I have a series of mature stories featuring this pairing, feel free to check it out
I loved it, and yes please make a sequel.
Sunburst: ...And working in a school is what I always thought I'd do! I mean, if you'll have me?
Starlight: Are you kidding?? OF COURSE I'LL MARRY YOU!!! Umm... gah... er... uhh... I mean... You're hired!!! Y-You're hired is what I said!
This isn't a clopfic. It's a fic that happens to include clop, that makes it a rarity on this site and worth a read.