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Having moved to the town of Ponyville per an assignment by her mentor, Princess Celestia, at the end of the summer before her junior year of high school, Twilight Sparkle seemed out of place, acing all of her classes but also receiving ridicule from several other students. However, they may have take a step back after several events occur a month into her junior year.

[Yu-Gi-Oh adaptation, follows most of FiM's plot to a point. Rated Teen for violence, swearing, some sexual references, referenced drug use, and dark content. Has winged and horned humanization.]

Chapters (44)
Comments ( 76 )

While I always enjoy a good Yu-Gi-Oh crossover, you really need to work on your pacing. Everything's just flying by.

This is based off the Japanese version of the beginning of yugioh. Didn't expect that but it is interesting but like the other guy said a tad rushed through.

Wow. Interesting. Wonder when the secret will be out.

That was dark as fuck man. Really!?!? Having rds dad just up and die for no stated reason??? Hope there's a good reason for that otherwise i can already hear some others bring that up :unsuresweetie:

Kinda short for a chapter.

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Actually, I do know how to. What do you need?

7060125 I want to know if this story will be as lengthy as as the first Yu-Gi-Oh! anime. How long will it be?

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Well, the plan is to mostly follow the manga's storyline, with a variety of changes here and there. The first series (Season 0) follows the first 59 chapters of the Manga. The second series (Duel Monsters) focuses on everything from Duelist Kingdom and beyond, with some stuff from before adapted and changed around as well.

This (hopefully) will adapt the first 59 chapters of the Manga, the Duelist Kingdom, Battle City, and Virtual World arcs of Duel Monsters, Yu-Gi-Oh R (a spinoff manga that takes place after Battle City), the Orichalcos and KC Grand Prix anime-only arcs of Duel Monsters, the Reshef of Destruction storyline from the eponymously-titled Yu-Gi-Oh game, and finally the Millennium World arc, in that order. I will also throw in adaptations of MLP story arcs/episodes in as well.

As you can see, I have my work cut out for me.

This chapter IS THE WORSE ONE EVER!

It's overly short, seems hardly any effort was put into the chapter, seems lazy lazy writing, the scenes betweent he Killer and Rarity and Fluttershy was....Pathic.
Wasn't any supense, or excitement, and ...POUNDS face into wall over and over.....I thinking of giving up reading any more updates, all that waiting and....this is what you came up, ....Breaks my heart.

Think you need to make these chapters a bit longer.

Is this going to continue? Because I think it's really good!:twilightsmile:

NICE incorpiratinaing the elements into exodia the forbidden one i loved the look of his card in the anime but not in the manga. escpecially his monster attack is just beautiful

The duel looks like a retelling of the kaiba yugi fight.

NICE you decided to name her the sun goddess oh well i am alright with the cards bbut seriosly come on 5 cards yes and then theirs the issue inside my head

I don't have much to say. Just this-
:pinkiehappy:

ah yes iknow the reson the fact that twilight ends up losing 3 of his five monsters to form the sun goddess

to some bastard named weevil throws them overboard which is a dick move when our other hero loyalty jumps in and grabs two card before she's saved from drowning

im sorry is this a crossover of YuGiOh or fucking saw

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As they say, Yugioh was the original Saw. This story is mostly derived from the manga and Season 0.

Well Luna going to be tearng herself apart for all she done. Nearly killing her sister, getting Dash's Father killed, and the kidnappings and torture, and how she treated her own student.
I wodner if she going to lose her company as well.

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We may never know, or we will find out next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

Hmm.... look promesing, I wonder what the rest is like

Ah i wish that could be me. Lird knows my fam could use 10 mill.

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10 million bits is equivalent to 1.25 million US dollars.

7463576 still would be way more then we have now bro. Could actually buy a decent house somewhere and maybe a car out right.

Huh. Never heard of clock solitare.

So, uh, I got some plans for the rest of the story. Now, spoilers are technically ahead, but since this is a story based off of Yugioh, if you've watched it before, they won't matter.

I'll finish the 2-parter with Mythic Diamond soon. After that, we'll jump into a 2-part story about Rainbow Dash, and then a 3-parter about Rarity and the Alicorn Ring.

After that, all future chapters will be referred to as "Duelist: Part #," to coincide with the English adaptation of the manga. I plan on covering Duelist Kingdom, Dungeon Dice Monsters, Battle City and Yugioh R (a spinoff manga series) under Duelist.

Reshef of Destruction (a REALLY good Yugioh video game), the Doma arc, and the KC Grand Prix will be covered under the title New Challengers.

The Shadow Board RPG and the Ceremonial Battle will be covered under Millennium World.

And yes, Mythic Diamond is related to Sunset Shimmer. And yes, Sunset Shimmer will be in Marik's place.

iv like it and am a fan now cotinue writing

Will you write a small aftermath on this story say th cops taking them away or maybe Rainbow paying them back thruthe leader messing him up so bad, he begs to be taken by the cops.
Leaving a message for the rest never to mess with her.

Was kinda short. Considering it was a continuation.

Your last paragraph is still on italics

Kinda bs. How they all just dropped like that.

7813664 I call bs on four if them rolling a 00/99

7814376 Two words: Shadow game. When are those ever fair? Or legit?

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And the fun is just getting started.

7814376 That happened because Rarity is cheating! What did you think evil spirits play fair?

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