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Years have passed since Radiant Hope last saw Sombra, their parting words something she'd never forget.

Since then, Hope dedicates much of her life to piecing together the puzzle of why Sombra turned out the way he did in between the secret experiments she conducts with her new and mysterious friend, Nickel. And after countless trials and tests, she finally has an experiment which may reveal some answers.

However, when Nickel learns about the experiments Hope performed behind the scenes, he has a few questions to ask her. And Hope uncovers something much more shocking outside of her experiments.


Based on "Fiendship is Magic #1" of the official comics. Originally written for the Writeoff under the pseudonym "Flying Fish."

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nicely done. this was pretty amazing. granted, i think the curse was just the whole of the empire being in stasis for that long, but it might just be a curse. i did have one drawback: not enough nickel.

6637121 That's one way of looking at the curse. And I'll be sure to keep in mind everything I've learned working on this story. Anyway, thank you for reading it and for commenting. I appreciate it. :pinkiesmile:

I haven't read Fiendship is Magic, but after reading this, I don't think I need to to understand the characters. Really sweet characterisation, and smooth plot. :coolphoto:

6638085 Yeah, the concept for the story was in my head for quite some time. It was only when the Writeoff rolled around that I decided to turn that idea into a story. And Nickel was an original supporting character I devised for the story. :pinkiesmile:

Regardless, it was fun working on it and playing with different possibilities. Anyway, thank you for reading the story. I appreciate it! :twilightsmile:

I've personally figured that her healing magic worked on Radiant Hope as well as other ponies, thus granting her immortality akin to that of Wolverine.

But hey, whatever works for your stuff is fine. Good story.

6640750 I could definitely see that also being the case. It'd be quite the impressive ability as well and tie into her cutie mark. :pinkiesmile:

Anyway, thank you for looking at the story. I highly appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

Will this ever go past a one-shot?

6907660 I might do something in the future that serves as a sequel of sorts, though nothing is set in stone yet. If I do expand on it, it'd probably focus primarily on this version of Radiant Hope. Anyway, thank you for checking out the story. I highly appreciate it! :pinkiesmile:

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It was good.

I shrugged. "Maybe. Their true forms are supposed to be even rarer than sighting a breezie."

That's not rare...

Not:raritydespair: crying

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