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Thanks for the ride everyone! I had a blast writing it! Epilogues to follow!
...is it a bad thing that Luna and Celestia being off smexing each other was my second guess for where they were this whole time?
Lunestia?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Great ending and can't wait to read the epilogue(s)!
Wincest Warriors.....lolz!
This was an utterly fantastic story, but I'll give a longer profession of love for it after the epilogue.
Cheesy ending.
And by that, I mean a fucking fabulous ending. I can't wait to see the epilogues. Also, I may have to write a song about this story.
I have been waiting so long for this..... so very long.
A superb conclusion. The way Luna referenced the first chapter was quite clever.
That was an awesome ending! Celestia and Luna being in the Wincest Warriors was great xD I also liked the reference to Luna watching ponies clop from the beginning there, very nice.
While the epilogues are still left to do, it's sad to see that the main story is over. Clop and silliness aside this was a very clever story and a great enjoy to read. The level that Cadence went to just to fuck Orion, which turned into her falling in love; a sick, twisted, demented love might I add. You did a wonderful job making her to be this crazy xD. The scene with Dazzel and the Diamond Dogs *shiver* that was just awful and really made me hope that poison would work. Then what she did to Twilight and Dazzel with the guards just added so much fuel to the fire.
Something that I liked was that you never had Shining and Twilight do anything with each other. I know there was that moment when they were kids, but other than that the incest thing with them never happened. It created this neat little love competition, even if it was a lost cause. What made me like this also was when Twilight thought that she might turn into what Cadence had become when she was thinking of whether to save Chrysalis, though I wish it had been brought up earlier. Seemed kinda like it missed its moment when it first came up.
The clop was, well simply put, hot! ^^; I don't what else to say to this.
The comedy was great! This story had me laughing all the way through xD The silly wackiness of it all was very enjoyable.
I look forward to reading the epilogues!
~Have a good one.
Wow, just wow.
The amount of feelings this fic has generated is immense and varied. I can honestly say I did not expect to laugh so much, care about the storyline so much or feel sad. This was unexpected from something with clop but welcome.
Thanks for the great read.
1237870 its part of the show. its when twi forgets to write a report to celeatai so she has to make a problem to help and report. thats what he means
Written masterfully, emotions tugged mercilessly and a fitting end to a fitting tale.
I am a proud brony.
Normally, I'd be throwing a fit at this predictable ending, with the princesses deus ex machina. But the explanation of what they were doing was so ludicrous that it made up for it. I totally wasn't expecting that.
Now to read the epilogue...
Wincest Warriors - *facepalm*
Also WHAT`S the solution to Twi´s love/incest problem? U NOT TELLIN' US???
Well, it was an enjoyable ride till the very end, sometimes confusing, more than often crazy, but everytime very enjoyable and fun to read.
Ha! Totally forgot to finish this story. Anyway, crazy ride. So worth it
Yay! It's finally over!!
Actually, uh, dang, dat sucks. But it was awesome, right? Slightly.
This is easily one of the best stories I've ever read, in more aspects than a hundred. Descriptions were not held back at all, vulgarity was not relinquished or stopped. There was awesome gore, sloppy messed up sex, enjoyable sex, hilarious sex, sexy masturbation, innocent rape, horrible rape- you know what, I think you covered pretty much every possible way of intercourse I can think of. Freaking amazing.
There was a constant point of us not being able to ever determine what would happen. The scene was always capable of changing into literally anything and we would've never seen it coming(pun intended). Multiple times the most random messed up, awesome, or horrible crap would happen, and I'd just sit there, dumbfounded.
Often times during this I would have to turn away from my screen in disgust, or inability to continue from laughing too hard.
It's definitely taught me a few things too. I've learned a few forms of what trust is and how it should be used or gained. I've learned the inner workings of a villain's actual mind and how things go down. Sometimes I could find true sympathy for Cadance, but others I just easily hated her in every way. Sometimes she was incidentally sexy and adorable, others she was irritating and gross.
There were always times where I hated where things were going, but secretly wanted them to continue. Also times where I hated where things were going, and hated you more for continuing them. This story literally had everything, and some of that I really wish you left out, or re-thought about showing- see 'Dazzle's Dog Days'-. There was also a constant... drive that went on. It was never continuously going on and on about one thing. Although there were times where the stretching of explanations or scenes got annoying, it still ended up being enjoyable with the way of rooting. I was always cheering for one side or the other. Actually, there were times where I was really cheering for both sides to accomplish what they wanted to. That's amazing, and weird. lulz.
Unfortunately, I was not constantly searching for random errors to help you out, although I can say you can work on your punctuation, but change nothing else, please. It's all utterly perfect and I love you. But yea, here's some of my favorite lines:
"So it's not just the kingdom she wanted to rule, The princess also lusts for your father's firm tool." -Zecora
"Do we clop into a cup, or are we supposed to just jerk one out straight into the cauldron?" -Shining Armor
"I will not give up. I'm not a quitter, No matter how hard you wreck my shitter." -Zecora
" Atlas dropped the cup in surprise. He stared at the princess and blushed. In spite of being caught in a compromising position, the colt compulsively continued to beat his meat. " -'But If You Try Sometimes'
" Celestia blushed as Luna disappeared behind her sister and began hungrily eating her out. " -'You Get What You Need'
Also, I'm curious about your 'Alternate Universe' tag. I've loved how this story is careful and good not to disturb actual past events, it's stood beside the show's plot and storyline well, filling in things cleverly without changing much. All the different big stuff happens after the season finale, so in case I missed something, this story doesn't technically need that tag.
Awesome, badass, disgusting, and amazing. I love you for this.
1233341 hey what about the sniper in the south tower he didn't get a kill at all and we all now that snipers are rely needed on a team so they matter so in conclusion he aint happy
When twilight asked what they were doing, I knew the answer. What I did not expect was the bandanas. I think that fixed all the mental trauma. But this must have one long epilogue if it goes on for another 6 chapters...
awwww shiiieeet i lost it there, my sides are in orbit i am in hysterics that is one of the greatest lines i've ever read god bless you you magnificent bastard you!
Wincest warriors and proud of it? LMFAO I lose it there
-Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have entered the battlefield-
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Ahhh Yeah! Light that b*tch Cadance up!
"Go to your room."
Wait, that's it!?
In all seriousness this conclusion was amazing.
I also fully support princest. It would be a crime if those two hot mares weren't bucking eachothers brains out.
1233341 1253431 Except for Twilight Sparkle. Twilight doesn't have a special pony. Exactly what can Twilight do to make Shinning Armor admit that he likes her, or get somepony to like her. Tell us Celestia.
6215107 Celestia and Luna, I'm glad for you two, but doesn't Candence need a stronger punishment/counselling. Also do both of you spy on ponies when they clop? Not that I have a problem with that. Maybe instead of just looking, maybe you can join in. I'm sure you guys swing both ways. That way you wouldn't be bored again, even though your sister might be the solution to your problem.