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I slept through my alarm, so this chapter is getting uploaded a couple hours late.
At any rate, here it is. Enjoy!
Slatwart Shield just become my most hated charter in this whole fic Shining and Chrisy need to hurry up and bash their brains in.
And then Celestia incinerates EVERYTHING!
The End.
1155436 indeed
This story is amazing I always go fimfiction to check the updates on the story.
that ending man
1155323 That's okay, I slept past my alarm too. Now I got to read two new chapters in one morning.
...My finger´s twitching for a down-vote and i´m not sure how long my will can stop it.
I knew this plan was too stupid to work, but it ended in a really fucked up way. No pun intended.
Damn, poor Twi. Don´t care much for her parents, but that girl really deserved a better first time than this.
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There's a new chapter being released tomorrow morning at 7 a.m. [CST]. I'd reserve any judgements you have until then.
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That is all
i expected the dad to end up screwing Cad but not twilight and the mum getting brutally raped....this story better have a happy ending or at least something, its getting a bit long winded by now :/
oh and i want to say that the raping of twilight made me, physically feel my heart beat, and my body feels hot as shit , this may be the first time i have felt rage so strongly its effecting me physically...
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I love that gif.
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I promise the story is about to come to a conclusion.
Generating those kinds of emotions tells me that I've accomplished my goal as a writer by creating characters whom the reader grows to care about. Rest assured that the fate of Twilight and her family will have a resolution and all the loose ends will be tied up.
I get to use my favorite again!
gifrific.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/asian-thumbs-up.gif
Just some grammar errors I picked out
Should be "Imminent."
Should be "Ejaculation."
"Soused" Is a word, but I don't think it's what you intended to use here... Perhaps "Aroused" was the one.
But these were completely minor.
Like, to the point I honestly didn't care. This story is truly, sincerely hearbreaking. I mean, all the nasty diamond dog and changeling splooge should have dulled me to it by now, right? Right? Wrong.
I damn near cried at the end. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
Good lord. Reading this in the voice I had for Stalwart really made me shiver. That... was just cold.
Also will point out that I was so sure of the poison working until Cadance made it clear that she knew the whole time.
What a clever bitch.
1158397 Cadance isn't stupid, she had to know that the family surendering was part of a plan, that they had to have something they could use on her.
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that is nice to know and i will stick with this which is very rare.
Cool story bro, i find great it get hilarity from the story and can't wait to see how it goes on. Personally I hope it ends with a lovechild between Orion and Cadance that will cause more chaos with the family in the next follow-up story, well one can hope right? /shrug
Anyways, keep up the good work man, can't wait for more
Dude, what the absolute fuck?
And that cliffhanger. Man, you really know how to piss me off with what's happening to Twilight and Dazzle.
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Not when it's shooting out of a vagina.
As far as the other corrections, I'll go ahead and change them.
UPDATE: Fixed!
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Wait, really?
>.>
You learn something new each day, eh?
Hmm...
Why isn't Twilight using her metapony powers on the guards? And where's Chrysalis?
...AndthenCelestiaandLunacomebackandsavethedaytheendyay!
What happened to the Dark tag on this? It certainly was worth it. Dazzle's Dog Days especially deserved it.
I chuckled a bit at the comment that said "A better love story than fifty shades of grey". It's not much of an accomplishment seeing how pretty much every love story is better than that filth.
Still a decent story though.
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That's what happens when I don't think logically.
this is kinda sad
Celestia where the f*** are you !?
Ever heard Breaking Down by Florence+The Machine? PERFECT. CHAPTER. THEME.
Oh, and fuck you, Stalwart Shield.
This will be.. fun..
That ending is the darkest ending I have ever read... I love it.
Wow, Cadence is a mmmm...bitch who likes Orion's mmm...banana
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/023/b/8/friendship_is_magic_bitch_by_crimenyjicket-d4nduex.jpg
Huh...
"Oh Celestia...gonna be sick..."
Thought you wanted to try new things?
"THIS is going over the line!"
Can't handle imagining yourself getting-
*Steel's lips get zipped by a purple aura as Twilight slowly turns her enraged eyes towards him.*
"...Not. Another. Word."
*Steel quickly nods.*
"I'm not kidding. You say one thing about me and this story, and I'll strip you naked and throw you into the streets. You promise to stay silent?"
*Steel quickly nods again, starting to sweat.*
"One. Word. And you're taking an express trip to Cloudsdale. Understand?"
*Steel nods once more, and his lips are finally let go.*
Jeeze...
"And to answer your question, no, I don't LIKE imagining myself or my mom getting raped, or imagining my DAD getting raped by Cadence, or me wanting to have sex with my brother, or the fact that AJ made out right in front of me-"
Ok, you can stop now. If this isn't your thing, that's fine.
"How do you and Rainbow do it?"
*Steel opens his mouth to speak.*
"And before you ask, NO, I DIDN'T MEAN IT THAT WAY."
...Just checking. We're just weird like that, I guess.
Curious, where the fuck are Shining and Chrysalis, and why are these guards not in pieces?
I mean, sure everybody has been wanting Cadance to do that all this time, and it was erotically awesome, but I wasn't ready for that other crap. How was it even necessary?
I was thoroughly shocked at the end of this. I think 11 stallions need to be tossed into a furnace to melt alive... FOR SCIENCE!
I clopped to this
1588543 Don't be a buzzkill, let the Men have their fun... I mean you can't expect a "Special" Force to operate without release, can you? ):}