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Monochromatic


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Decorating Golden Oak Library for the holiday season was never Twilight's favourite thing to do, but her friends have kindly offered to lend a hoof. Things would be going much faster, however, if Rarity hadn't found Sunset Shimmer's fake crown buried inside a box of decorations.


A short RariTwi fluff written while taking a breather from working on other stories. Based on a headcanon a friend told me on Skype which I had to make into a fic, because cute headcanons are my one weakness.

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Ah, this is delightful! There are a few little proofreading things to tweak (capitalization, mostly), but this was a nice read after a unpleasant day's work. So thank you, dear. :raritystarry:

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Ah, I'll get right on it!

And thankss, I'm glad you liked itt

This story absolutely reeks of terrible. Terribly cute, that is. How dare you release something so cardiotoxic that it causes instantaneous myocardial ischemia.

Sorry! You're not the only one procrastinating for college exams, buddy. :twilightblush: I loved reading the story; I just wish I didn't feel so guilty doing it.

Dear god, it's so cute and sweet it actually made me feel a bit sick.

Well done, sir. :)

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Thank you! And I apologize for making you slightly sick :trollestia:

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Thank you! I'm glad you like my stories! And yes, it's never a bad time for Donald Duck cartoons.

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Yeeeeah, I spent half the time writing thinking how much I was gonna regret the homework I /wasn't/ doing. Thankfully, the semester is nearly over!

And thanks, I'm glad you liked it!! :twilightsmile: (and good luck with your exams!)

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Be proud in the fact that only you made me believe I was wrong when I said "RariLight/RariTwi doesn't work" (Don't hate me! I'm beginning to think I was deluded...)

Will you write something like Injuring Eternity again? A really nice, long, sweet & heart-breaking story? :twilightblush:

And good luck with your homework :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, RariTwi isn't popular at all, so if I managed to make someone else like the ship, then my job here is done! Thanks for letting me know, it makes me very happy to hear :twilightsmile:

As for IE, well, I'm not sure I'll take on anything quite as... heart-breaking as it. I have a few fluffy, cute, all that fics planned (+ an on-going one which I haven't updated) that will be approximately as big as IE, though. The Enchanted Library AU might be even twice as long. But yeah, right now there's no plans for that.

I'm actually currently re-writing IE because I feel it deserves a better writing style, and because I'm entertaining the delusional idea of trying to submit it to EQD. And really, if i want a RariTwi story to get accepted there, it has to be good.

And thank you! I'm nearly done with homework, and I'm gonna use this month to write like a maniac so there'll be a decent amount of fics coming your way.

The bastion of hope for Rarilight fires another devastating barrage at our feels. Many casualties. The princess commanding the aforementioned bastion was later seen celebrating by snuggling the ever-loving hell out of her fashionista girlfriend.

Crowns for everyone involved.

Man, this was cute. I love RariTwi and stories like this always make me smile.

Comment posted by AlliHarmony deleted Dec 6th, 2014

This is sooooo adorable! Don't worry, I'm also 100% Raritwi trash!

5348514 Wait RariTwi (*shuddr* I hate those portmanteaus) isn't popular? But it works so well! They're just beautiful together, as this story demonstrates brilliantly.
Also, I haven't read IE but have to ask, why do people even want heart-wrenching stories? I mean they are just so painful to read.

You are the prince(ss) of RariTwiRityLight fic! Well done, yet again. :raritywink:

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Ahh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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Ahh thank you! And yes ahaha we are the best kind of trash ;D

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Well, from my own experience, it's not popular in the fanfic or fanart side of the fandom (it's starting to become slightly more popular in the fanart aspect, but not a lot). As for why people like heart-breaking stories, I'm afraid I don't have an answer for that whoops

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Thank you! And Princess of Rarilight? Well, I suppose I'll gladly take that title! :trollestia:

Comment posted by Ponywubs deleted Dec 6th, 2014
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Comment posted by Ponywubs deleted Dec 6th, 2014

monochromatic you're the queen (king?) of fluffy cute rarilight stories. by the way are u male or female?

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Ahahaha thank you, but honestly, if i'm really the queen of rarilight, I owe it to my skype friends who love bombarding me with adorable ideas they know I can't resist :trollestia:

Also, it seems fimfiction accidentally posted your comment several times so I deleted the extras whoops

5350401 It should be more popular in fanart. I mean, I know this a subjective thing, but I think they're the two most beautiful ponies. Fanart of them together would be so adorable.:twilightsmile:

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I really do like Injuring Eternity. Its the first thing that made me consider RariLight and in the end I totally accepted it :twilightsheepish: So yeah. Nicely done there. Heartbreaking isn't bad...well okay, maybe it is, but its done so well!
I hope you get it to EQD, I think it deserves a spot from this "unpopular" (growing popular?) side of the ships.

I don't mind Fluffy/Cute (etc) either! 'less done on purpose I'm pretty sure you can make it great.

Looking forward to all that coming my way :twilightsmile:

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My story has accomplished its mission, then :trollestia:

Cute story. I believe “sensible” should be “sensitive” in the first paragraph.

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ah, thank you! I've fixed it now!

You know, with all your great stories, you have single-handedly brought me on board the RES Rarilight

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Have I? That means my mission is complete :trollestia:

In case you wondered why I had that little line from Rarity about Twilight being the princess of her heart, this is it.

Now, granted, the line about the hearts. All me. :heart:

:raritywink: Aww. If there was ever an author who could convert my fave Mane 6 ship from TwiDash to RariTwi it'd definitely be Monochromatic.

your writing is absolutely fabulous!

You could have been my royal advisor and bodyguard!

cough

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A nod to the bodyguard universe of this ship, a universe which I would like to read, but I can’t seem to find where it starts.

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