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Rarity helps Pinkie out by kissing her boo-boo. This is totally okay and not awkward.
Warning: Shipping. So much shipping.
Cover image (and inspiration) taken from this comic by bellsPurgebells.
Why not also try This fic's sister-story by Twinkletail, which was inspired by the same reddit thread and posted at the same time?
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And that's twice my daily intake of sugary-fluff for the day.
Very good job, Ocalhoun.
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What could be better than one sappy cute shipping story?
TWO sappy cute shipping stories!
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I already read the other one. Both are so damn cute.
Oh my goodness, that was precious. It did perfect justice to the wonderful picture that inspired it.
I really liked all the falling into Pinkie's inner monologue. I often feel like some authors try and make Pinkie purely lolrandom (and I even occasionally fall into that trap) but I like to believe that she knows exactly what she's doing and what she wants, and it's great to see an author nail her inner monologue like that. Not only that, but it was definitely fun to see how the two of us differed in our approaches but still managed to keep parts of it the same purely by accident.
This story gave me a big ol' happy
Eeeeee sho cute
So fuggin' cute.
im sorry, but all i can think when i read that was this:
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Well, at least I know it's cute!
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Why does every story I write end up referencing that?
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Heh, yeah, if there's anything I really know how to do, it's apparently getting the characters' voices right.
Which is weird because I don't really consider myself a strongly character-based author.
7289722 the game or the video?
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Various videos based on the game.
7289791 my best guess is that since so many people read your stories, and since tf2 is so popular and memeable, I'd be a bit surprised if there wasn't a tf2 related comment.
Or it could be that everyone is a troll
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I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now #82.
My review can be found here.
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Ah, yes, the traditional 'Not Recommended' from Titanium.
One of these days, I'm going to write a fic you'll recommend. One of these days.
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Well, you've done it before.
I'm sure it will happen again.
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But I'm going to keep trying!
This was really good. You got the characters spot on and this really felt like a proper continuation of the picture, which was adorable enough before you added to it, and damn-near heart-stoppingly cute once I had this story to think about when looking at it. This is possibly the sweetest thing I've read on the site; bravo and keep up the good work!
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Heh, wow. You really know how to flatter a guy.
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I try.
Nothing wrong here, Pinkie's just being Pinkie.
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I'm pretty sure that's the least in-depth review I've ever gotten.
7768392 less review more summary to get people interested
Oh no. Ohhhhh no. The horror of what you have done, ocalhoun, has hit me.
This story was adorable, slightly too much heavy ship for my taste in this style, but still dang cute
And then Twilight teleported out of the shop. And then the diabolical bit of my mind brought forth the memory of Blink, causing a teeny mental breakdown
You have undone every mention of a teleporting individual; they can never have the capacity to be anything other than a grim, dark reminder of where that poor pony has gone...
That's the mark of amazing writing, when it influences you permanently. I love it!
Although considering what might happen to Twilight in this particular case, I try not to think too deep into the situation
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Heh, wow. That story really gets to people, doesn't it? ^.^
Cute.
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Thanks! ^.^
This was adorable as shit. Good work.
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I try! ^.^
Ahaha, i find myself enjoying this ship the more i read, but i've got to say this was one of my favorite ones! Wonderful work on this, it was very well done!
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Thanks! ^.^ Most people don't seem to like this one as much, but I'm glad you did!