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Set in the Chrysalis-Verse
In a bout of boredom Chrysalis choose to hold open court for the day and meets the Flim Flam brothers, who have an offer she can't refuse.
After all even in the changeling ruled Equestria there are still profits to be made and the Flim Flam brothers are the ones who are going to make it.
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This was nice.
I liked this, short and sweet but nonetheless enjoyable.
Unexpected twist at the end, there.
Irks and grammatical quips, but I honestly don't care. I garnished the story and enjoyed it.
Ignore what the status quo is, fellow writer. You have a fine piece of work here.
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Thanks a lot for the comments they mean a lot. I'm happy everyone enjoyed it.
This was quite good
That Flim and Flam can build something that works, I don't dispute. The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 proves that. But that they could sell something without 'overselling' or embellishing its abilities (or screwing it up themselves), that's a little hard to believe, until you read the end of this story. (Say goodbye to those bits though.
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Some people can make a profit off anything.
So before I dive in, what does this entail?
6947348 In the season 5 finale one of the worlds Twilight visited was the one where Chrysalis won
Ahh, Flim and Flam...even able to put one over on Chrysalis! Although it DID work, so not sure exactly who came out ahead here.
Did Chrysie free Celestia and Luna as well, or just the trapped random ponies? I can see her keeping the Princesses trapped to avoid any chance of rebellion and to keep the sun and moon in her hooves, but I could also see their release being some stipulation of the Flim Flam brothers, even though all they care about are bits. I'm sure if Celly/Luna were freed by Flim/Flam they'd have more bits than even they could want.
6949490 Just the random ponies were freed. Chrysalis isn't foolish enough to release the princesses no matter how much love was at stake...At least not yet
Clever stallions.
Very enjoyable.
Lovely little story, and a nice twist at the end.
I will make you an offer you cant refuse - vito corleone