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Almost a week has passed since all three pony tribes were reunited and the magic returned, and Sunny Starscout's mind is consumed by a question: what happened? The question in itself is simple, but the answer isn't so. And after discovering a hidden page in her dad's journal, Sunny finds a clue that begins a long train of investigating that takes her and her friends across Equestria and beyond, to find out what happened all those years ago, to finally find the answers Sunny's been wanting about the Fall of Equestria.

WARNING: Contains no relation to My Little Pony: Make Your Mark or My Little Pony: Tell Your Tale. This is strictly related to events that happened after My Little Pony: A New Generation.

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Sprout doesn't have to be the one to press charges against Hitch for abandoning his post; any citizen of Maretime Bay could very much do that.

Trying to remove the ability for a pegasus to fly, removing their advantage over the other tribe and doing it while the royal family is in the air, causing them to crash. That there is High Treason.

I get the feeling that this and the disappearance of Argyle are related.

Anyone else have any ideas for why the Wendigos disappeared?

Well the tribes weren’t in active conflict with each other this time like they were in ancient Equestria.

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Could also just be a lack of magic making the wendigoes not exist.

Wendigos? Twilight could have gathered them all up and banished them to Equestria Girls world. Or sent them to Limbo. Or zapped them with harmony lasers until they were stone. Or maybe they're still around, just gotten smarter and decided to 'savor' the conflict and not freeze things down quite so fast.

There's something more to what's happening I have feeling it's the Mean 3.

Elements of Harmony Spotted! With Magic’s return comes the return of Harmony!

one of the most powerful and dangerous pony artifacts was just chilling on the top of a stack of books

Which one?

Sprout keeps getting strange looks in this chapter.

Added to my read list! Enjoying the story. :twilightsmile:

Ok this looks very promising so after the events of the movie sunny is living with Izzy because her home has been destroyed because of sprouts which he is in trouble but it looks like things are getting a little bit better sort of they're still ponies still not used to the change yet but apparently something about in the journal her father left a note for her about something about Equestria and a unicorn who changed everything which I feel like he's talking about Twilight and her friends but anyway whatever it is they needed to get to Zephyr Heights okay this looks very interesting so far

“He was probably in a hurry,” Sunny protested. “He probably wrote it before he… before he disappeared.” She hesitated. Her father’s disappearance was a sore subject for her. Only Hitch knew about it.

Disappeared I mean I guess that makes sense but a lot of people always assume that he's dead because usually he would never go out without his glasses or that necklace thing that he wears but then again there's a lot of theories going around about that

Wow so it looks like izzy gotten better with her magic and they finally made it to Zephyr Heights and they met up with the two princess pipp and Zipp and it looks like they have a surprise for sunny and it looks like they're trying to get hitch to come over here as well I wonder what they are up to

Okay so it looks like they're trying to find anything about the old Equestria how it used to be but so far nothing they found but it looks like Zipp and Izzy found something but they want to keep it as a secret just to surprise sunny and it looks like hitch joins in as well whatever the surprise it is I hope it's a good one

My personal ship is Hitch and Zipp, since they're always teasing each other.

To be honest I thought they are cute together

Pipp checked to make sure that she had enough battery left on her phone. She’d charged it before they left Maretime Bay, but this castle didn’t seem to have electricity, so she wanted to save it.

It seems Pipp's never heard of a powerbank.

I can’t wait to see the truth on what the ponies did to cause magic to scease for 1000 or more years.

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I think it's because friendship is magic, and there was no friendship, so there was no magic. But who knows?

There was a sound from upstairs, and all nine creatures turned towards the noise. Three foals came trotting down the stairs, one a green unicorn with a purple mane, another a golden pegasus with a tangerine mane, and a third an earth pony with a pink coat and a lighter purple mane than the unicorn. They were laughing together, but fell silent as they saw the six other ponies in the room.

I knew it!!

The spotlight lit up, and Pipp appeared, singing, “We got the light!”

Oh boy this should have been a great day for sunny but apparently everything went downhill really quickly at first things were getting better at the Zephyr Heights pipp performing her song to everybody and this time without no strings and they even show her a surprise at the Air Station seen all the artifacts on the old days of generation 4 everything was just fine but until something happened outside a family of unicorns were attacked and apparently attention has really realize that the Pegasus are starting to get a little hostile and what makes things worse apparently the magic is starting to fade away that again and this is what Sunny was fearing about and everything started to crush down that everything they worked hard it's starting to Fall Apart

Well things are really getting bad now now the Pegasus are asking for the rest of the royal family again not only that sunny and the others had to find another way to bring back everybody together again on Sunny's father map and it's not going to be easy this time and now they have to Royal Guards are coming along I wonder it's Thunder and zoom but anyway this is going to be a very interesting situation

As it turned out, escaping Zephyr Heights would prove to be much more difficult than previously. The angry mob that had stormed the palace weren’t leaving until the queen and princesses were captured and killed. This only made Queen Haven more reluctant to let her daughters leave, until it got to a point where she wouldn’t allow them to go at all, out of fear for their safety.

Killed!?!? Dang they're getting more violence than ever what the heck

“He’s going to wake up the whole palace if we don’t quiet him down!” Sunny said. “Quick, Hitch, can you do your animal magnet thing?”

Hitch groaned and started forward. “Hey, uh, little dog? Do ya mind quieting down for us? Please? We’re kind of trying to save the world, and if we get caught, it’s really going to put a damper on our plan, so… You know, just be quiet, okay?”

Cloudpuff stopped barking the instant Hitch started talking. He blinked, flapped his wings, turned around, and walked back to Queen Haven, who was blessedly still asleep.

Okay I know I said this so many times and some of the comments section but you got to admit I still think hitch is related to Fluttershy because of his ability to talk to animals

Okay so sunny and the others are still trying to look at the history books if there's any else that they can find but it looks like they found twilight crown with that makes sense that zipp has it and they even check out the pictures of Twilight and the others but it looks like pipp also discovered something they found the missing page of the map from the book but they didn't have time they had to get out before the Pegasus get them of course it wasn't easy to get through them but good thing for hitch and Izzy did amazing job to distract them now they're on their way on their journey to find out what really happened and that is a pretty interesting theory about the windigos this is just a guess what I think Twilight and the others use the rainbow friendship on not just only the legions of Doom but also on them as well now I don't know if they were gone but that could be the case I could be wrong

Alphabittle shoved a hoof in his mouth to keep him from continuing. “All right, all right, I get it!” he said. “I won’t do it, I promise, just please don’t say the forbidden word!”

I still don't get about the mayonnaise thing lol

After successfully escaping Zephyr Heights they went to bridlewood to rest up and tell Alphabittle what's going on in promise not to engage any War I mean he'll try but I don't know how long he will hold it that's the problem let's just hope things did not go out of control and hopefully whatever the Journal of the map tells them where Ponyville yes hopefully they can find some answers but I need to go to Maretime Bay to warn them about what's going on

For a brief moment, what looked like a single gemstone, a bright pink that exactly matched Zipp’s mane, was orbiting her, leaving a glowing trail in its wake. While the rest of the video was still agonizingly slow, the gem seemed to be moving at a normal pace. It was no wonder it wouldn’t be seen before. The gem made one full rotation before disappearing with a flash of light.

“I don’t think so,” Phyllis said, rewinding the video again. “Watch Pipp and Queen Haven in the back.” Pipp, too, had a gem encircling her, this one an aquamarine color, but Queen Haven did not. Furthermore, Phyllis gestured to the bottom of the screen, where Sunny, Izzy, and Hitch were watching. The three of them also had gems; Izzy a blue one, Hitch a turquoise one, and Sunny a lavender one, the deep shade of purple unsettlingly like her toy figure of Twilight Sparkle.

It's the elements of harmony I wonder if the spirit is calling out for them and what did they represent

So when they return to Maretime Bay they talked to Phyllis about this whole situation but it looks like she already knows what's going on but she didn't want to panic anybody which that's a good thing she didn't but she also spotted something something about the lightning but at the same time they saw like the stones surrounding sunny and the others it could be the element of Harmony I wonder she's calling out for them or whatever it is they will find out sooner or later but the thing is who's going to be the Sixth Element since there's only five main characters

Izzy flushed and mumbled something Sunny couldn’t make out. “Sorry?” she asked teasingly, playfully elbowing her friend. Izzy’s cheeks turned an even darker shade of red and she muttered, “Hitch.”

Ohh it looks like Izzy has a little crush on hitch

It looks like they are trying to find any information so far they went to the Sheriff's office to check if there's anything what happened to Manhattan which that must be really bad if a city something that big be destroyed that must be really sad but it looks like pipp was trying to find something in the picture but it looks like she found something and whatever it is I hope it's a good one

Wow that's actually a pretty big discovery pipp found it looks like the windigos are here but they attacking yet and they still read about the article about the whole equestrian history and everything and Sprout really did help out as well so that's good for him and you know what pizza sounds pretty good

Pushing some brush aside, Sunny saw what had alarmed her in more clarity. It was what looked like a building, but the features had been distorted over time. Even so, Sunny could tell it was a tall structure with a dome at the top, and a spire on top of that. Wraparound porches connected to pillars running the entire height of the circular building, and windows lined the walls. Sunny could see that, if it had been in better condition, it must have been a very important building.

It's Twilight's Castle it's really sad to see it so broken down

“This one has a roof,” Izzy supplied helpfully, gesturing to a building that looked like it was made of candy. The slight gesture sent a small breeze through the air that was enough to make the whole building shudder and crack. A look of alarm flashed across Izzy’s face. “Uh, maybe we should keep it that way.”

Could that be sugarcube corner

Well it looks like Sprouts wants to come along which that's pretty cool probably they should be good for him what it looks like after walking through the forest that is he talked about they finally found Ponyville and it's really sad to see the town so in bad shape like the sugarcube corner Rarity's Boutique Twilight's Castle and I wonder if the friendship school is still around and I wonder if they discover other creatures as well

So they went inside to Twilight's Castle and basically Explorer around the castle hopefully finding something interesting and so far nothing but I hope maybe Harmony will come around so they decided to stay there for now until they Explorer around more hopefully they can find more information

“Wait. So you’re saying… this castle is magic?” Sunny blinked and massaged her temples with her hoof. “How does that work? How can a castle have magic?”

Because the tree of Harmony spirit is alive somewhere

Hanging from the tree roots were dozens and dozens of crystals, pink, blue, and yellow. They glimmered and gleamed in the light, and Sunny thought she could see images in them. But her attention was diverted to the other thing in the room.

Oh my gosh it's the tree root from the Golden Oaks Library I still miss that place and all my gosh the memory crystals that Twilight and her friends made well her friends made and I thought that was the cutest thing I've ever seen

The other cities on the map, besides Canterlot - now Zephyr Heights - and Manehatten - now Maretime Bay - fell to ruin and dispair. All the pegasi seemed to be in Zephyr Heights, all the unicorns in Bridlewood, all the earth ponies in Maretime Bay. Nopony lived in the other towns anymore; they felt they had to stick together to protect themselves.

But what about the other cities not just only three major cities what happened to the Crystal Empire Los Pegasus Appaloosa yakyakistan the dragonlands the changeling hive Mt aris griffonstone what about that city with the rainbow Roadtrip I forgot the name of it but or happened to those cities

So it looks like Izzy saw a lot of Sparkle around this Castle saying it has magic which she's right but Sunny wanted to explore around the castle but she discovered a throne room where the friendship map is which it's still there but once the other five ponies touched it it begins to Glow and not only that Equestria map change and now it's the modern year but it looks like they have five chairs this time now which that's also cool one but it looks like Sprout was feeling left out and basically just disappeared I wonder where did he go

Hitch was silent as his friend lost control over his emotions. After a brief silence, he said, “Hey, um, I bet the Guardians of Harmony had loads of other friends besides just themselves.”

He's right though Twilight and the others made a lot of friends throughout the years not just only ponies but other creatures as well

“Yeah! And I bet they made a ton of friends with ponies who made really big mistakes.”

“Probably none as bad as mine,” Sprout grumbled dejectedly.

Well actually sprout they actually did like Sunset Shimmer Starlight glimmer Trixie Discord Tempest Shadow AKA fizzlepop berrytwist Gilda garble few of the changelings and again that's quite a few but you get the point

“I promise I mean no harm,” the creature said in a gruff voice, holding up his huge arms to show that he was defenseless. “My name is Iron Bill.”

Could he be related to Iron Will yeah you did that on purpose didn't you lol

Dang poor sprout he really felt left out that he really don't belong with the group but hitch wants to reassure him that he doesn't have to be alone and even Twilight have forgiven her worst enemies from the past which it made Sprout feel a little better but it looks like there are not the only one here there was somebody living here but not just a pony but a creature but it's a Minotaur and he is not the only one here it looks like there's other creatures are here as well even Steven magnet is still alive how old is he and apparently he forgotten what Rarity did for him but then again he probably felt angry at the pony for what happened so I don't know and it looks like there's a changeling and a Breezies here as well but there has to be more creatures like the dragon Yak Griffin a hippogriff kirin crystal ponies bat Pony where are they but also interesting that they said there are three young ponies here from three different tribes could they be the one from the ending credits of the movie

Iron Bill and Stephen Magnet were waiting when they all eventually arrived together, having tackled each other more than once on the way up the hill. Iron Bill’s expression looked softer, but Stephen Magnet was just as snarky as ever. He took in the panting ponies with their goofy grins plastered all over their squishy faces and snorted. These were supposedly who the Elements of Harmony had chosen to be their next bearers? Doubtful.

Oh shut up Steven magnet now you're starting to be annoying right now

“The Tree of Harmony was planted by six powerful ponies who were forced to leave the realm to protect it,” Midge explained. “They infused a seed with their magic, hoping that whatever grew from it would protect the realm in their absence. From the Tree grew six magical gems called the Elements of Harmony, some of the most powerful magical relics this world has ever known.

Yes I remember the pillars plants the seed when it grew and became the tree of Harmony so many memories

Then the Tree developed a sort of consciousness. It created a magical chamber underneath the school that Twilight and her friends built to teach friendship to all sorts of creatures, and it worked its magic through six different creatures when a pegasus filly named Cozy Glow attempted to transport all the magic to a different dimension.

It was pretty interesting that the tree of Harmony is starting to have a mind of her own and even meeting up with the young 6 which I hope you can explain about them later on of your story because they are important to the history as well

Whoa it was like a history lesson of My Little Pony friendship is Magic and I had to admit it was nice to hear it especially this changeling really knows his history which that's pretty cool and very smart guy but then the kids showed up and it is those kids from the ending Credit in the movie and they were missing this whole time whoa

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