Starlight Glimmer finds a spell that can bring ponies back from the dead for one day, from sunrise to sunset on the next day. As a surprise for the Apples, she decides to bring back Applejack, Apple Bloom, and Big Macintosh’s parents for a day.
This is the first installment in the Perfect Pear Chronicles.
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My one true ‘complaint’ if you’d like to call it that, is that Zecora’s dialogue seemed a bit off. That might be just me, though.
I almost sobbed reading this, so you know when it’s that emotional for someone, you did good. I also really love your writing style, because it’s very easy to follow along.
Very, very well written!
I absolutely loved this! It was so heartwarming and I loved it!
My only complaint is that the pacing in the beginning seemed really fast.
Other than that, really heartwarming!
the ponies are eating chicken?
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Well, horses will eat meat in real life, they just can't eat too much because there is a chance the meat will rot in their stomach and get them sick.
Edit this and write one more word.
PLEAASEEE
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They apparently can.
This story is beautiful, wholesome, and honest-to-god lovely.
I loved it!
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That's cool of Starlight... kind of reminds me of the ending to A.I. (bring David's mom back for one day only but he dies with her too peacefully)... Also has a Spiritfarer feel to it too with the stars in the sky.
This was beyond cute, great work
This was beautiful and sad ahh!
Loved this story especially this bit. Great job
So the living were just talking to memory based clones? Not the real spirits? Darn. Still I'm hoping that whatever experiences these two had would actually reach the ones that passed.
This was a very good one-shot. They had chicken legs and not turkey legs.
Oh man pretty emotional story so Starlight found a spell that can bring ponies back to life but only for two days but once its use it's gone forever so they bought back bright Mac and pear butter and it looks like they're trying to make every second to be with the family even pear butter got the chance to see her father grand pear and her friend Mrs Cake and bright Mac to see his old friend Burnt Oak and Applejack even introduce her friends to her parents including Applebloom and Big Mac introducing sugar belle to them as well this was a pretty emotional story right there and what a way for them to spend their days catching up with them keep up the good work
Reading this was like a punch to the gut
That was truly great.
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What word?
A wonderful idea, but the pacing was extremely fast. If you were to rewrite this I would make a few suggestions.
Again this was a beautiful idea, so my thoughts are only in support of making it even better.