If you are enjoying my stories, I thank you. Nothing means quite as much to me as someone really appreciating what I put out into the world. So, from the bottom of my heart... Thank You.
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When a little filly personally visits her hero, Rainbow Dash, she receives one of the best things she could ever be told.
I want someone to tell me, "When I grow up, I wanna be like you.” And I want to be able to look back to them and say "You don't have to wait. Start now, find out what your passions are and follow them. When you grow up, I want you to be better than I ever was or will be."
-My Dream
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Not bad but the last few sentences you changed it into Raincloud instead of Raindrop.
Touching. That was a nice story :3
That was the sweetest story I read. A few grammar mistakes, like not capitalizing Raindrop's name in some, and a few other errors. But overall, nice story!
One little mistake I saw a lot was calling the filly "Raincloud" instead of "Raindrop".
Its so cute!
Other than that, I loved it.
Aww! It's so cute!
There were a couple of places near the beginning where you need to capitalize Raindrop.
Otherwise, great story.
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So many OCs to keep track of
And my editors abandoned me late at night.
Edit: all should be fixed now.
Adorable.
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That's so dayumn beetaful. (PLEASE don't get on about grammar, i do it intentionally)
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Must... Resist... Editing...
3339960 Perfectly acceptable, once my brother asked me to look at his essay. I saw things like this. That was the best rant of the year.
By reading the description I thought this was another clopfic lol.
Guess you can tell where I've been. xD
There goes my feels again today.
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Is it bad that I thought the exact same thing?
dang dude. it's so hard trying to not to not to shed liquid pride after reading this. seriously, even if it's barely over the word limit for this site, it's just amazing. kudos my good sir. kudos.
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Big things can come in small packages...
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Thats a nuke.
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trust me, i know the saying...and i can't agree with you more on that
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10/10
wow
so grammar
such spelling
much english
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Is there something.. bothering you?
Very well done
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Thanks man, I really appreciate it.
Most adorable fanfic. I was Daawing and it touched me.... In the feels.
Aw, that's sweet.
Pretty out of character for Rainbow, but still sweet.
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Can you point to where he touched you?
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Good story! keep it up! I hope to see more like this!
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I'm doing oneshotober, you will definately see more.
Well written. Liked the end.
What I immediately thought of when reading the chapter title.
I liked it, well written.
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My rationale behind OOC Rainbow is that she is much more mature at the time, therefore much more interested in others rather than herself.
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Point taken. Still, you pretty much establish at the start of the story that Rainbow is exactly where she always wanted to be, and that she's apparently completely satisfied with that. She seems to be the perfect example of how a lifetime of hero worship can totally pay off.
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Was it a lifetime of hero worship, or was it a lifetime of following your dreams? Rainbow never strived to be like somepony in particular, she strived to be the best that she could. So when somepony says they want to be like her, she realizes that will only hinder them. It sets a limit, while being the best you can is an unattainable limit, something you always have to work for.
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Edit: I approved this based on reading it and upvoting it in the past, but another member of the Twilight's Library staff pointed out some errors that had slipped my mind. There are some spelling issues, some missing capitalization, and the like. I would really like to encourage you to give this a good proofreading (or two) to work out those minor issues. I wouldn't want to remove the story now that I've approved it, but others might...
Daaaaaa'w. Such a nice little read
I love seeing Rainbow be more than the self conceited jerk I see a lot of
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Thank'ya kindly.
I liked it, but the framing felt a bit awkward. There is no explanation as to how Twilight met this filly or why she brought her there. The line about her parents worrying almost sounded like she just more or less kidnapped Raindrop. Also, the balloon was a little weird. An alicorn should have a better way of conveying a pegasus foal.
Despite this, it is a very good story. It's just that I found these bits to be distracting.
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IIRC this was before twilight's alicorn transformation.