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Sabrewolf9


Hello, I love writing FanFiction because you can write anything you want to using your imagination and creativity!

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Flurry Heart starts to wonder what she is supposed to do as an alicorn. Can a new friend help with that?

Even if he's the son of Sombra!

While no one accepts him, she does. Was that the right decision? Will she follow her heart or will she follow her role as princess? (I do not own cover art)

Small prologue of the story:
The cold wind rushed across her face as she desperately tried to outrun the pony chasing her. Her hooves hammered into the snow as she ran. She was breathing hard and fearing for her life, but it was no use. He was right behind her and catching up, but she didn't notice. The wind was loud in her ears roaring like a storm and her heart pounded in her chest. The moment she turned her head to see if he was still there he attacked, slamming her body on the ground. Her breath got knocked out of her and the shock of the impact didn't give her time to react. When she finally ignited her horn he had already cast a spell on her. She drew her last breath before darkness enveloped her vision. (read to find out what happens. ;-)

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 27 )

New chapter will be out this week!

I like it so far.
And, I may be a tiny bit bias but, SOMBRA HAS A SON!!! Heheheheheheh. :trollestia:

And this is how I always think of Sombra reacting.

8394166
Thanks!:pinkiehappy: and yeah that's funny.

8395075
I'm guessing that since this is your first story, you don't have a proofreader yet?

Seems like a good start. Shows signs of a first story for an author, but not a bad start. I'll give you an upvote.

"Come down hear please," she said and Flurry walked down stairs to see what her mother needed.

You're spelling it right , but using the wrong word .

8446408
Oh thank you, fixing it now!:pinkiehappy:

Love your story. Can´t wait for more ! :moustache:

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No I plan on continuing it it's just taking a little longer than I expected.

8394166
I love hishe!
Sombra: hey princess Cadence guess what.I have a son!:rainbowlaugh:

Is it just me or does anyone else get the feeling Sombra's son is going to be Luna's son as well. She seems kind of jumpy

Nice chapter!
Forgive me for being a Grammar Cop: you forgot the "k" in "knew".

How sweet ❤️
"Goodbye" is one word there's no comma between it. Just trying help.

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What a cute chapter 😍
I also see you spelled "Teleport" correctly this time good job. You spelt it wrong on the second chapter but I didn't want to be obnoxious by reminding you. Plus you said that this is your first story right?

Just wanted to point out you spelled "Maybe" wrong

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Thank you so much! And actually it's supposed to be like that because she is saying "good" to him saying he won't and then she says bye. I can understand the confusion though.

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You're welcome.
How's the rest coming along?

The plot thickens!

Ooooohhhh Shadow Hunter finally likes Flurry Heart. I know Cadance is a loving princess but in the future, they should accept Shadow even though he's not evil.

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