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chief maximus


Why do I write? Because I can't draw! I write mainly as an outlet, and don't take it too seriously. If you like what I write, awesome! If not, that's cool too.

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Eight years. For eight years we have been left to rot in this prison. Our reputations ruined, we were just as well off here in this festering hell-hole as we would have been out there in a country that now despised us. All hope seemed lost until one day, an emissary from a foreign land gave us a chance to exact our revenge on those who had put us here. Rainbow Dash and Macintosh Apple will pay for what they did to us. Mark my words, dear brother.

The third and final installment of the Rainbow X Mac series.

Story 1: At Home On The Range
Story 2: Breaking Barriers

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 87 )

Holy Celestia! :pinkiegasp:
Merry Christmas indeed. The next instalment of RainbowXMac? My body is so ready! :pinkiehappy:

What a great christmass present! I really want to know more. Who took Rainbow and Zap... And will they ever have another kid? What? That was Mac's dream from the first part of the trilogy... What does he show to the judge for him to let him free?

The flim and flam's brothers are back!! coming soon in the fic :pinkiecrazy:

Sorry about that one, I'm hungry and working right know (and in pain... lots of pain).

Next chapter please!!!

Strap in and fave, folks. Trust me, this is gonna be one hell of a ride!

Woah woah, hold your horses. Let me see if I've got this straight so far…
This is sort of like the film Taken but with ponies, and Big Mac is Liam Neeson?
Bucking sold!

Love it so far. I'm curious to find out exactly how Mac got away in the first chapter as a free pony. Only time shall tell…

Also, great to have you back too Bronius Maximus. Merry Christmas and everything :pinkiesmile:

These... "I wanna get revenge" people... Who are they? I didn't notice them in Breaking Barriers, and I haven't read the first of the stories :rainbowhuh:

Well then...all I can say is...THANK YOU SANTA! Second best Christmas gift I have ever gotten!

3677604 they were in the first story.

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Huh... What were they/what happened?

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Perhaps you should read At Home On The Range friend.
I'm sure you'll be enlightened of the questions you ask and throughly enjoy it.

Woah, this series has taken a dark turn. I see that following you was a very good choice. :pinkiehappy:

Hopeful for more excellent work soon!

Ach, Jawhol! Dank Gott! It's been too long in coming my good man; My heart swells in gladness to be seeing this finally culminated! Now I seek culpability in my wait by reading it and meditating upon it! Danke, danke sehr mut!

And so it would appear that the wait has been vindicated. This is already a powerful story filled with visceral imagery and the high quality I've come to expect from you. To start off with action and then build back story is a new approach in the story and it is much appreciated. I will continue looking forward to new content as it arrives. Until then.

Ahh yeah! :rainbowdetermined2:

I wonder what Mac showed the courtroom, a tattoo or brand indicating some sort of special commission from the Princesses, perhaps?

First Rust, now you BM its a Christmas miracle!

ONE OF THE BEST CHRISTMASS GIFTS EVER!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Woohoo! :yay: Off to an action packed start already, mi amici. :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to read more,

Hey Bronius Maximus? Just want to say, I really enjoy reading your short novels because these stories could and should be published (With the consent of Hasbro/MLP). You have made my Hearths Warming eve special with your wonderful stories. I can full-heartedly say that I platonically love you. As I'm sure many others on FiMFiction do. So Thank you for your amazing writing.

Thank you santa Bronius!

Thanks for the Christmas presebt

New work from Bronius, all right! I gotta go back and read AHOTR and BB 'fore I dig into this, tho.

Glad you got through BCT and got a break, Bronius!

Comment posted by Lord Dark deleted Dec 26th, 2013

What... what did he show that got the case dismissed?:trixieshiftright:

'Kay. I'm liking this. I mean, I knew I'd like it when you originally mentioned it, but this is way more than I originally thought it would be.

I look forward to more.

Spectrum #25 · Dec 26th, 2013 · · 1 · 1 ·

YES, ITS BACK! I've missed this series! I didn't expect both Rainbow and their kid to get kidnapped...Poor Mac :fluttercry:

I really love the action in this story, and its only chapter one!

Next chapter, please!

Two whole intricately woven and interesting stories leading up to this. I have my eye on this now. :duck:

Geez Louise. That was intense.

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I assume its a guard brand
Marking him an auxiliary guard or something or he could be an actual guard

3677524 If that is the case...

Big Mac: I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for ransom, I can tell you I don't have money... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired throughout my entire life. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you let my wife and child go now, that will be the end of it - I will not look for you, I will not pursue you... but if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you.

Unknown bad guy: ...Good luck.

:eeyup:

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Ha :rainbowlaugh:

If that's the case, lets hope there isn't a Macintosh Unhitched 2, where relatives of the Flim Flam brothers kidnap Rainbow Dash and Big Mac, and their colt Zap has to rescue them.

3722865 There would have to be a twenty years break for that. :moustache:

"No." Macintosh began rolling up the sleeve on his right foreleg to his knee. "But there is somethin' you should see." He showed the back of his foreleg to the judge as another gasp swept through the courtroom.

What is it? Gotta say... this is not what I expected. How were they taken? When? How long has he been searching?

I guess these will be answered soon, and with deserved punishment.

Cinnamon... you just asked the wrong question there!

3677604 I know I'm late, but this is still important; GO THE FUCK BACK AND READ IT!:flutterrage::flutterrage:
Ahem, if you don't mind that is.:fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

At first I was surprised and quite shocked that Big Mac had no problem with knocking out people and being so violent so easily... Then the revelation of Rainbow and Zap getting kidnapped... Yeah, completely understandable.

Oh no! Zap!!:fluttershbad:

...You will not live to regret this Flim/Flam!:flutterrage:
(Live being the key word):pinkiecrazy:

Oh yes finally a Breaking Barriers sequel, can wait to rea-

Wait... Does it says...
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Gore?

Goddammit

Best of luck big mac. You are going to need it. I can't wait to read this story. Best of luck to the author.

can't help but draw some comparisons to red dead. the biggest difference is the badass main character knows where his wife and son are as he goes out and fights to ensure their safety.

3910762 I believe the name is meant to be a reference to Django Unchained. The scene at the beginning with the stallion under a fake name being a wanted criminal is from the movie too. Similar concept as well - Django searching for his wife.

4128701 never actually saw that one...

Why wasn't I notified?!?!

You made a 3rd? Holy shit

Bentgrass is in this story as well! And holy crap I was so happy to see a update! Can't wait for more!

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Missing apostrophe.

Holy shite. I was not expecting them to be involved. Flim and Flam, sure, but not them. And let's see... to get back his wife and son, the mare who happens to be (both a Wonderbolt? I can't remember, and) the Element of Loyalty, whilst ridding Equestria of its enemies...

...Mac's a Company Stallion now, isn't he?

Hmm, how shall ever-so-Special Agent Bentgrass factor in to the tale?

Glad to have ya back, sir, and good to know that at least someone is writing Bentgrass... :ajsmug:

Wow. I hope Mac can start search for Rainbow and Zaps soon. I wonder will he even recognize them, or will they be under the changling's spell.

Oh, how lovely to finally see another chapter in this series. Thank you for keeping to your word, Maximus, I appreciate that so very much. I can only look forward to the next chapter.

'QUESTRIA!

I was thrilled to get this update! It's been awhile and always leaves me wanting more.

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