Her hive starving and crippled and herself in even worse condition Chrysalis turns to the only being in Equestria that can help.
Too bad that this particular pony has so many reasons to hate her.
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A changeling worker masquerading as a struggling pony poet. (Who writes very little actual poetry)
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You have to do more, not just on chapter please
So sad t-t.. and so good!!!
Fuck your cliffhangers! Continue this!
Please?
6797380 What cliffhanger? It's pretty clear Chrysalis is dead.
that was good. very sad but very good
6797577 no. It isn't.
6797577 I think she just slipped on the ice.
(In seriousness, I could easily see this going either way were the story to continue. It could be a tale of the last surviving Changelings trying to make their way in life as refugees and without their Queen, or the next scene could have Chrysalis waking up in a hospital bed having been just barely saved from death by the Crystal Empire's love. Either way's good.)
6796703 I'm considering it, but I need to sort out some minor stuff first... like a plot...
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Thank you
6797380 Profanities, Demands and then please?
How could I say no to that?
6798475 I love you.
6797577
She lost consciousness, depending on numerous factors she in fact might still have plenty of time before cardiac arrest and death. Considering that she was standing and arguing beforehand, she should have pretty good chances of survival esp. since potential rescue is right here.
But in the end, whatever happens is up to the author I guess?
6798807 Plus, she is at the border of the empire, which is radiating concentrated love through the air, and is in front of the princess of love. I believe that she just lost consciousness and can be saved, she was too lovely during her speech to be too close to death.
Very nice piece, I love it when Cadance is portrayed like this, loving and caring. And I think she understands that what happened to her children after the invasion is more than enough punishment for Chrysalis.
Hoping for a sequel.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Brilliant story! Will she live, or did she give her life for her subjects? I must know the answer ^-^
BRILLIANT!
please continue!
*tilts my Furry head and thinks* COntinue Please, it would be interesting to see how this goes
Short, sad, and also sweet. I would not be opposed to seeing more of this. : )
I say let Chrysalis die just to be different from the other fics with this premise, then when all the fans rage about being unfair and how Cadence should be the bigger mare and forgiveness and all that bullshit, point out she did temporarily conquer the equine species with her army and personally abused Cadence and her soulmate.
Seriously, every fic is always, "But all that gets forgotten and Chrysalis is forgiven and redeemed and happily ever after."
... But that's just me griping. Continue!
It was short, but I loved how you wrote Chrysalis caring about each of her changelings. I'd love to read more of this. Good job!
wait thats it? it needs another chapter! like if it implies what i tihnk it implies then NOOOO! D:
still nice short story X3
72+4+5=81???
Idk.
Do continue
7123531
I haz so much dumb... fixed.
6805178
You know what? I've been thinking quite the same.
It seems to me that there is quite the number of otherwise well-written fanfics that have Celestia self-flogging about how much she's a worse monster than Chrysalis, etc. but hey, was it the Equestrians to invade and abduct the others?
And each time I read about it, the Changeling queen don't even bother to try diplomacy before going violent,
sometimes going as far as blaming the ponies because, as prejudiced as the ponies are, diplomacy would have failed, anyway.
Ah well. Sorry for the rant, once again.
I ... don't know what to say.
Many times have I wished Chrysalis to fail in her nefarious endeavours,
yet I've never wished her to die or her race to go extinct.
Even distrustful of Changelings as I can be,
it makes me sad to see such calamities falling onto them.
Chrysalis, don't go....
Well I'm not sure if I want continuation or not because right now its very good end, you don't know is she is trully death or not etc
Very short but not bad
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Honestly I hate this fic type not because they forgive her, but because chrysalis goes and begs them. jesus fucking christ there is little more insulting to her character than have her resort to blase begging. she is a master manipulator. This is like being a charismatic politician and just standing on the side of a road with a sign that says "please gib moneyz"
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People beg when they know they're beat. A manipulator is a glass cannon. When in their element, with all the cards in their hand and not yours, they are extremely powerful.
When you've flipped the table over, thrown their cards on the ground, pissed on them, and then slapped them about the face and shoulders until they're crying in a corner, a manipulator is weak, all their lies and drama and bullshit exposed for what it is, they have nothing and can do nothing.
A person who can do nothing for themselves and has to rely on mercy from whoever de-fanged them can only beg and hope for the best. This is what it means to be captured. To be helpless.
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wrong, chrysalis presumably spent a LONG LONG time ruling in WORSE circumstances, a place like equestria so full of love is unheard of or imaginable to her. She is better than this and you are making up excuses to put her low like she's a regular person just because she lost one angle. She can appear as anyone, go anywhere, knows the tricks to get people to turn on one another, at minimum she can do more than get on her hands and knees and fucking beg, why not for example, ask celestia for a small favor, one of the most classic manipulation points. maybe even hide her real identity when asking for it. but no, because you can't imagine how manipulation works, you cannot imagine a scenario can occur where the manipulator doesn't need some kind of full hand to win the pot.
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A post like this is how one spots an angry child. Getting upset over something that doesn't concern their personal fortunes, poor attitude, ad hominem to throw around freely, and then openly making assumptions about something and someone they don't have any information on.
I would have entertained any opinion if presented civilly, herp. Because discussion is what we do here, bandying about ideas and viewpoints... for fun. But you just had to lash out pointlessly, petulantly. Embarrassingly, even. So I will not be continuing any such line of discussion. Enjoy your day.
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You seem to have nothing to post but a responding to tone fallacy, flailing wildly wont get you anywhere when all you're doing is detracting from the substance of the argument you fool. It most certainly wouldn't be fair to ignore your other fallacies, since you've strawmanned me with so many falsely
Appeal to age
Emotional appeal: mind your own beeswax get off my lawn
responding to tone,
responding to tone, Cherry picking, and finally
big lie technique, repeating false information over and over to attempt to discredit the fact that my post does have content and arguement to it that you are ignoring
Your entire post does nothing but act in opposition to your stated goal, to have a discussion, you claim you aren't interested in having one if it is not civil, but show you are incapable of accepting criticism while blithley handing it out in spades, all in a manner that obscures the truth no less.
well this was bloody amazing