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DreamWings


A girl so bad at writing she took to learning how to write at University. How'm I doing so far? Yeah, I know-- I'm working on it, I promise.

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I can't have been the only one who thought that this was what was actually going to be the result of who ate the marzipan marscapone Meringue madness. So I decided to write a sort of alternate ending to the show...

And chucked Poirot in there for a bit of a laugh.

Hope you enjoy, mystery lovers (and lovers of cake of course).

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I would call them poneys as cheval is technically horse, but whatever works for you.

697822 Yeah I know that cheval means horse and not pony, I just decided that Poirot sounded more like himself when he said cheval (it shows the language difference). But thanks for noticing :twilightsmile:

Alright, then that makes sense

699060 Glad we've cleared it up. You seemed to like my latest parody though, so thanks. :pinkiehappy:

No problem! When I know the song, I really enjoy your parodies! :twilightsmile:

699069 Any idea's for the song I should do next? (choosing a Disney one will probably be your safest bet as I know most of them) :twilightsheepish:

Hmmm....Oh! What about In a World of My Own from Alice in Wonderland but called With A Mark of My Own about one or all of the ponies getting their cutie marks?

699081 I'll have a go :pinkiehappy:

It's ironic, my mom's been watching Poirot for days on end, so I have a perfect frame of reference for this fic.

It was hard to write a review of this story because I didn’t like it but can’t exactly tell why that’s the case. It’s not a bad story but it feels like everything is happing to fast and that there's something missing.

That Pinkie had sleep-eaten the cake was my first guess in that episode, too. Still I don’t like that it starts with “It was just a dream”. It feels a bit cheap.
Also Pinkie immediately forgets the whole lesson of the dream and accessed Fluttershy, RD and Rarity without any clue. Sure stuff like that happens in the show, too, but at least it’s not the same Episode.

Another thing is that the suspects start crying because of Pinkie’s accusation. Sure I maybe could buy that Fluttershy starts crying but Rarity or Rainbow Dash? Especially Dash wouldn’t cry because of such a trivial matter and more likely gets outrageous and loudly denies the accusation.

Nice story. I like. :pinkiehappy:

808795 Hmm...favourite? I like quite a lot of them really but thus far I like the short story Hercule Poirot and the adventures of the Christmas pudding...I really love Agatha Christie books...at the minute I've just started And then there were none.

Also my favourite Doctor Who episode was The Unicorn and the Wasp, woohoo

809390 I love the songs from Princess and the Frog. Next song is Won't say I'm in love as requested by Kartal. I'll do Princess and the Frog after that, might try and make a storyline out of all of the songs in the film. You know like give them all the same characters, some storyline and write all of the songs for it, what you think? (Also if you check out My Little Disney on YouTube they've got PMV's that go through the whole film, they're brilliant) :rainbowwild:

809473 Yep, that's who I mean. I love his PMV's, I'm a subscriber. What do you think about the whole lot of songs idea? Do you think I should give it a go?

809514 Is that a yes or a no? Big Mac saying nothing to me, nope

Not bad, not bad. An enjoyable little read. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of a ponyfied Poirot in more than simply a cameo-esque drop in.

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