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Davesknd


I am a humorist. I write funny stuff... I hope. Since my pony-name appears to be Dusk Dash (there is a chart), I have decided to dedicate my life to quick and evil science!

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This story is a sequel to Celestial Bodies


For years, the Followers of the New Moon have hidden from Celestia and prepared Equestria for the return of their one true Princess. They laboured tirelessly without doubt and remorse. They prepared and they prepared well!
Then they got the date wrong and completely humiliated themselves. But it takes more than that to keep them from dressing up in silly garb and meeting to up to work for a better Equestria!
These stories will mostly follow the chaos that Autumn Galerina and his soon-to-be wife Diamond Shadow have to deal with in their daily routine of being productive citizens and leading a cult of madponies who used to worship Nightmare Moon.

Expect snippets of romance, comedy, shameless cameos and excessive amounts of Autumn-abuse!

Title image made by me, smearing over the awesome work of Longinius-II

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

Interesting start, certainly going to be following this. Noticed a couple of typos, though:

making him look almost like a vampony form an old movie

from an old movie.

“Now that we are officially recognized, we get this amazing plague,-“

Amazing Plaque. Also, wrong kinds of quotation marks in the story, not sure what's up with that.

One other thing: wasn't it a plot point... well, a joke point, at any rate, in Between Day and Night that Diamond Shadow had only recently become a batpony. If I've misunderstood that, I apologize, but I thought that was a thing.

7069187 Thank you for the corrections. I'll see to implementing them instantly
Also: you are referring to a flashback in the other story. Technically, in this snippet, the thing with the pole and the syringes was last week.

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Fair enough, it's just I thought the lines before the flashback implied it to be fairly recent (to those events). This makes sense, though.

7071005 No biggie. I do have a timeline laying around to keep things orderly but even I might get confused, so I'm happy that you try to help me when I make mistakes. I hope you liked it.

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