Since the show over, I'm gone, no more stories from me
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To Spike, the mare of his dreams is gorgeous, pragmatic, industrious and kind and down-right radiates agrarian allure. He found that all in Applejack when he and Twilight moved to Ponyville, the honest farm mare that is just as sweet as apple cider.
It's a little hard explaining this to his crush.
Based off the song called; Applejack
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This makes it sound like Ponyville resides in Applejack. I suggest to change it to "He found all of that in Applejack when he and Twilight moved to Ponyville."
It would just make more sense that way
~Harmony Pie
7096235 Yeah me and words never got along well.
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"It's a"
7096304 Look this is the reason why I editor, even through he doesn't look through my descriptions and I'm starting to point out plot holes in me trying to prove a point. In short, if you point out all the spelling errors we maybe here for a while.
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Oh, sorry! I was just trying to help with the summary. Why don't you get another editor, from the group?
7096355 I do have a editor, he's just tired and having a bad time so I'm editing my own work for a while.
I'm more of an AppleDash kind of guy myself. But this was actually pretty good. A few missing letters here and there but all around great story
7096534 Thanks that was my dyslexia but
7096537 I understand. I am not dyslexic as far as I know but I have my days where I can't English right.
I'm with you on that one. I really do enjoy the show and the community, but I don't think I've ever been a fanatic. I like to describe it as being a casual or average fan; I enjoy MLP, but I don't devote all my time to it, I enjoy other things too, and I'd think this applies to a lot of people.
I enjoyed your story by the way. I chuckled a bit at the part about train times.
It was interesting to see you explore Spike and Rarity's alternate friendship. More so, I liked that you didn't have AJ hold a crush for Spike, but that you maintained her relaxed and kind character in at least allowing Spike a chance. It's a direction I haven't often seen and I enjoyed it.
Here's an up-vote from me and a follow, after all you've written for the Applespike community and your tenacity. I've seen your stories around since I first joined and honestly, I'd say you've come a long way since then.
Keep it up, dude!
This story was adorable, freaking adorable.
Nothing more to say really.
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Not to sound mean, but I have wrote three Applespike stories and two of them was good this one and The Waterfall.
7098489 I was merely acknowledging my your contribution and saying that I for one appreciate it.
Cute story, I like how it seemed to get that he likes Rarity. I like this better than how it is in the show.
7098849 Thanks Jade, you need to work on your wording better. Maybe that's why we're friends we both not know how to do the typing right.
7098572 Thanks dude it really does mean a lot to me, just how far I have come on writing, I'm slowly getting better I don't know when I'll write another Applespike story I have a story plan where the two are a background pair but I'm not sure on the story yet.
7097701 Maybe it because Spike is adorable in this story he does sneeze like a kitten.
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It's a very good story I enjoyed it. But you still need to work on your sentences otherwise I was slightly confused. Otherwise it was enjoyable to read.