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When the Main 6 lose their connection to the Elements of Harmony, Twilight decides that it’s time for a new generation to take over, and who better than the children of the Main 6. Flurry Heart has also come to Ponyville to see if she may be one of the new Element Bearers, but can she focus on that when her mind is never far from the friend she lost in her youth.
This story follows the show up to season six, but before the final.
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Will keep an eye on this story. How often do you plan to update?
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I'm not sure enough to give a sold answer to that, sorry, but the next two chapters are nearly done. Chapter 3 just needs a small rewrite, and 4 is mostly done. I plan to try and have those two out within a day or two.
Twilight stuck a bunch of shit head teenagers in a room and expected them all to become friends. Went about as well as one can actually expect.
Sounds interesting. Tracking!
While I do enjoy this story and wish for it to continue as it is very well written, There is just, something about the way the children are portrayed that irks me, its probably just my extremely right winged justice and truth seeking side, but holy crap! These are exactly the reactions to daily life and school that I see al the time and it’s so mind boggingly sad and stupid that I just can’t wrap my brain around how ignorant they are. Don’t get me wrong, these are great characters you are portraying here, just, well, ugh, please please please have them make some progress soon and not be complete ignorant teenagers who think the world is them? Don’t make them all goody two shoes like Twilight and the gang, I think that’s the divide you are going for, and I like it, just maybe please tone down on the level of idiocy and ignorance 😔 pretty please? 😁👍
That being said, this is just a personal complaint and should not be taken seriously unless a large amount of people agree.
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Don't worry, right now it's still early, but I plan to have them develop as the story goes on. I doubt very much they will be 'goody two shoes' by the end, but hopefully they won't be so idiocy.
I love how everyone except live wire is pretty much the exact opposite of their parents
I loved this whole story! Wonderful! Great work! Any idea for when there might be a new chapter?
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I've started writing again, but right now I'm trying to find a schedule I can stick to consistently enough to get any work done, which turns out is harder than you would think.
Thanks.
The story is not dead, if anyone is wondering, I do plan to finish this thing at some point.
Edit 2023/24: this is still true!