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The ending made me go all:
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It was night. Everypony in Orion's home was asleep, or so he thought. Twilight crept out of her bed, using her horn to dimly light her path.
She snuck into her brother's room, humming their special song. "Once I fill you with more air," Twilight whispered, "You'll be my bigger brother best friend forever!
ahhhhhh, dicks
*shakes hand*
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I know that feel, bro.
WHAT THE FUCK?!
Why do I keep reading these? WHY?! I only become more and more disappointed with myself. Great story, by the way, but WHY?
must erase the memory of this story the last part of this story is unforgivable. Twilight i have to tell you something from your deep past. You sucked your brothers dick. she said bluntly
Oh god that ending, come on bro...
Dat ending.................................
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... That ending.
Besides the ending, the descriptive explanation of a guy going to the bathroom was a bit disturbing. But meh, it's still a good story. NO MATTER HOW WRONG IT IS.
..I'm really enjoying this. I'm so sick.
.... PFFFFTTTT nice job, Orion. Look at what you've done to your foal.
This is possibly the worst thing I've ever read. Not even in how it's written, just the idea.
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MY JIMMIES.
My oh my, that ending was so Overall its a great clopfic so far.
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Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest!
I appreciate the feedback!
"Once I fill you with more air," Twilight whispered, "You'll be my bigger brother best friend forever!"
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it begins
are you ok my friend?
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I'm fine...
...at least that's what the voices in my head keep telling me.
Thanks for asking!
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Someone finally captured the essence of filly Cadance.
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I Love your stories, but one thing has been bothering me. When most stories show thoughts they use Italics to show that it is neither narrative, nor conversation. I'd like to suggest you do the same because it made Cadance seem really open. Otherwise, I love the story!
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I'll go back and tweak them sometime.
Are thoughts still put in quotes? I'm still learning the ropes on some of the finer points of fanfiction.
889557 a voice in my head is calming me down and telling me that I am not insane the other 7 are screaming stuff
one is screaming something about sex
the other is talking about food
the next is trying to sleep
the next is calling himself a sexy beast
the next is talking about money and ruling the world
the next is talking about what others have and what I don't
and the last one is just screaming nonsense about hating everyone
-clop clop clop-
That brochure part made me lol hard. I had to go back and read it again just to make sure.
as pure as the pesasus-driven snow
What's a pesasus? A Mexican pegasus?
Every descent bone in Orion's body told him to stop
What about the ascent bones ?
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You silly. Orion doesn't have any 'ascent' bones. Only winged-creatures like the border-flying pesasi have ascending bones.
Update: Fixed!
Thanks for the feedback!
Why does it go back and forth between present tense and past tense?
... I don't want to hate on this story... I love how well it's written and the subject matter seems more than viable from what I've seen on Law and order and shows like that... It's just the part about wittle Twily at the end that gets my goat... No offense. *Goat standing to the side says "none taken."*
does laughing at the ending make me a horrible person?
great fic btw
"Ohhhh no."
"OHHHHH NO."
OHHHHH YES, TWILIGHT. It's definitely happening.
"I'm not letting you click that 'Next Chapter' but-"
*click*
"BUCK!!!"
Yup, the Inception theme music did go well with this story. You had me going for a bit there with the gun.
Good story, but that last sentence....
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Careful, too much air and the balloon might go boom!
Hey, this is fucking scary.
897682 Well, I think they failed horribly, she's not even supposed to be fat!
The gun scared me half to death.
Then came the brochure. That was a very nice
""Once I fill you with more air," Twilight whispered, "You'll be my bigger brother best friend forever!"
So, you going to make a chapter of that? No...?
I noticed that the tense slipped into present a few times.
774684DAT FACE!
Lovin this so far. Not disappointing in the least.
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You have corrupted my soul, good sir. For that favor, I will have your babies.
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773893 I agree good sir http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/230/b/3/doctor_oh_shit_face_2_by_justcallmejash-d5bkvmr.png
The end of that part, NO TWILIGHT! STOP! YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO DO!
I love every bit of this. I must be a motherbucking sicko
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I can't think of a better picture to show my horror... now for the next chapter.
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You are a writer of erotic stories and you provide your readers with the perfect images to go with them.
You are a true gentleman and scholar.
Unfortunately, all those internal voices were drowned out by the primal shout of a different kind of bone.
I was going to correct you, but it turns out that horses also lack the baculum.
Oh... god *gag* DUDE WHAT THE FU-
I KNOW YOU SAID INCEST WOULD BE INVOLVED BUT FUCK MAN
BronyStories, what are you doing?
No.
Stahp.
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Ordinarily, Cadance would have attend the practice.
ATTEND
Cadance stayed in that position for a while. She wanted Orion to see her submitting herself to his carnal desires. She took shallow breaths as her tongue tickled the back of his shaft. Orion leaked precum directly down Cadance;s throat.
This should be, Cadence's.