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Meridian Prime


Your friendly local hollow eyed demon baby.

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Queen Chrysalis throws a Hearth's Warming Eve party.

It does not quite go as planned.


Written for totallynotabrony as part of Jinglemas 2018.

Inspired (rather obliquely) by the classic British Christmas song A Wombling Merry Christmas.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

As she cantered down the main street of the small town of Fargoat cloaked in a brilliant disguise (a black coated unicorn, with a blue-green mane and tail and a black crown engulfed in green flames for a cutie mark)

And just like that, I'm sold.

This is shaping up wonderfully. :pinkiehappy:

Yep, this was excellent. Blithely-dense Chrysalis is Best Chrysalis, and her attempts at suitably holiday-ish shenanigans (as well as Thorax and Pharynx's plotting in the background) made this a joy. Bonny stuff, Meridian. :twilightsmile:

Man, your comments are so much fun to reply to! :pinkiehappy: We'll take 'em one at a time:
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This was one of the first lines I wrote that had me cackling a little - I think my mum thought I'd gone a bit mad, haha. And, to continue into 9375754 : blithely-dense Chrysalis ranks right up there as one of my two favourite Chrysalises, right along side Fae Queen Chrysalis. And Pharynx might low-key be my favourite part of the whole story. To quote some things I said to a friend (coughcarapacecough) about the idea before I wrote it:

It says something that Pharynx "FUCK YOU I'LL FIGHT THE GIANT MOLE" Changeling is a voice of reason in this fic

Pharynx, much like myself, has lost all control of his life

Thanks for reading, but thanks more for commenting. Seeing people describe my writing with words like "joy" and "bonny" just makes my day - especially when those people helped inspire me to write in the first place. :raritywink:

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It says something that Pharynx "FUCK YOU I'LL FIGHT THE GIANT MOLE" Changeling is a voice of reason in this fic

Insane types forced into the role of straight man are far too much fun. It's all about giving them amazing/horrific circumstances to react to. :raritywink:

especially when those people helped inspire me to write in the first place

...just make a man blush, why don't you.

But with that sort of happy praise, to say nothing of how you've written nothing I've not liked in what I've read, have a Follow, why not. Good souls get follows. :twilightsmile:

I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the rest. :)

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Insane types forced into the role of straight man are far too much fun. It's all about giving them amazing/horrific circumstances to react to. :raritywink:

Amen to that!

Good souls get follows. :twilightsmile:

This might be one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me. Thank you!

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Glad you liked it, and I hope the other two chapters match your expectations. :ajsmug:

All the annotation links seem to jump to the main page of the story.

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Yeah, I've noticed that too. :applejackunsure: I think it's a problem with fimfic's formatting - I know the footnotes are a new feature, they probably need some troubleshooting. So for now I think you just have to find footnotes the old fashioned way and scroll down (or control-F).

But thanks for reading, and for the favourite! Glad you liked the story. :twilightsmile:

It did not disappoint, thank you for writing. I've always found incompetent Chrysalis very endearing.:twilightsmile:

I’m really not sure why footnotes even exist. Great story

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Thanks! :twilightsmile: And well, I may be in the minority with this, but I've always loved footnotes. Couldn't resist the chance to use them.

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