in a mall towel

I think this is supposed to be "small". You've no idea where a mall towel has been. And you should ALWAYS know where your towel is!

He definitely couldn't go hone

Although it *would* keep him sharp...

whatever ot is,

this is 'it', right?

Sorry to nitpick, the story's so good that these kinda caught my eye as distractions.

7160822 Ah geez, I usually reread and proofread before posting, but I was just so glad to be done with it xD I'll fix those soon.
EDIT: Fixed ^^ Thank you lol

I'm putting it on watch not in a reading mood right now.

7545877 Just let me know what you think when you do get around to it ^^

7547162 will do should be reading it tonight!

Dang i found this story a few years ago and it’s been sitting in my read later forever. I’m glad that I finally got around to reading it. Awesome story, awesome conflict, awesome ship! my only regret is that it hasn’t been updated in quite a while. Take your time though bronyman I understand life can be hard to deal with and that finding motivation to write can be extremely difficult to find. Have a nice day/night/afternoon?? Idk it’s almost 2 in the morning and I’m starting to get loopy so I’ll leave it at that lol

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Holy crap, I didn't realize it had been two years since I last updated o.o; I'm even more surprised to find a comment so recent 💜 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wish I could say with any amount of certainty that this would continue at some point, but I got stuck on what to do next (I've got a vague outline for the rest of the story, but fleshing out the scenes is another matter entirely) and in two years I've made exactly zero progress on that front ;w; Do fave and follow me and all that so you'll get an alert on the off chance it does happen though!

not bad...