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  • E Poker Night at the Boutique

    You play poker with Rarity, Medic, Mr. Foster, and Strong Bad (again). Then you come back and play another poker game.
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  • T Of Ponies and Papers

    A portal to Equestria opens on Arstotzka's border, and you now have to deal with pony immigrants along with the usual mix.
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  • T Interdimensional Transfusion

    Sequel to Mission: Improbable starring the Scout.
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  • T Lost Little Snake

    Naked Snake escapes from captivity in Groznyj Grad, only to find out that he's not quite in Russia anymore.
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  • T Pony Floor, or "How We Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Dosh"

    A Killing Floor game unfolds in Ponyville, much to the inhabitants' horror and confusion. Also, nopony is hurt because reasons.
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  • T Doom: Hell in Equestria

    After destroying Hell, Doomguy tries to go back home, but ends up in Equestria.
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  • T An Eque$trian Payday

    A group of robbers end up at ground zero of Earth and Equestria having portals opening between them. The robbers blend in with the crowd and bide their time; at least, until they decide that Equestria has some nifty things to steal...
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  • T Chambered

    After a spell apparently does nothing, Twilight wakes up in a completely different place, with a gun, some bullets, a tape deck, headphones, and a horde of killer robots coming after her.
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  • 12w, 5d
    A little announcement for an upcoming story

    "But The card holder," I hear you already commenting, "you still have like five stories you have yet to update!"

    Eh.

    Anyway, me and a friend (who is also on here, so you might've heard of him. Or not.) are going to collab together to write a fic. Naturally, it's yet another crossover.

    What is it a crossover with, you might ask?

    That's a secret.

    I can say, though, that, assuming we both do our job, the end result will be quite wonderful.

    That probably wasn't very subtle, but whatever

    So look forward to that in the near(?) future.

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It had been about a month since the changeling incident in Canterlot. Everypony is on edge, because stray changelings keep popping up here and there, trying to blend in with the population. Everyone worries that one of their closest friends, or even their family, could not be who they appear to be. But what happens when a pony isn't really that pony...

...but they're not a changeling, either?

First Published
20th Aug 2012
Last Modified
24th Nov 2012
#1 · 113w, 3d ago · 2 · · The Exposition Chapter ·

I'm beginning to think the only things I can write are crossovers. :unsuresweetie:

Still, this idea has been cooking in my mind for a while, and I finally decided to write it so the voices in my head would shut up. :pinkiecrazy:

Also, the French was done in Google Translate, so please forgive any errors there.

#2 · 113w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

Dear god, that's an epic one-liner. Following this.

#3 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

nice i need MOAR and they need to be LONGER PLESE:pinkiecrazy:

#4 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

Very nice, very nice!:scootangel:

#6 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

A bit short... but I like it.

#7 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

Well, I like what you have so far.  It's interesting, and a fun read.  The only thing that really bugged me was how often you slip between tenses; pick either present or past and then stick with it.

#8 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

Thumbed/Faved. :pinkiehappy:

Write more. Now. *cracks whip*

#9 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

As said, watch out for your tenses, you're slipping between past and present.

Otherwise, I'm interested.

#10 · 113w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1119148 Yeah, very few better revolver shooting one liners. Only beaten by the New Vegas Intro

"From where your standing, this must seem like a stroke of bad luck, but in realality, the game was rigged from the start" BANG

#11 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1119263 Seems like its 95% past tense. Honestly I didn't even notice that until you mentioned it.

#13 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

Hmm...I'll be watching this closely...

#14 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

That pony is a spai!!!!!

#15 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

I love most TF2/MLP crossovers (if it weren't for one, I'd still hate this show). My only problem is your use of present tense: I don't like it.

Beyond that, I am very much looking forward to the rest of this story.

#16 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

My attention has been obtained.

#17 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

You have my attention for a brief moment. Don't waste it.

#19 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1119191 That gif made me lawl :D

#20 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

I can already tell this is gonna be good just by the sheer fact that it was written by you.

I do like the touch of French you put in there, but might I ask that you put the translation somewhere? Like maybe at the end of the chapter or in a comment?

#21 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

This is good, I shall not send hitmen. UNLESS YOU DON'T CONTINUE!

#22 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1120772

In that case, the French used there was something along the lines of "Until we meet face to face, I'll be watching."

I'll probably think of a way to make more French usage more convenient.

#23 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

Pfft, what, ANOTHER TF2 Crossover? You know, this site is getting filled wit-

*sees it's spy-only*

Proceed.

#24 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1123420

Don't worry. French student-ness has its benefits :twilightsmile:

I know basics through "Subject Object Verb" sentences.

#26 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1120772 Oh, cuz it was SO hard to paste it in google translate... :facehoof:

#27 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1125527 When I read a story, I don't want to break the immersion by having to stop reading, pop open another tab, and highlight and copypasta the text into the translator. Even having a translation in parenthesis following the dialogue (which is what I did in my story when it briefly  turned Spanish) is better than that in my opinion, and I just wanted to let The Card Holder have some of the delicious constructive criticism he so desperately desires.

Do you feel me, dawg?

#28 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1125691 lol yea, but if that's the case, then no translation would be better. Translating it would besically nullify the effect of it being in french in the first place.

Know what I mean, dawg?

#29 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Exposition Chapter ·

>>1126662 I getchya, bro. To each his own opinion.

#30 · 113w, 1d ago · 1 · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

You guys wanted longer chapters, so I delivered.

#31 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

what about heavy, spy was the only one who could put up a good fight in a sparring match with him

#32 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

Awww, that's bullshit. I love the spy. He is the best class.

#33 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

I love it so much, it motivated me to actually register to feedback. Keep it coming!

#34 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

So much fun, so I read it twice.

#35 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

:pinkiehappy: I enjoy every second of this chapter. Please keep up the epic work.

#36 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

I was anticipating that they'd be busy fighting robots.

Then again, that is a ridiculously far time into the future.

#38 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

lol so was Applejack still concious? They're gonna have one hell of a morning!

This chapter, I LIKE IT!

ANOTHER!

#39 · 113w, 1d ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

This is going to be good, looking forward to more.

#40 · 113w, 23h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

I can't believe he ended the party early... the story all I can do Is nothing and read. Like a sentry in TF2 I only fire when ready.

#41 · 113w, 23h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

"None of the mane 6 dared to sleep with the light off ever again" cant wait to know the next to be trolled!

#43 · 113w, 22h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

Thx you so much :pinkiehappy:

#44 · 113w, 21h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

Ah scaring ponies as the HHH..... The horesman would be proud.....

#45 · 113w, 20h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

I would have so much fun as the Spy. Especially the Spy in Equestria.

Good job for making me now have to imagine Spy crawling around on all fours and pretending to cower in fear behind ponies' backs.

#46 · 113w, 17h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

GREAT NOW MOAR!:flutterrage:

#47 · 113w, 12h ago · · · Sleepover Sabotage ·

The good old Spy, he's everywhere and nowhere, but always with his good knife.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

#48 · 113w, 21s ago · · · Prologue ·

That lyre is a spy!

'Bout time, too.

Man, I love making those things.

Last bit is MvM in a nutshell xD

Awesome fic :pinkiesmile:

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