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First epilogue. There are more on the way!
1233156 the apple family... apology?
Nice epilogue you have there. Can't wait to read the next one!
AofTA logic: Give your dad a facial, get an increased allowance.
No comment.
That ending... horrible... but funny as hell!
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Make another story, the one where both of the princesses are gone in this story. lol
I think it would be wonderful if if Celestia used body-altering magic, or Chrysalis and Armor used REAL love magic to let her body bear children.
I also agree we need to see a resolution between the Apples and the... Twilight's family.
Oh, and Cadence's "special unit" needs to get what they deserve. Preferably something harrowing. My frst idea: cast the "want it, need it" spell on each them while they're in each others presence. Homosexual male orgy! Give pegasisters and gay bronies something exclusive to jack off to! The only qualm here is that it's exclusive presentation of male-male sex may impy true love between two males can only be forced, and is unnatural. The alternative is to transform them into mares, using the aforementioned, biology-changing magic, and throw them to horny changeling drones so they can better... "appreciate" their former attempted actions.
Why would there be changeling drones conveniently lying around? Because Twilight's making them! I'm sure you can guess why.
EDIT: Or just let the guards get raped by changelings as they already are.
Oh god, oh sweet Jesus.
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I'd love to hear the song! If you need any help with the lyrics, let me know!
1233386 Tiarawhy did... there's an animation with that in it.
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Well, I wouldn't know anything about that...
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1234117 I KNEW IT!
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To be honest, a changeling leg hole job always looked like it would hurt. That's why when I decided to include it in the story I knew I needed to emphasize that the insides of her leg were soft and spongy, while still remaining firm. Just like screwing a memory foam mattress.
1234144 Lol, yeah, I always thought it would be serrated. Not very pleasent.
Unless, you know, you're into that sort of thing.
Also, I just rewatched "A canterlot wedding" but this story has become my head cannon. So I saw Cadance as the cause of the whole ordeal, and felt sympathy fro chrysalis (even though I knew that wasn't the one who would fall in love with Shining Armor.)
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Yeah, the only thing that stopped me from making the Chrysalis from the episode the one Shining Armor fell in love with, was because I couldn't explain how she would have gotten back after blasting off like Team Rocket.
Well, that and I wanted someone who's only crime was trying to kill Shining Armor. If the Chrysalis he fell in love with had been the same one from the wedding episode, then that would also mean she was the same one who attacked Celestia and imprisoned Twilight.
As much prejudice and suspicion was heaped upon Chrysalis throughout this story, it would've been more justified had she been the one featured in the episode.
You can still feel sorry for the Chrysalis from the episode, though. They both started out the same, blindly following Cadance's commands. Only once the second Chrysalis had some quiet introspection did she begin to make her own decisions and reject the wishes of her creator.
This story is also my head cannon when I watch the season two finale as well. I knew I couldn't kill off Cadance in this story, because she'll be returning in Season Three!
Once Cadance's episode in Season Three comes out, look for Adventures of a Teenage Foalsitter 2!
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Adventures of a Teenage Foalsitter 2:
Cadance's Virgin Back Door
"This time, it's pers-anal"
1234357 Oh, god, that was the best.
Also, reason 2 was the one I didn't think of.
Bravicimo! A definitely agree that there needs to be a resolution with the apples, and it might be funny to see the WWR in 'action' as it were, and I kind of want Twilight to get one chance with Shining, just to be fair.
Aww this was cute. Actually now that I think about it this is the first time since the honeymoon suite scene where Chrysalis was pleasuring Shining in her true form. I was a little sad when she turned into his dad at the end since that makes another scene where she wasn't in her true form. Though I felt a little better at the fact that it wasn't Shining asking her to transform this time.
~Have a good one.
Porn it up. Porn it up all the way.
1234357 Do it. Please do it.
1234092 It's going to be a parody of "Stacy's Mom" by Fountains of Wayne entitle "Twilight's Dad"
Stacy's mom came up on pandora while I was reading chapter 14 of AoaTFS and I was like "Yes. This is happening." I've written so many song parodies it's ridiculous. Here's the threee I did last night so you have an idea of the general quality of my parodies.
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Haha survivingcollege.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/i-see-what-you-did-there.jpg
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Sounds great. My only recommendation is to change it from "Twilight's Dad" to "Shining's Dad," Since presumably this is Cadance singing to Shining Armor about lusting after his father. "Shining, can't you see?"
Also, the fact that you'd be using "Dad" instead of "Mom" means that you have better rhyming options.
Instead of "I know it might be wrong, but I'm in love with Stacie's mong" you can have "I know it may by bad" or "I know it makes him sad, but I'm in love with Shining's dad."
Good luck!
1235793 Twilight and shining are both going to be referenced in the song, seeing as she started off as Twilight's foalsitter... and "Shining's Dad" seemed a little bit "off" for some reason. But maybe it'll work I dunno yet. I'll send you a PM with the lyrics once I'm done, and after you look it over, I'll release it to the public!
Also, I see we think the same in terms of rhyming scheme... get out of my head!
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While I will concede that "Shining's Dad" doesn't quite roll off the tongue as well as "Twilight's Dad," my reason for approaching the song from the perspective of father and son was to mirror the intent of the original "Stacie's Mom," which was mother and daughter.
In "Stacie's Mom," it draws a parallel between Stacie and her mother. Stacie is closer to the age of the singer and would be the more likely candidate for a girlfriend. The singer rejects this notion, opting to instead lust after the older woman.
The song would still work if it were called "Bobby's Mom" where a boy has the hots for his best friend's mother. But one aspect is taken away when the genders of the child and the parent mentioned in the song are different. Namely, there's less of a comparison that can be made between the two.
Having Cadance tell Twilight that she wants to be with her dad works, but just like with Stacie's mom, the sentiments of the song carry more resonance when Cadance falls in love with Orion while rejecting his son.
The bottom line is, I want you to write the song how you want. Maybe each family member could get their own verse. I don't know. These are just some things to consider.
Let me once again emphasize how brilliant your idea is. Parodying "Stacie's Mom" with Adventures of a Teenage Foalsitter is a stroke of genius.
Fantastic.
Depraved, ugly, sickening at times, and oh so...
So...
SO
erotic.
I love you.
I will say, I am quite pleased I found this story of yours. It was completely hilarious and just completely awesome. I think you had me when you first spelled her name though: Cadance. Everypony and their FREAKING grandmother still calls her Cadence, for some retarded reason I cannot fathom. I loved Cadance before Hasbro even made it official. Well done and I eagerly await more Epilogues.
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Well, Dr. Doctor, I'll give you the news.
The Want It Need It spell is a reference to the third episode of the second season of MLP:FIM. It's called "Lesson Zero." That episode includes the first mention of the Want It Need It spell in the series and takes place within the timeline of this story.
Hope this helps!
1235900 Well, after much thought, it will indeed be "Shining's Dad" I figured out a way to make it work.
Also, you have no idea how much that means to me, coming from you.
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Glad to hear it!
Also, I hope I didn't come off as too pushy or demanding.
When song lyrics are done well, they can be clever and often convey a deeper meaning. I'm sure you'll do awesome. Feel free to private message me with your progress. I'd love to read over your work and offer the occasional bit of input.
1239138 I will, I promise! And don't worry, you didn't. This is based of your story after all.
This was awful. And yet so fucking funny
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In chapter five, Cadance's youth and lack of control resulted in her casting an amplified Want It Need It spell that overemphasized the lustful desires of its target.
Several factors contribute to a spell's intensity. With practice, Cadance eventually learned how to become more subtle and nuanced with her magic.
Great question, and thanks for the feedback!
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D'aww, thanks!
This was a blast to write and I'm looking forward to writing more stories in the future!
1244798 what about the apples?
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There's still five more epilogues to go! The Apples will get a turn, I promise.
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All these questions and more will be answered in their respective character's epilogue.
I just noticed that chapters 23-26 are lyrics from a Rolling Stones song...
1233915 Their punishment must be more severe... MAKE THEM LISTEN TO FRIDAY FOR ALL ETERNITY!!!
That sir, was one hell of a hormone twisting, boner inducing, fells grabbing story! 5/5 pinkies!
and for the hell of it 6 mustaches!
hay for one this made me laugh my ass off and why I had this in the background
The ending of that ending.
Bronystories, I have something to say.
I have a very vivid imagination, and I read this fully while hyped up.
Let that sink in for a moment.
Siiiiiinking in...
Now I can say what I wanted to say!
Damn you for being such a good writer, because you have officially scarred my brain. I hate you for that, but love you for this story.
Sadly, Rainbow didn't come by to read this with me. I'll let her read it later, I suppose.
*Steel checks the clock on the wall.*
Ahhhh, crap...work. Alright, good work Brony, I'll be following you for a while yet. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to do menial labor for Pinkie.
*Steel gets up and heads for the door, groaning about overly-heavy sugar bags and a particularily insensitve Pinkie when she's hopped up on sweets.*
That was... just horrible.
It was awesome actually, even though I'm not much of a fan of blowjob scenes, it was pretty good... until that surprise ending. Bleh. I lul'd.
1278102 I object to this just because Friday isn't th worst song out there and eventually you'd grow to ignore it, sing along with it, or die.
Brain after the bit with Chrysalis turning into Orion: WTF!? WTF!? WT?FDFSFDSFD ERROR 0x18475 CRITICAL ERRERERERERR..
*AOL Voice* "Goodbye."
TOTAL BRAIN SHUTDOWN.
man i actually feel light-headed i was laughing so much, not cool, freakin' hilarious, but not cool
Part of a marriage is f@cking with your partner. Shining is gonna have to work his ass off trying to keep up with her.
I really hope Twilight doesn't end up being alone.