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Twilight and nurse Redheart find the cure to an epidemic that has scourged ponyville.
Written as a challenge in 2 hours with the word "control" as the prompt. You should totally check out BathroomStahl's and Weatherbug's "control" challenge stories too!
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Ohoho I daresay this is an exquisite piece of writing.
7050709 I would sooner argue with you than agree, but thank you nonetheless!
I don't think my execution was that spectacular, but the concept was the gem in this story. I may explore it at a later date, who knows.
7050790 Well the idea is good. An unknown anything can be a very useful plot point. It was a bit fast paced and it would have been better if you described the disease in greater detail. I also don't know why Twilight was working with a nurse instead of a doctor, maybe you could have added a bit of backstory to that. Hope is also a very good solution but is was revealed too soon. Also, the not making sense part was a bit rushed and kind of obvious from the beginning. My brain was screaming Discord since the disease was revealed, but other than that it was pretty good. This is just my opinion though.
7050790 Damn it! Please continue this story! What happens next!
Wow.
Great story and I can't believe it only took you 2h.
One tiny nitpick:
What does Applejack have to do with this story?
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Probably out trying to harvest while sick with the disease.
Also, Spike is the disease. This story could just 'drag on' forever...