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Chapter's up! More coming soon!
Ginger-root torture...
Sweet merciful baby jesus moar!
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The point of the epilogues is to show what happens to the characters after the story proper. Cadance's chapter ends with her being tortured and then left in the dungeon. I wouldn't want to start the sequel from that point, which is why it became her epilogue.
Thanks for the feedback!
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I'm glad you liked it. I was kind of worried that people wouldn't know what to think about this chapter. I wonder if more people will side with Zecora in dealing out punishment, or if they'll feel sympathy towards Cadance and the diamond dogs.
I appreciate all feedback, but I'm especially curious to hear what people think about my depiction of Cadance and Zecora in this chapter.
That Cadance...
Well, Zecora get some vengeance for a friend. Kinky-dominatrix vengeance. Feel slightly sad for the Diamond Dogs, though reminded of the song Date Rape.
i will be legitimately surprise if you can somehow relate this to season three. with the shining armour, and the cadence, and chrysalis drama. that stunt would be amazing to pull off.
Hmm, what terrible foreshadowing that is to come, when season 3 actually comes out to give you the inspiration . Anyhow can't wait to see the other dialogues you have in store :P. ....Now that I think back with the talk between Celestia and Twilight about the "need it want it" spell and what happened around the first few chapters between Cadence/Orion, I can't helped but wonder how Twilight will "solve" her dilemma with Shinning Armor....
Lawl oh well a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/w/twilightshrugplz.png?1
Anyhow, nice work now that you are bringing this to a close. Have a good week man.
Ginger root's in their bums?
I mean... OW... OUCH!..... Why man!
Can't wait for the sequel then.
I feel nothing for Cadence. She is pathetic, and she's insane.
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I'm saving her epilogue for last.
Thanks for the comments!
You just don't know when to quit, do you?
I'm usually not a fan of torture, but you write it so well; not letting it get to uncomfortable for the reader, but still keeping it dark enough to be interesting.
Love the chapeter and the store it self please keep it going cant wait to read what happends next
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I love this movie. Danny Kaye's a comedic genius.
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Thank you for providing the official song for this chapter.
Another awesome comment, as always!
I smell a sequel.
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Indeed. You'll need a lot more of those reaction images for some of the later chapters.
Thanks for reading!
Bronystories you're a magnificent bastard. Looking really forward to ATF 2.
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Thanks for the feedback!
Damn, Zecora makes a great dominatrix. A part of me does feel bad for the diamond dogs, just a small part though. The rest of me is happy with sadistic glee that they got what was coming to them and it was all delivered by our favorite and awesome Zebra!
Cadence though, Cadence just plain creeps me the fuck out. She's wicked scary and this epilogue just made me really excited to read ATF 2 because now it seems like she just wants to watch the world burn and have Orion there next to her as it all happens. To think it all started because she forgot her homework xD.
Clop was awesome as always. Never been much for the whole dominatrix and torture thing myself, but damn it I'm starting to think that there isn't anything that you can't make clopable.
~Have a good one
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Thanks for the kind words! This was an interesting chapter to write. I've never really seen the appeal of S&M either, but after alluding to Zecora's extreme fetish, I knew I needed to include it.
Cadance did turn out decidedly more creepy in this chapter than I had first envisioned. It'll be interesting to see what happens in the sequel.
If I had know this story would've continued to grow as it did, I would've written a more compelling driving force for Cadance returning to the house than homework. As it stands though, I'm happy with the story overall.
Again, thank you. I really appreciate the feedback and hope to have more updates soon.
I love how you portrayed Cadences steady decent into deeper insanity it's so well done and I really enjoyed reading this chapter ^-^
1390460 I think the homework thing fits well with the rest of the silly elements seen throughout the story though lol. Another moment of something similar that comes to mind is when the changelings' dicks keep expanding until they explode and the Sparkles get chased down by a huge wave of cum xD. It's these silly moments combined with the serious undertones that this story has that I think makes it all the more enjoyable to read.
~Have a good one.
No Twilight Sparkle x Pony/Person X chapter?
Oh well~
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I didn't say I was done, just because we showed Cadance's chapter!
There are still three more epilogues I plan on writing, with Twilight's chapter being the last one.
After that, it'll be time for Season three to begin, and a whole new wave of fanfiction to read.
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out of five.
Read this thing in 3 days .....
And it gave me what I need in a strange way.
All those Lines for Zecora
Must have made you boreda
Oh my.. Cadance.. Another fine chapter Bronystories! Was a funny and interesting piece to read, I must say. 'Crystal'? You don't mean.. by my sister's name this won't end well.. Anyways, thank you for always pleasing your Princess! Till next time!
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1384376YOU'RE HERE TOO LOL
So far, this story can be summed up as what Angry Joe said about the plot of Lollipop Chainsaw: "So stupid, but who gives a fuck?" I just feel compelled to keep on going...
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Don't forget that Tara Strong's characters play big roles in both of them.
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Oh yeah!
this is the first ever fanfic i ever read. honestly i always had bad feelings for fanfictions. decided to give this a try. kept me sucked in till the very end. you did very well. now i officially love reading fanfic. keep doing what your good at. i cant wait to see the next fanfic from you.
1384417 the apples are next?
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No. Next we'll follow up with our two favorite guards, Vigilance and Stalwart Shield. I hope to have their epilogue finished sometime this week.
I would have taken a MASSIVE piece of ginger root and made it all rough and uneven, and RAMMED it right up Cadence's ass with no lube.
Oh, now THAT'S TORTURE! If only they were hung by their ears and jabbed with sticks..
as soon as i read sjambok i was like this is my fetish...
So, were there ever any plans for some kind of sequel, because that "crystal" thing was just too ominous? Most likely Sombra, but it'd still be interesting to see a follow up.