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This story is a sequel to Legends Never Die


All her friends have met the Guardians of Harmony, and Sunny Starscout knows that the trials the Spirit has mentioned are coming soon. Ponies have reported mysterious happenings all over - sightings of strange creatures that leave destruction wherever they go. Still more are seeking help - a magic thief is on the loose. Not to mention the North seems to be acting especially strange. It falls to Sunny and her friends, new and old, to fix all of it. But she has started hearing voices in her head - voices that seem to have her worst interests at heart. She needs to find the strength to protect both her friends and what they stand for.

WARNING: Contains no relation to My Little Pony: Make Your Mark or My Little Pony: Tell Your Tale. This is strictly related to events that happened after My Little Pony: A New Generation.

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What a very interesting new story, bookhorse125. I'll be willing to see how this story goes. Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will.

Whoa this is a really Wild start of a story so apparently Cadence less worried about this whole situation that the 3 tribes of ponies and creatures are starting to fight with each other things have escalated so quickly and with the wendigo's appearing she was so worried about her daughter but when she found twilight she use all of her power to make up all the three crystals and she sacrificed her magic and herself to do that but then Cadence also make the ultimate sacrifice as well she used the last spell to send flurry heart away from danger knowing that the freezing cold consume her and flurry heart remember that her mother is gone and her aunts and looks like she woken up in the future of the new generation and she needs to know what's going on is heading for Canterlot

Ok looks like we're back in the present time so everything looks like everything is back to normal well as normal as it can be but then hitch and sprout there was a cave where the war machine crash landed and they went to Canter logic to talk to Phyllis about this whole situation but then she showed them about how to read the magic with that's pretty interesting and they were wondering about where the Crystal from bridlewood came from but it turns out that it could be the crystals from the Crystal Empire Maybe so that's why they need to check it out because not only there was nobody at the North but somehow survived and we all know who Could That Be and it looks like when the two Pegasus sisters got home it looks like Queen Haven found somebody I wonder who Could That Be I guess we'll find out next time

Wow, these stories are insane! Keep it up! This is going in my favs folder! :twilightsmile:

Listed in Popular Stories, thank you so much!:twilightsmile:

Instantly, the chair began to hum and rumble, and Flurry jumped backwards in shock. She lit up her horn and aimed it at the possessed seating, preparing to fire, and then-

Aww poor flurry heart she never seen these Technologies this is going to be very hard for her to be in this generation

Flurry Heart did the only thing she could do. She burst out laughing. She doubled over and almost kneeled on the floor, wheezing, tears streaming out of her eyes. Both princesses looked surprised, then Zipp’s expression shifted to amusement and Pipp’s to offended. “Okay,” Flurry gasped, standing back up. “That was a good one. That was funny. Look, I only know of three princesses in Equestria, and neither of you are one. Also, the only queen I know of is an evil shapeshifter who tried to take over Equestria multiple times. So, no way what you’re saying is true.”

Wow again that is a lot to take in

Although she kind of forgot that there was another queen and it's from the hippogriff Queen Novo

Ok so it looks like flurry heart is woken up in the cellar but it looks like it's the same place that Izzy and sunny was but anyway she got confused where she was until the Pegasus sisters came along At first she was a little confused what was going on but Zipp and pipp explain everything what was happening and where she has but flurry heart didn't wanted to believe this but unfortunately it is the truth so zipp went back to get sunny and the others and pipp show her around the artifacts they found but after that sunny and the others finally made it here and something tells me this is going to be a long explanation about this

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It's a thing. For some reason people are taking it really seriously.

Ok so everything looks like things are okay now even though flurry heart is still kind of in shock of where she is but at least she got the chance to get to know sunny and her friends and it's pretty nice to see that and it's also funny I bought a pizza which for me I do not like pineapple I'm more of a pepperoni and cheese pizza person and I do like how flurry heart can still be a prankster just like Rainbow dash lol and it's actually pretty nice moment right there but it looks like they're going to go to the Crystal Empire to check anything what's left over there

“Have any of them, you know… tried to make up for their mistakes?” Sprout asked carefully.

Well look at the shadow Tempest AKA fizzle Pop berry twist Starlight glimmer Sunset Shimmer Discord most of the changelings stygian I can go on but you get the idea

Yeah, I think I have an idea who’s responsible for Sunny’s change.

But all the same… she couldn’t help wondering. What had happened to Sunny Starscout?

Yo what the heck happened to her she completely turned 360

Oh wow so flurry heart was having trouble to go to sleep but unfortunately she's having a bad dream so she decided to go out for flying to check out the town but then she met up with Sprouts who was also awake and it's actually nice to see them talking and everything and not only that giving them a little comfort but after a while she went back but in the morning something is strange with Sunny like she wasn't herself I wonder what's going on

“She wasn’t really a pony,” Glacier added. “She was like, really tall, and had a crooked horn, like somepony took huge chunks out of it. And Lemon Pie says she had these weird wings - not like a pegasus, but like some sort of really strange bug. But her legs had holes in it, which was really weird - like, how does that work? And Lemon Pie went up to her and asked who she was-”

Ohhh no Queen Chrysalis is back and not only that Tirek and cozy glow 😰

“Pardon our intrusion,” one of them panted. “But the prisoners you recently acquired? The unicorn and the pegasus with the memory stone? They’ve disappeared.”

Oh great more bad news :facehoof:

Oh boy this is not good we're already having some problems with sunny having multiple personality right now but apparently there are some reports there was a strange creature and we all know who that is was walking around cackling about something and it looks like the legions of Doom are back flurry heart only heard about the story about them now they have to figure out what are they up to and what makes things worse those two ponies who were the cause of the memory Stone debacle are gone I mean this can't get any worse right

“Cozy Glow was a young pegasus filly enrolled at my aunt Twilight’s school of friendship, but she secretly had dark intentions. Tirek helped her figure out a way to suck all of the magic out of Equestria over the course of three days, when it would then be transported to another realm. She has a manipulative mind and convinced my aunt and her friends that Tirek might be behind the disappearance in magic, so they got trapped in Tartarus without magic to get out. She rallied the school to let her be the temporary headmare of the school and that six creatures trying to fix everything were the ones behind it all. The Tree of Harmony luckily stepped in and helped save the day through those creatures, and Cozy was sent to Tartarus with Tirek.”

Yeah that was crazy and not only that because of the young six became the new elements of harmonies as well which I thought that was kind of cool

Sunny approached the back of the pedestal and ran her hoof over the inscription carved into it. Something flashed in her eyes, and her hoof hovered over the words magic of friendship . “I know these names,” she said instead. “Chrysalis, Tirek, Cozy Glow… I don’t know how, but I know them.” She shook her head. “That’s weird…”

Whoa what was that??

She watched Sunny quicken her step to go talk to Zipp and felt a growing sense of fear in her heart. Something - or somepony - had messed with Sunny’s mind, and Flurry had a sickening feeling that she knew who it was.

Yeah I also have a Sinking Feeling not just only the legions of Doom are back but somebody else somebody that flurry heart wish that she will never see again

Ok so it looks like the others are trying to plan out everything to see if there is suspicious was confirm which unfortunately it is because the statue of the Legion of Doom are gone and that is mean they are back so they had to figure out what they're going to do try to figure out but while this is going on flurry heart have a little suspicious about Sunny's change of attitude like she wasn't herself like yesterday if it's like somebody took over her mind I wonder what could it be I guess we'll find out next time

This is really good! I love it so far!

Wow, this is a very good chapter, bookhorse125. I really like it.

You don’t have magic , it said scornfully. You’re just an earth pony that everypony else thinks is an overly optimistic misfit. These aren’t your friends - they’re just using you for their own gain. They think that since you don’t have magic that you’re weak and pathetic and that they’re better than you.

Oh no I think somebody is inside of her mind giving her some doubts

She shakily approached the window and studied the picture upon it, looking like she was barely refraining from crying. Her hoof traced the shape of the heart that the two ponies made, and a far off look entered her blue eyes, as if she was seeing something else - not just a picture, but what really happened.

Aww I guess that's flurry hearts parents wedding day when they ​defeated Queen Chrysali

Izzy turned to look back at Sunny as she walked away. “Our friend’s still in there somewhere.”

Yeah she's there but somebody is controlling her somehow or something who could it be

Ok so sunny zipp and flurry heart trying to find any information any news about the legions of Doom once they split up to check out Sunny was starting to have some doubts about the magic and her friends which that was not like her at all it felt like somebody is putting all those thoughts in her and she can't fight it somehow it was starting to be coming too much for her so she left but then she found a couple of boxes full of glass windows and it turns out it was a glass pictures of the past events from the My Little Pony friendship is Magic when Twilight and her friends defeated Nightmare Moon and so forth throughout the seasons the others found her and they were pretty amazed how much work that Sunny put on but flurry heart saw her parents when they defeated Queen Chrysalis she got emotional poor kid so they decided to bring those glass pictures to the Railroad Station to bring out the history and it looks like Izzy thinks that something is wrong with Sunny which she's right somebody is messing with her but who I guess we'll find out next time

Despite her personal ties to the image, Flurry couldn’t help but smile. “That’s the window that was made for Spike the Brave and Glorious after he helped save the Crystal Empire,” she explained to the unicorn. “There’s a massive statue of him still up there.”

Which I thought that was pretty cool given Spike so much recognition and then he did it again during the Equestria games

“That’s Discord,” Flurry said, pointing to the draconequus. “He’s a creature of chaos, and he used to want to turn Equestria into his playground. But then Fluttershy showed him the power of friendship and kindness, and he decided he valued friendship more. He did betray everypony when Tirek came to power, though, and then he brought back Triek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, and…”

King Sombra yeah she really don't want to talk about this guy

Sunny frowned. “Did somepony see anypony that seemed suspicious yesterday or the day before that?” she asked before turning to Flurry. “You said that one of the villains that was released from stone was a pegasus. It’s been years, so she could very easily blend in, right?”

Cozy glow must of fool the guards with her innocent and charm that crazy kid

Ok looks like they're getting some information how about what's going on and they look like they're about to be finished with glass pictures the pictures of the Mane 6 defeating Nightmare Moon up to the young six defeating a monster but while there was still fixing it Sunny is still kind of out of it like she's a different Pony but it looks like they heard that pipp came back which throughout the days zipp got worried about her sister but it looks like she got some information about the legions of Doom apparently cozy glow it's been pretty busy for herself manipulating other ponies and it looks like she found something I wonder what could it be I guess we'll find out next time

Just a thought here not only King Sombra is also returning but you can also bring in another threat like the Storm King to add in more problems that's just my suggestion

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Ooo, that's a good idea...

I'm going to be writing this forever, aren't I?

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I mean it depends if you want to hopefully it's not going to be too much

“That’s Discord,” Flurry said, pointing to the draconequus. “He’s a creature of chaos, and he used to want to turn Equestria into his playground. But then Fluttershy showed him the power of friendship and kindness, and he decided he valued friendship more. He did betray everypony when Tirek came to power, though, and then he brought back Triek, Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, and…”

“And who?” Izzy pressed.

Flurry swallowed and shook her head. “Nopony. He disguised himself as Grogar, but he didn’t bring him back.” She gave the unicorn a sheepish smile. “Sorry, my brain’s a little fuzzy on some of the details.”

I know Flurry doesn't want to talk about Sombra but don't know why the Gen 5 gang didn't react negatively to Discord's actions?

Ooooh. I have read your 2 great recent stories. Maybe my taste is too complicated, or I'm too old... But it's wildly boring. Too, too, too much obsession with the past. I perfectly understand that you need to tell the characters of the new generation about the rules, merit, characters, events of the past. But you talk too much about it. TOO MUCH. So many that if you add 20% to this, it will be a literal retelling of G4. It is not right. Learn to make such narratives less frequent, more concise, smaller, but no less understandable. So that it does not occupy not a small, but a very small part of the chapter. Eee. For the future. It's not just specific stories. Don't forget that this is a NEW generation, even if there are some characters from the old, you need to tell the story of the NEW characters, not through the prism of G4. The past generation was loved not only for the plot, epic two-part series. Fragments from their daily lives gave a real imbued with them, and not just an endless battle with evil. The usual problems with society, communication difficulties, and a bunch of other things in life. They were hinted at in the movie, could be developed into more, and give the characters more interaction outside of the adventure. But so far I don't see it. I keep reading this hoping to see something very interesting. The story can still get better. Oh yes. I don't like that the destruction of Equestria happened too early in your history. This really puts too much cross on all the efforts of the M6. This does not look like the natural decline of a great country. At least 200 years. I always hoped for such a span of Twilight's reign. But it all happened too fast for you.

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You can have your opinions. I do also hope that the new series won't focus too much on Gen 4 - we've got a brand new world with new settings and new characters and hopefully new villains. Though there are already too many ties to Friendship is Magic that we can't ignore it entirely.

Well it looks like they are almost finished the windows as I said before it really does bring memories of how the Mane 6 Spike and the others went through throughout the years and flurry heart really miss them so much especially her parents but for the first time Sunny actually can relate to that missing somebody and it must be really sad to see that and it's always nice to see flurry heart talked with Queen Haven and yes she might done a lot of bad things but she just wanted to keep peace despite it was a lie again it was really good to see that I wonder what's going to happen next

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Don't worry about it sometimes we have to learn from the past and we can never forget what Twilight and the others did so it doesn't hurt to learn about the history

Flurry froze, her adrenaline rising and her mnd racing. Don’t think about him, don’t think about him, don’t think about him…

We don't talk about Sombra no no no

This story and well the Legends never die series have been really enterteining. I hope for Sunny to be her old self. And I gotta hand it you I didn't expect a tittle like that and so much story from that tittle.
Cozy Glow you...I need to calm down.
It Is been a really great ride and I am ready for more! :twilightsmile:

Okay so it looks like the day has finally come and they are prepared to go to the Crystal Empire but before that they were just having a little fun with a trivia questions which it's always fun but finally they're going to get to the Crystal Empire it's going to be a long day to get there and just like old times again sunny something is really wrong with her and it's really bugging me as well I wonder what caused it be and I wonder what they're going to find in the Crystal Empire guess we'll find out next time

All the best,

Flurry Heart, Pipp Petals, Zipp Storm,

Hitch Trailblazer, Sprout, and Sunny Starscout

You forgot Izzy Moonbow

Sunny shook her head and continued forward, the words creating anger that fueled her on. If her friends didn’t care about her, fine. She would show them that she didn’t need them, either.

Whoever's trying to saying all that means thought is wrong come on sunny we need you back

“Stupid friendship magic gimmicks!” she said angrily, kicking a stone across the clearing. “After all this time, we still can’t get away from that stupid pony princess, her stupid friends, and her stupid magic!”

Ohh so it was cozy glow I thought it was King Sombra but okay what kind of magic is she using

Oh boy I thought things could have gotten worse but it looks like it is so apparently pipp lost her cell phone but good thing flurry heart has other idea to send mail from a cell phone or from a dragon and they wrote down the message but Sprout found a clue and it looks like Queen Chrysalis is following them but they didn't want alarm them which that's kind of dumb to be honest with you and Sunny is starting to have negative thoughts again but nighttime came around but unfortunately Sonny is having a nightmare and somebody is trying to brainwash her but she tried her best to fight it off she almost lost but she fought it off meanwhile in the outskirts of the forest it turns out it was cozy glow who was manipulating sunny I mean that is her special ability it looks like the Legion of Doom are following them included the other two ponies oh boy this is getting scarier I just hope Sunny can snap out of it because we need her well let's find out how this will go

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:rainbowlaugh:
Why has someone not made this a thing yet? PLEASE MAKE THIS A THING.

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