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Can't wait to see what comes next! More fast updates, please.
First, ziggas!
Edit: GODDAMMIT!
I do enjoy this story very much.
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I agree. That one's kind of weak.
I need something that says: 'I'll make a poison to kill her,' but have it rhyme.
hmm...
Update: I've got it!
"Then I'll make for you a special brew,
one sip and Cadance's life is through." Zecora said.
Ha I get it SET
Striped entertain meant
Like BET
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"Watching you spank that zigger's ass made me so horny." Dazzle said, flirtatiously.
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854541 this made my day
Oh god, those creative words of yours make me laugh
I loved "Pussy Punch"
this story gets more and more interesting and I completely forgot that I came here just for clop ^^
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Not sure if serious...
If the Hearts and Hooves day pageant proved anything, it showed that Equestria's founders all suffered from crippling racism.
Even today, unicorns have a tendency to view themselves as superior.
It's amusing for me to think that Twilight's mother would be a racist.
(Dazzle's 'race relations' are a slight homage to Princess Clara from 'Drawn Together,' which was another character voiced by Tara Strong.)
"Silly striped zebras, they think they can solve all their problems by just sittin' around."
"Mom!"
oh god...this story!
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Stop it! You're making me blush.
This has been a lot of fun to write. I enjoy the twists and turns of the story, even without the clop. (Which is why I'm salvaging what chapters I can and turning them into a clop-free version of the story.)
Look for the next chapter soon! -Bronystories
P.S. Thank you so much for the mental image of Dr. Seuss saying Zecora's lines. (sarcasm)
This story is brutal, disgusting and totally addictive.
Well done Sir
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Thank you for the feedback.
I like to deliver a compelling story that leaves the reader wanting more; and rest assured, more is coming.
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Good to know that more is comming
this is going to end up in a sparkle family 5 way orgy, isn't it?
and to think... all of this could have been avoided if Cadence didn't forget her homework....damn forgetful teenagers
another great chapter, but I'm finally caught up... NOOOOOOO!!!!!
Keep it up, hopefully the end isn't too close, on of the best fics I've read yet!
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Moral of the story: Homework is evil!
Thanks for the feedback!
I'll have another chapter up before too long.
WHY IS THIS CLOP STORY SO AWESOME!
872949 Huh, I must have skimmed over that part. I didn't see him saying that. Sorry fast reader.
I just finished reading, and all I can say is...uh...um...you have a promising start? Don't get me wrong, it has a solid framework, but the quality just seems to degrade as the story progresses.
I came, I saw (wutudidthar), jimmies were rustled.
Should we report this fic. I mean, it used "zigger" just now. <.<
Just kidding.^^
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"Weep not, fair Rarity! A new chapter will be added soon!"
Okay, I've read out the story completely by now so I could give it some fair judgement, and it's... pretty good! I don't consider myself as a good reviewer, but I try; so the story so far has been interesting and entertaining, despite it having a few real-life complications that are somewhat out of place (a gun in the drawer, having to pay for a special school), because although it is a story about horse sex/rape, take into account that this is Equestria after all.
Also I saw some minimal grammar errors (e.g. "Cadence set out to seek revenge.Meanwhile..."), which considering you wrote eight chapters in one night up to 4 AM are normal. The story just needs some revising, maybe get someone to proofread it for you.
So good work there, and I'm awaiting eagerly for the next chapter!
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Thanks!
I'm working on the next chapter. I want to have it out soon, but it's pretty busy over here...
It'll be posted as soon as possible. Thanks for your patience!
889557 Hahaha i know how that feel's but good to know you're all right
This has been sitting in my Read Later list for quite some time, but I finally got around to reading it today.
This is honestly one of the most fucked up stories I've ever read. I don't even know how you came up with the idea for it - who even comes up with a story so full of rape and incest and other squicky things like that?
But despite how fucked up it is, I have to admit, it is good. There's an excellent balance between black comedy and drama, and the clop is decent. I almost hate to admit it, but I can't wait for the next chapter. You've definitely got me hooked.
A couple things I didn't like:
-while most of the story is written in past tense, there are some paragraphs where it suddenly jumps to present tense. Said paragraphs are kind of obvious, and just a little distracting.
-the two songs seemed a little awkward and forced. Yes, I suppose they were quite amusing, and that's the point of your story, but they felt unrealistic, even in a story where Cadance is psychotic and Twilight's family is okay with incest.
Can't wait til the next chapter!
Ten. BUCKING. Days. Please tell me you're almost finished?
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I promise I haven't forgotten! Thank you all so much for all the interest! The next chapter will be finished soon. I hope it's worth the wait.
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In most of the stories I have read they write thoughts in Italics and in the same formatting as speech, with on and off speaking roles spaced with separate lines and whenever a character speaks out of turn, announces them. Although multiple thoughts is usually the area of psionics and other mind reading/control like abilities. Hope this helps.
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Glad you enjoy it. I was still learning formatting styles as I wrote this, so I'll go back and tweak it as needed... when I find the time.
ITS NOT COMPLETE?! GAH
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I promise I'll update it soon. Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs had demanded the majority of my writing talents as of late.
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it's ok, i just started reading it because I thought it was complete then it suddenly ended.
What happens if Dazzle gets preggers with the diamond dog's child?
Dat Princess Bride Reference at the end, EPIC WIN ^-^ /)
"Pump pump, jizz jizz,
Oh, what a relief it is!"
About the ziggers, and the comments, I was thinking of a Doctor Who episode
Wilfred: "God bless the cactuses."
The Doctor: "That's cacti."
Rossiter: "That's racist."
End of Time, Part Two for those who want to know.
Whelp. I've spent a good portion of my day reading this story. And I will not lie, I am disturbed! In a good way.
First Candance is some crazy psycho-Orion's dick crazed-pony. Then she did the whole changeling invasion just for some dick and now she's..just I don't even.
But as with all your stories I've read so far, I love the mix of clop, humor, and storyline. You just write your stories so that they are so interesting! How you do dis?
Anyway. You rock you crazy, silly person.
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Come check out this blog post where I answer questions from my readers. If you don't see an answer to your question, then post the question and I'll be sure to answer it!
Original=34242 words
Clop-Free=6086 words
Good lord, man! 80 percent of the original is clopping material.
...
*read this story later*
Moarrrrrr
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i dont think she can the DNA would be too different to be compatible
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Good point. Well, now I can relax without worrying about that.
Oh dear, it's been too long.
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I promise I'm working on updating my older stories now! Expect a new Foalsitter chapter soon!
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As I'm typing this, it's been 18 days.
Anyway, great and original story!
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I'm glad you like it!
I'm shooting for a 65 / 35 split between story and clop.
If I had to choose a genre for the story, I'd compare it to something like an erotic thriller.
Let's just call it an erotic adventure story.
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I'm nearly done with the next chapter...
The reason for the sudden lack of new Foalsitter chapters was due to Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs. Because it was featured, that story got twice as many views in a week as Foalsitter got in a month. I had to strike while the iron was hot.
There will be a new chapter soon. For reals, y'all.