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When Rarity accidentally breaks a mirror, Pinkie decides there's only way to save her crush from seven years of bad luck.

Obviously, the solution is becoming Rarity's personal anti-bad luck bodyguard.


Cover art done by the awesomely talented PinkProposal !

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Comments ( 57 )

A ship that isn't Raritwi from you.

¯\(°_o)/¯

Colour me surprised.

EDIT: I'll read it later.

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cute

I always enjoy reading your stories--and your take on Rarity is always fun.

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Thank you!

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Sometimes it is necessary to appease the MLP Shipping Gods by giving them something that isn't RariTwi. Also I nearly submitted this fic to the RariTwi groups out of sheer force of habit ooooooops

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Thank youuu, Cyne! That means a lot! And I'm glad you like my take on Rarity :twilightblush: She's my favorite character, so it always means a lot when readers like the way I write her.

well this is unexpected, story of Pinkie and Rarity and Not Twilight and Rarity?

*checks to see if the world is ending*

huh....was sure that would be one of the signs.

i'll read this tomorrow.

:pinkiegasp: Raripie? Mono my birthday is months from now!

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I'm sorry, RariTwi fandom... I've betrayed you all... The pink and white ship has tempted me over to its dark side...

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Now, now, Steel. I wrote this for your future-self to read during your birthday! I plan in advanced!

7070209 actually I don't have a favorite ship but I know you do. :rainbowlaugh:

Maybe everyone is right, a Rarity x Pinkie ship story, me getting a editor the end of the world is starting to come oops :twilightsheepish: Well if everything coming to an end soon I guess I have time to end this tomorrow.

God, your Rarity is so perfect. You write good characters in general (Twi, Pinkie, Tia...).

But Rarity.

God, Rarity.

Flirty Rarity. Smooth Rarity. Serious Rarity.

You are just amazing.

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Getting an editor is never the end of the world, it's the start of a beautiful new writing friendship o:

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Thank youuuuu, Misago <3<3<3

I appreciate that a lot! There are many interpretations of her, and I'm glad you like mine, for as you very well know, my love for Rarity burns like a thousand splendid suns, creating enough energy to FORM GALAXIES AND STARS AND NEBULAS AND PLANETS AND I just really love Rarity so much don't even look at me

Ahem. So, yes, thank you, it means a lot! :D

Really darned cute. Why doesn't this have more likes?

Fluff is love! Fluff is life!

7070306 We all knew Rarity is the origin of all the stars and planets in the universe. That's just what makes her the best <3

Oh god, Raripie, from you?! This must be my lucky day :heart: Raripie is one of the cutest ships (and is also OTP) :3 And this is very cute as well, the cutest of the cute :rainbowkiss:

too cute :rainbowkiss:

/dead

Seriously though there's gonna be a Raripie episode? We just need Raritwi now PLEASE WRITERS PLEASE

Ok now I'm confused. Am I on the right planet or did I fall victim to a wormhole that led me to a parallel world. If so god hates me I would of liked to become a pony :rainbowlaugh:

In all seriousness I like the fact you are expanding a bit. You are an awesome writer and I look forward to reading this little piece later when I have time. :twilightsmile: I will edit this post once I read and tell you what I think.

This is wonderful. Short and very sweet, with a ship I've never seen from you before (RariTwi titan that you are). On reflection, this is a nice counter to The Enchanted Library, which is quite the opposite of short (not that I mind that), features your usual RariTwi antics and, whilst sweet, is a tad more serious than this fluffy little short. It's nice to see you branch out a little, and I'm glad to say that this is every bit as good as I've come to expect from you. Bravo, Mono, you continue to amaze (as always.)

Keep up the great work!

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Thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Very sweet. Though I'm not normally a fan of this ship, it wasn't half bad here!

Pretty cute little story. Nice job going outside the box for yourself here. You really do love picking the more obscure ships when you write your stories. It's always a fun change of pace from a normal story.

This story is very funny.

Why, last summer, she had spent nearly two months inside Twilight’s castle without even asking for permission, until Twilight had soooo much fun, she took Pinkie back to Sugarcube Corner herself.

:rainbowlaugh:

Mono if I could enslave you and have you write shipping stories for me for the rest of your life I would. Keep up the good work and maybe I won't need to ;).

7071137 There's a RariTwi sock?

"I always take my friends safety seriously, Rarity,"

Missing an apostrophe in here. :duck::heart::pinkiegasp:

This isn't Raritwi! And that bothers me not one bit, ha ha!

Praise Lovey!

I almost drowned in fluff....:pinkiegasp:

A Rarity and Pinkie episode? Colour me interested. :pinkiehappy:


This story is way too sweet to be healthy. But I'll eat it up just the same. :raritywink:

I feel like I'm cheating on Raritwi by reading this.
But it's so cute AHHH I'm dying.

her smiles made Pinkie feel like there was a party going on in her heart

D'awwww. Pinkie, you sweetheart.

“I think I’ll have a lavender one,”

Heh... of course you will; it was irresistible.

Anyway, this was fun... I could almost see Pinkie typing this up herself while bouncing in her seat. Either that or you downed a triple espresso to better match the frenetic pace of narrating for her. Both work. Cheers.

Do you ever write a bad story? Cause I haven't found it yet.

Or maybe she was still sleeping, since she needed her very important beauty sleep — not that she even needed it, Pinkie thought, but she wasn't going to argue against what made Rarity happy.

That was a wonderfully written little piece. A compliment, and a nice look into how much Pinkie likes Rarity. Whatever makes her crush happy, makes her happy. :raritywink::pinkiehappy:

This is simply adorable~~~~ I'm not exactly a fan of Raripie, but this is so nicely written that the shipping part of my brain gave this a thumbs-up!

I think this story gave me diabeetus. :twistnerd:

One of these days Mono...one of these days you're going to kill me with these cute stories.

Very cute and clever. As always your characterization is spot on for both Pinkie and Rarity!

*aggressively supports raripie*

Lucky Charms at 1:45 in the afternoon? It's Lucky charms and I'll have it any time of the day I please!

Now, if you'll excuse me, I am about to have me a bowl of this diclicious marshmallowy ship. Part of a fimficcer's balance diet with many important mental vitamins such as Vitamin D'awws, and Cutes.

Tis good to be back. Yum!

Very adorable, intriguing to see you tackling other ships, though surely Rarilight holds the firmest grip on your heart.:raritywink:

Oh mer gersh! I loved this story! So cute, and....BEAUTIFUL!
Cries :heart::fluttercry:

A fun read! I think you nailed it with pinkies train of thought. It really read like her.

This was a good story. I loved it. Glad I finally read it.

Oh Luna that was one of the cutest things I've ever read. :rainbowkiss:

“Now, see,” Rarity said, eagerly flipping the page of her book and showing it to the pony lying right next to her on the picnic mat, “this is the chapter where Detective Spring Trap realizes that it wasn’t the butler spying on them, but really it was—”

Spring Trap huh?

Something tells me he likes Purple....

Without another word, Rarity lifted her hoof and closed Pinkie’s slightly opened mouth before trotting out the door, making it very hard for Pinkie to follow since she felt quite like a very smitten puddle of giggles.

hmm. yes. Because Pinkie Pie knows what a

very smitten puddle of giggles

looks like.


Ha,ha! I love that sentence! Very Funny!

I'm glad I read this story, it is very cute.

TRATOOORRR!!!!!!!!!

What's this? Mono's written a RARIPIE and not RARITWI? :pinkiegasp:

Super cute! Pinkie is characterized perfectly. Loved it.

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