o dear the family's gonna have some explaining to do to each other.

Okay the story is getting disturbing again. I like it.

818113
There are myriads of things disturbing about this story. What specifically disturbed you, in a good way, about this most recent chapter?

818149 Dazzle being traumatized about being raped. That is gonna haunt her forever.

818161
Yeah. She's too worked up about her children's safety to process what happened to her. But later when she has some time for introspection...

817109
"ALL HAIL LUNA! PRINCESS OF THE NIGHT! PATRON SAINT OF CLOPPING!"

817295
Thank you for the feedback!
When you refer to a dog's member as "Rover's Red Rape Rocket," it's been a good day for alliteration.

At the beginning of story i was like "cool, cool, great, go on, hmm, ok, cool" and laterchapters i was like " ...i gotta go see a therapist"

818489
Quid Pro Quo, doctor. I tell you things, you tell me things.
What about the story do you find most disturbing?
Is it disturbing in a good way, or a bad way?
(I apologize in advance if it's disturbing in a bad way.)

Why is it that hard to imagine that Cadence did survive the cum-vulcano and is responsible for the whole mess? -___-

man, i like this story!
don´t listen to the dislikers, buddy

This is a fun story. Yeah, it's disturbbing, but it gives a grim perspective on a otherwise bright world. If you think about it, that is how Batman ended up where he is today, a badass super detective that got darker and darker

Ever since Shining and Chrysalis started to hook up, I've been hoping it'd end sorta like this.
... But given how any semblance of predictability has been thrown out of the window by this point, now I just hope that it doesn't end with everypony turning against Chrysalis and having a 'happy ending' via her death.

Also, why must quality stories with changelings in them be so unbelievably hard to locate ?
(TL;DR: Love your story, hope Chrysalis doesn't die on a whim :c)

820731
Thanks for the kind words!
I think the problem with many of the fanfics with changelings revolves around the fact that they are depicted as being transparently evil.
For me, it's much more intriguing for them to have an arc. Over the course of the story, the characters should change on the inside; not just the outside.

Awsome... all I have to say...

818520
Its disturbing in a way that in my opinion ( no offense) the story is twistingly messed up in a bad way but in an entertaining good way, just the clashing of views is what im saying. ( i generally dislike these types of stories but after i stumbled onto yours i just kept reading)
Anyways, interesting story, ill try to keep reading this ( with intervals of comedic fics) to see the end resolution.

if ur wondering what i find disturbing here in particular is the evil phsyco grim nature of Cadance and her deeds. ( if it was celestia instead then id have no prob) btw, i almost never read the descrip when im bored, just now i got to it..it could have warned me if i read it sooner.

824486
Thanks for all the feedback!
I agree! We need more variety in changeling stories. Very little is known about them canonically. so writers should feel free to tell unique stories with them.

831495
Thank you, Thank you.
I have more good stuff planned for future installments.

831580
The location of the other Princesses in this story is a mystery.
Nopony knows where Celestia or Luna are.
Maybe their whereabouts will be made known eventually...

831580
Cadence RETURNS?!
4.bp.blogspot.com/-n_3hzIju7NU/T8gyGiF86PI/AAAAAAAABIA/ZdwW8qqzx4c/s1600/hawkeye.gif
Who's up for Exploding arrows up her ass?

837178
"Good fillies sleep with their fore-hooves above the sheets."
"Why? What could they do in bed at night with their hooves under the...gasp!"
"It's also fun to do in a hospital bed!"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ewwZzQyHv4k
"Gross gross gross gross gross."
"Maybe I'll just watch it one more time."
[Several viewings later]
clop clop clop clop clop clop
"Yah."

837388
Thanks for all the feedback!
I recognize my writing style can be rough around the edges sometimes. Thanks for sticking with the story, in spite of reservations!
I'd appreciate it if you decide to watch me, as I try to add new chapters at regular intervals.
If this made you feel uncomfortable, you may not be ready for another one of my stories, "the Taming of the Screw." It's a much darker story than this one, but I still enjoy it. It might not be your cup of tea, though.

Awkward drama is awkward.

EPIC FLUTTERBITCH REFERENCE.

When the shit hit the fan and went down the toilet I thought it would bottom out but, it keeps going down the pipes! Excellent!!