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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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This story is a sequel to Daddy Discord: Fluttershy


When Twilight showed signs of stress due to a huge project she was undertaking, Discord takes matters into his own hands and decides to help her unwind. Luckily for him, he has previous experience on how to de-stress a pony. With his newfound fatherhood instinct, he plans to help Twilight no matter what. Thank goodness Fluttershy is coming along, he'll need all the help he can get.
cover art byArtieCanvas

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 28 )

Twilight foal is most adorable foal

I like where it's goin'. Have a like. I am waiting for more! :twilightsmile:

Oh i so approve of this. here's to hope that Twilight becomes a proper demon spawn.
he he he.:pinkiecrazy:
...well ok maybe not but one can dream can't they?

where did you get the cover pitcher

It's pretty cute, but the rather frequent grammar errors are rather distracting.

And along comes a Pinkie:pinkiecrazy: and then a Dash :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Foal Twily is most adorable Twily

Still unsure if this needs to be rated Teen or not.

Why not ask a mod?

Discord smile as he watched his previous charge toil away like any princess would. He beamed with a sense of pride and stared in no particular direction as thought crossed his mind “Hmm I wonder if Applejack could use a break too.”

Are you going 2 make a sequels ?

7477722 -shrugs- I don't know I mean left it open for more if I get motivated to do so. So I guess maybe just not right away.

All I can think about with this story which I won't read (won't down vote either, so don't worry) is that trend of having a tough action star slum with a terrible kid's movie, like Kindergarten Cop.

7841524 thanks, uh really wish I could get examples fo error. What was few missed commas? cause i'm terrible with them.

Twilight took another long sip of her tea, thinking it over in her hea. Couldn’t be that bad, she was at her limit after all. After momentary pause she looked up from her cup. “Fine but no funny business.”

Do you like to use your hea kids?????

8601626 hehe woops. And now that you’ve brought it to my attention, I can see three other errors in that one paragraph. How did I miss those?

Once at the quaint little bistro, Discord snapped his talons, poofing up a light pink highchair just for Twilight. Ponies stare at the odd sight as the foal cooed. ‘In you go,” he giggled, setting the filly into the seat. True to its function, Twilight was unable to get out of it on her own. Her hooves banged on the tray doing it again and again continuing to coo like the innocent foal she was. TWilight soon felt energized and bounced in her padding even gurgling, the inner princess was soon completely entranced by the foalish mindset finding joy in such a simple activity. “Aww, Twily got quite a lot of energy after her nappy, “ he babied, although the filly didn’t reply back simply clapping her hooves.

TW Timmy Walters i light the way

Omg Twilight is so cute as a baby!

Comment posted by cocomilk deleted May 5th, 2021

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwww! :rainbowkiss:
:twilightsmile: foal twi is so cute! *squee*

Could we get a story about the cmc as foals and discord as the daddy, I kinda want to do it, if I can have permission if thats ok? :twilightsheepish:

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Sure go ahead, the idea isn’t exactly exclusive or anything

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