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This story is a sequel to Legends Never Die: The Search For Sunny


In the Crystal Empire, darkness is brewing - King Sombra has returned. Flurry Heart is petrified, but with her friends by her side, she tries to do everything she can to defeat this pony who tried to take so much from her. Meanwhile, Sunny Starscout journeys beyond the borders of Equestria to befriend the creatures that live there - and discover that the situation is much more dire than any of them had thought. Equestria's fate now rests on the shoulders of seven ponies, and the future remains uncertain.

WARNING: Contains no relation to My Little Pony: Make Your Mark or My Little Pony: Tell Your Tale. This is strictly related to events that happened after My Little Pony: A New Generation.

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I think it's amazing, bookhorse125. I really like this new sequel. I'll be willing to read more of your upcoming chapters soon. Keep up the good work! If four things are followed - having a great aim, acquiring knowledge, hard work, and perseverance - then anything can be achieved.

Of course, Twilight Sparkle had been given this amulet when she became ruler of Equestria and the royal sisters retired, but it hadn’t taken her long to realize that she couldn’t keep up with the exhausting task of ruling both the day and the night, and with nopony to help her, she decided to leave the amulet to its on devices - literally. She constructed the Tower of Day and Night and put the amulet inside it, so that, as the clock kept ticking, the amulet would be magically activated at the right times, bringing about day and night without Twilight ever lifting a hoof.

Well it makes sense to be honest with you how the sun and moon move by itself

So it looks like we went back to the past and it looks like Luna was waiting for somebody to guard the tower but apparently she didn't have to wait this long because a pony showed up but it's the crystal pony named midnight apparently he had a dream that one of his friends told him about this Tower and somehow knew about this area and Luna felt like that he could be the one to keep an eye on the tower if anything happens and apparently the crystal agrees because it chose him I wonder if he could be that mysterious Pony that Sunny was talking to well I guess we'll find out next time

“There really is a pony here,” the changeling said in a hushed voice. Her face slowly shifted from shock to overwhelming excitement. “Oh my stars, this is so amazing!” she squealed, dancing on her hooves. “Hi, I’m Imara, it is so nice to meet you!” The changeling rushed forward and seized Sunny’s front hooves. “What’s going on in the outside world? Are ponies really as awful as every creature is saying they are? What’s going on? You have to tell me, I swear I’m going crazy from only seeing the same places for my entire life.”

Wow this Changeling is very excited to see a ponies despite the history but it's actually really nice to see somebody that didn't give up on them and she is very energetic like Pinkie Pie Autumn Blaze silverstream Gabby and princess skystar again I miss them

When the light cleared, Sunny was still… Sunny, but now her golden wings were shaped like a bug’s, folded neatly on her back, her eyes were entirely a bluish-green, and her mane had disappeared, replaced with a sparkling pink ridge down the back of her neck.

Whoa ok she can to transformation spell that is awesome

“I’m used to it,” she assured her. “I’m told it’s because of my free spirit , whatever that means.”

Wow her and Izzy can get along with each other and they both have in common with each other

“Ocellus,” Sunny said quickly, also wearing a fake grin and hoping that the changeling who befriended other creatures and saved the world a few times wasn’t idolized and written down in changeling history as the hero of the changelings.

Aww it's always nice to see those kids actually have recognition and also representing their Kingdom and I've always been interested to the young 6

So okay it looks like Sunny finally got out the forest but then she saw the changeling Kingdom she could have asked them but unfortunately they don't have a really good relationship with ponies ever since the magic disappeared so she needs to retreat back to the forest to figure out what to do until a female changeling showed up and her name is Imara and just like Izzy she was pretty excited to see other ponies aside from her kind but Sunny told her about the situation and hopefully whatever they're doing let's just hope this will work because right now things are really bad oh and by the way that transformation spell is pretty cool are we going to see other creatures well I guess we'll find out next time

I'm so liking this new chapter. Wow, Sunny's at the changling kingdom. I wonder what she'll do, I better wait and found out. You're welcome, bookhorse125. You're an amazing author!

“Well, if the old stories are to be believed, changelings used to be not very nice creatures,” she told Sunny out of the corner of her mouth. “In fact, we were downright mean. We would take the form of some creature you loved and grow stronger by feeding off their love for them. But no matter how much we took, we always wanted more. But then King Thorax showed us that we could share love instead of taking it, and suddenly, we felt a whole lot better! The hive used to shift just like this, but once we started sharing love, our feeling of being whole was reflected onto the hive, and it became solid.”

“But now…” Sunny prodded.

Imara sighed. “Now it’s reverting back to the old ways.” She dropped the gloomy expression, trading it for a cheerful smile. “But that’s if you believe the old stories, which just about no creature does anymore.”

Well you can't blame them. I mean losing magic meant losing their abilities to sharing love. Wonder if there's a smashed statue of Thorax? I mean if his way of sharing love got them to be part of losing their magic, wouldn't they reject his teachings after getting their magic back to prevent it from repeating?

Even if Imara isn't like Izzy, at least she gave Sunny a chance to say her piece and a way into the kingdom. it won't be easy, but as the new alicorn of this generation, she has to convince the other species that Cozy's words were just lies. And Sunny is improving on her magic.

You're welcome, bookhorse125. It was great, and I like your book cover it looks amazing!

Oh boy everbody are the edge right now flurry heart is still having her p t s d about King Sombra how he terrorized her kingdom and almost destroying her aunt and her friends and their imprisonment her parents and things did not make things better because hitch is starting to lose his patient and I get it but little does he doesn't know that Sunny got herself out of there and basically he argue with them and now he's basically just ran off to find her by himself but Zipp follow him so he doesn't get far like I said everything is starting to fall apart but Sprouts and the remaining ponies try to reassure her that everything is going to be okay the only thing is on the world are they going to stop him and they still need Sunny's help I guess we'll find out next time

Don't worry Flurry. Hitch is just stressed that he wasn't able to protect Sunny like he wanted to.
You might not be the element of magic, but you got friends by your side. Time to take the kingdom back.

So far so good. I wonder they'll heading to? I better wait and find out. Good job on your new chapter, bookhorse125, this is starting to get pretty good.

Sunny swallowed and stepped forward. “It’s true! I - I’ve seen Equestria myself, and the ponies there - well, most of the ponies,” she amended under her breath, “they don’t want to hurt you. I-in fact, they want-”

“Oh, no one wants to hear that!” came one of the changelings, followed by a rousing boo from the others. The changeling who spoke flapped his wings and hovered beside the queen and pointed an accusatory hoof at the two changelings in the back. “Your Highness, these two are clearly delusional! We were told by a reliable source who very clearly sympathized with our causes that ponies were not to be trusted.

I'm sensing some Deja Vu does anybody having some Deja Vu right now

“Fine!” Imara called, turning on her heel and starting towards the exit. “We’re done here, anyway. Come on, Sunny.”

are you serious you basically blew her cover

Well done this did not go as smoothly as they wanted to be in fact they made it worse so the meeting was going on and Imara and sunny tried to convince them that the ponies I'm not the enemy especially Sunny star Scout but unfortunately it didn't work and what makes things worse Imara basically giveaway sunny disguise and now they have to make their escape and so far Imara is now a wanted changeling for betraying her own kind but she wanted to follow sunny and they look like they are heading for the Dragon Land but something tells me this won't be easy to convince them well I guess we'll find out next time

So there's changelings and Dragons I wonder the Griffins the hippogriff the yaks the Kirin the Buffaloes and some of the creatures are going to show up that would be very interesting to see them again

Say yes, Hitch. Zipp really needs you're help. Coming together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success.

For some reason, she felt a pang of jealousy - would he do the same thing for her? Or did he care about Sunny… more than he cared about her?

Ohh I'm sure he does care for you zipp

Well then it looks like things really got really difficult okay so is Zipp was still searching for hitch knowing to the fact that they need each other but when she found him they finally found the location of the Legion of Doom headquarters and thanks to Cozy glow and her frustrating saying out loud they heard that Sonny did Escape which that's good news the bad news is they have no idea where the heck did she go and hitch is starting to become desperate finding her and Zipp like to reassure him that they will find her a right now flurry heart needs help defeating King Sombra and now hitches in Conflict decision and Zipp still wants him to help out I really hope he makes the right decision because this is really bad right now well I guess we'll find out next time

This is starting to get very good, bookhorse125. I hope Sunny will straighten things out with the hippogriffs.

Sure, most of them are not on board with the whole ponies are nice, but Imara at least is. It was never going to be easy to undo Cozy's lies, but at least if one changeling is on board with Sunny, then there's a chance for the rest to be.

“I just had my molt,” Ash sniffed. “It’s a dragon thing,” she explained to Sunny and Imara’s confused expressions. “It’s when we get our wings, and it usually shows that we can go off on our own as big dragons now, so my father - m-my father kicked me out.”

Oh yeah I remember smolder mention about that but dang that's kind of sad

“Oh, I know all about that,” Ash sniffled, grateful that the conversation was taking a turn away from her. “I heard the whole thing. The ponies want to exterminate us all because they hate us, and they’re led by a super-scary pony named Sunny Starscout who united the pony tribes just to bring us down.” She looked at Sunny. “I think you’re her, and I don’t believe that for a second. I don’t believe anything that pegasus told us.”

At least there's some creatures doesn't believe cozy glows sack of Lies

Well then this is really not going well but at least there's some good news but anyway so sunny and Imara finally made it to the dragon lands and they need to figure out how to convince the other dragons but unfortunately how in the world are they going to do that until a dragon showed up and it's a little one her name is Ash and apparently she's in an emotional state and she think when she got her wings she will leave her home and it turns out her father is the dragon lord and it gotten bad because apparently cozy glow already got to them so unfortunately convincing them would be out of the question and Ash really doesn't have the greatest reputation here so they decided to go to Mt aris where are the hippogryphs live and apparently Imara is really not helping with that attitude of hers I get it what she's been through was bad but it doesn't mean you had to bring down other creatures and hopefully she would learn that lesson and with that they are heading to the next location with a new Ally hopefully they will listen I guess we'll find out next time

These are ao good that I went into a phone store just to read! My phone is currently broken, sooo yeah... I guess not all adictions are bad...

Remember Hitch, friendship. Poor Flurry is ready to faint.

That's right Sunny, put your foot down. Being kind doesn't mean to let mean words pass.

Thunder immediately wished he hadn’t said anything. “Um… I just… heard something. Last night, the queen and her unicorn friend were talking, and I was stationed nearby, so I… may or may not have accidentally overheard their conversation?”

You're eavesdropping lol oh come on dude

“ Do you have any idea how lucky you are? ” Zoom snarled at him, and he flinched. “If the commander found out that you were eavesdropping on the queen, you’d be thrown out so fast it would make your head spin! I couldn’t-” She slammed her mouth shut before she could spew anything else. Publicly admitting that she would miss the silly green pegasus if he were thrown out of the guard was something she didn’t think she could ever find the courage to do.

Awww she really cares about thunder so much that's cute

“Could you try to make a little less noise?” Zoom hissed at him right before she slammed into a tall, wide machine that was bigger than she was.

“Would you care to show me how?” Thunder asked innocently as Zoom massaged her muzzle.

Lol thats funny I like that 🤣

Well things are really getting more interesting so it looks like Zoom took the opportunity to find sunny but Thunder told her he wanted to help her and apparently Thunder also told her about how Queen Haven and Alphabittle are going out there to find her daughters and her friends and despite Zoom hesitation and really wanted to keep an eye on the queen she has somebody with her even though she really doesn't trust Alphabittle which I don't think he wasn't trying to do anything bad to her she has to give him some benefit of the doubt but anyway they finally arrived at Maretime Bay and heading for the factory and it looks like they bumped into the two Earth ponies toots & Sweets which I admit they could have come up with a better name but anyway Thunder told them about the situation saw the two earth pony show them about the radar of the magic once they use the machine to find the location of Sunny they found out that Sunny is off the map so I wonder what they're going to do guess we'll find out next time I do like how other ponies and creatures helping out sunny and the others

This is getting very interesting. For national teacher day I would like to say to my teacher for being the most greatest teacher ever.

Imara flipped onto her back in the water, still in her seapony form. “Yeah… I guess so,” she said, not meeting eyes with the dragon. Even though she hadn’t gotten into any arguments with Ash since the Dragon Lands, Sunny could tell that Imara didn’t like Ash - she thought she was weak.

Hmmm I wonder if she kind of distant related to pharynx despite that she has some positive but she can be a little bit hush

“There’s no short-cut in life,” Imara said, her eyes closed so that she didn’t see the dirty look that Sunny sent her.

Wow that sounds like what my dad always say

It seemed to Sunny that this was a question that Kailani had been thinking about for a long time, and she still didn’t know the answer. “I… I’m not sure,” she admitted. “I mean, one one claw, my parents would never lie to me if they knew they were lies, but I find it all a little hard to believe.”

On

The hippogriff took a deep breath. “They… didn’t believe me,” she began. “I tried to tell them nicely, too - but they said that as long as I didn’t have any evidence that they were being told lies, they weren’t going to believe me.”

Yeah of course that's going to happen 😔

Sigh of course that would happen so it looks like sunny and her friends finally made it to Mt aris and sea Equestria but since they can't go near to that town and since they can't go underwater Imara transform into a sea Pony to try to talk with them but unfortunately when she returned none of them will not listen and her attitude is really not helping at all and they need another plan but until a sea Pony showed up but she transformed into a hippogriff so she can actually talk with them and her name Kailani and Sunny told her about what is going on and what the legions of Doom been feeding them lies about ponies and other creatures out there and now she's in a conflict about believe in all the stories and everything so she wanted to go with them but she needs to convince her kind to see the reasoning but unfortunately she came unsuccessfully and basically they're back to square one again but at least they got another creature joining with them but still this is not good if other creatures can't listen Equestria is in trouble well I hope they find a way we'll find out next time

This series is really good, keep up the great work! I just binge-read the entire Legends Never Die series

Whoa ok things are really getting good now so it looks like Queen Haven feel something is wrong out there and Alphabittle can tell something is off with her and it looks like they're just basically just talking about how they can try to help and they will look like they're having their moment until Phyllis came to the door and told them that something is wrong out there and she's going out there to find sunny and the others and queen Haven made her decision to go with her and Alphabittle as well and she told one of the guards that is going to be gone for a while and putting her in charge while they're out well at least now there's more help out there but will it be enough I guess we'll find out next time

So now Zoom and Thunder are also on the race to find Sunny. Good, she could use the help. Also, nice character interaction between all four.

I knew that's going to happen. And good job on your new chapter, bookhorse125. Tbis is starting to get very good.

No worries, bookhorse125, we'll wait. Your story is getting very interesting and great, I like it!

A changeling that is tired of things staying the same. A scared dragon that follows Sunny. And a Hippogriff that doesn't want to believe in the lies anymore. What a little group that Sunny is gathering.

I hope Sunny will explain everything to the buffalo chief about the Legion of Doom and about Cozy Glow, too. It is understanding that gives us an ability to have peace. When we understand the other fellow's viewpoint, and he understands ours, then we can sit down and work out our differences.

Ever wonder why we never saw buffalo again? Seems very suspicious to me.

It's because of due to controversy because it's basically Indians versus Cowboys scenario which a lot of people got sensitive over that the only time we only got to see them when they're in the background during season 4 and season five but after that they disappeared until they show up in season 9 but never talk still in the background at least they acknowledge they exist but because of controversy didn't want to deal with that so they just basically dropped everything about them which it sucks because I really like little strong heart

“Ash?” Sunny called, and when there was no response, she tried again, but louder. “ Ash?I? ”

You just part I on it is it supposed to be in !

“My father’s talking to her right now,” Little Braveheart said. “We have great respect for dragons-”

I guess because of spike and he became friends with the Buffaloes that's why ash is safe

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